^.^ I love it! Each paragragh flows very well, although I don't always follow your transition from paragraph to paragraph(Some of it seemed intentional though so that just might be me.). <---We Should Be Thankful

Your post in Spanish makes me wish that I had remembered the little Spanish I took in fourth and sixth grade.

As for your earlier story, beautiful. I would love it to continue, but of course if I had my way no story would ever end...