Ohhh very cutesy. Hmm. I'd change the dark pointy head things with something else that's dark. Would a headband work right? Or you could try adding more stuff under the head scarf thingy. Maybe another skirt under that dress? I like it otherwise, really pretty ^_^ 8/10

Looks elvish to me. Haha
I don't really see any problems with it, though. Other then maybe something for the [avatar's] right hand. To give it a little more color?

8/10

ninja'd

i think it needs more brown on the head and the feet it match the brown on your chest and in your hand.

you still look very incomplete and its pretty generic as is because of the dominance of black and white.

5/10

Whoa. Funky-tastic, BSW. I love the contrast and the variety, it does its job of keeping the onlooker's attention, and while it could be a little confusing due to everything involved in it, I think that overall it's pretty darn sweet. I'd give it an 8/10.

To whomever rates mine: yes, yes, I know it's dull. I'm trying to fix that. XD Not enough gold, not quick enough!

Good start But like you said it's a bit dull XD If you wanna stick with the yellow/burgundy theme then add a bit of creme or brown in there to bring it out a bit more. Something on your head would work pretty well too Try to avoid blacks 'cause they might make your avi look a bit too dark, and they won't stand out against the burgundy

4/10

I like it, it just seems way too cluttered.
But I like the theme and colors you have going there.
7/10

Purple and Red aren't the best together, but I think you do a good job. A scarf would really make it pop though, like to make it out more out, y'know?
Totally 8/10.

i like it but you need the teal around your waist and hands to balance out the heavy teal on the head and the bottom.

8.9/10

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I know mine isnt much to rate

Kinda skimpy, not much to rate, as you said. Not a lot of contrast, either. I'd recommend you keep working on it.

At the moment, I'd really give it a 2/10. But if you keep working on it, it'll be better in no time.

It's pretty cute, but the cape, headband and face area don't really fit. It's like you're tryig to mix a casual look with a regal look. I'd suggest removing the cape and hairband, adding the bee umbrella and either closing the eyes or making them black. Also, you might want to make the hair black, yellow or red, but you'll have to decide once you've added the umbrella.
6/10

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The eyes are that color, because that's the color of my eyes. Same thing with the hair. And the mix of casual and more elegant is based off of my own style.

Thanks for the tips, though.

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@Briannamal- Your avvie is quite gorgeous. The colours seem to flow wonderfully all the way through. I am unsure of however, of that cloth that passes through your legs. The main reason being that I'm not entirely sure what it is, or if the layering isn't exactly proper, although it does match in terms of color. The other thing is that heart wand in your hand. I think it's throwing me off because of the silver along the handle, although the pink in the heart def contributes to your outfit. Perhaps a smaller hand accessory would do wonders as well :]
9/10

whlie your avatar is super cute, i must critique it. the pop doesnt really match, but i think you can make it match by adding some hints of blue throughout the outfit. i think this would also add to your avatars spunk. the use of the scarf makes the tail look like it is coming out of your leg which is strange but i suppose there is not much you can do about it unles you remove the scarf. i think the leg warmers are also very bulky and limiting your outfit.

still it is cute so 6/10

It needs white to the bottom, try seeing if there are any floor items that can help you out ((does the v'day blankie come in white?) it looks so much better with the raven wings tohugh 8/10