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Ah... Hello Again.

Ah... Hello Again.

Posted 10-29-2009 at 03:20 PM by Skullushka
Updated 11-02-2009 at 09:13 PM by Skullushka (The rest of the poem...)
[COLOR="DarkRed"][SIZE="3"][FONT="Cambria"]To love you is to love a stream,
with as much coherence as a deaf man,
for holding you is akin to cradling a dream,
one I cannot see and cannot hope to stand.
With as much fluidity as a toddler, I command,
torrid words and baited breath,
there is but one I cannot reprimand;
a man by the purest of names, Seth.


I've gotten lazy with poetry... I can't even finish this sonnet correctly without it sounding like melodramatic romantic trash. I can't do anything by pure method anymore... I'll try being content with the feeling... If this ever ends, I may die. Forgive me for being so weak...
I'd forgotten this place for a while during all the commotion of moving in with my boyfriend... Apologies are in order, I suppose. I'm sorry...

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I hope our love won't be as tragic as Macbeth's,
but just as passionate, as fevered. as strong,
to even endure something as timeless as death,
and I pray for us to be as everlong.
Onward, when our life's embers dim,
here I'll be, holding your hand, still following your every whim.
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Old Comment Posted 11-01-2009 at 07:11 AM
*giggles* well...think what you want, but I love this poem. I like it when you get like that. I don't think it's sappy romantic trash. *is quite the romantic himself* I wouldn't have it any other way <3 *kisses*
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Old Comment Posted 11-01-2009 at 07:14 AM
[SIZE="2"][COLOR="DarkRed"][FONT="Cambria"]Well, in that case...I may let you see the next two verses...[/FONT][/COLOR][/SIZE]
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Old Comment Posted 11-01-2009 at 07:57 AM
<3 oh really? I'd like that.
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