Thread: For the Love of OC!- Let's talk Writing (now public)
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zeapear
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Old 01-28-2013, 02:29 AM
This is more technical than anything else, but in you character profile in the last sentence of the 'ancestry' section I think you used the wrong form of 'than'.
Apart from that it sounds good to me. :)