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[CENTER][COLOR="green"][SIZE="1"][FONT="Arial"]All that will be posted in here are the two stories i'm working on, the first few ones will be my new one, "[I]Our Time in Paris[/I]" and following them, will be my older story, "[I]Neiako[/I]." [B]please comment on whatcha think ![/B] =3.[/FONT][/SIZE][/COLOR][/CENTER]
| Neiako chapter 9 | Neiako chapter 9 [CENTER][COLOR="Green"][FONT="Arial"][SIZE="4"]Chapter 9: Memory Loss[/SIZE]
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Hirouku quickly ran to her side, he knelt down and lifted her head up a little, and softly shook her trying to wake her. "Kari! Kari!" he constantly said while slightly shaking her. After a few moments, she still hadn't woken up, so he quickly rushed her to the hospital. As soon as he got there Hirouku had made a phone call to Yumi-san and Rio-kun. And they both quickly rushed over as soon as they could. Shortly after he called, Rio-kun got to the hospital. Right after he got there, the Doctor had stepped into the room, he looked at both guys, and asked them where her parents are, just then Yumi-san had arrived "Ahh. Here I am!" she answered panting. "wh-what h-happened to my da-daughter?" she rushingly asked, still short of breath. He waited a moment before he spoke. The three of them stood there in anticipation waiting for his answer. "Apparently, you're daughter, has suffered minor memory loss, due to tremendous stress, I suggest she spend the night so she can have a better recovery." "Alright then..." Yumi replied to him, still in a little shock. "Mm. come on auntie, I’ll take you home." Hirouku said walking Yumi-san out. The next day Kari was able to go to school, so Hirouku and Rio had went to the Hospital to go pick her up. When they got there, she was getting her stuff prepared. She turned around and noticed them. But she had a confused look on her face, because she hadn't remembered who they were. "Ahhhh...excuse me, but who are you..?" she asked both of them confusingly. Both their faces had saddened because she hadn't remembered them, though they did expect it. They didn't answer her, but instead they told her they were to take her to school. Feeling a little awkward, she agreed. And the three of them headed for school. Just as they got there the bell had rang and they quickly ran to class. When they got into class everyone was staring at her. Somehow they all found out about what had happened to her. She felt even more awkward as they all stared at her. The day felt really long, and everything was so confusing for her. The next day, she had lay in bed all day thinking about the previous day. She was still ever-so confused about everything. Just then the doorbell had rang, she didn't seem to hear it because she was still deep in thought. Soon after Yumi-san was calling her to come down. But she still hadn't heard anything because she was still deeply in thought. Just then Yumi-san screamed at the top of her lungs "KARI-CHAN!!" just then Kari had jumped out of her bed as she heard her mothers loud scream. She rushed down stairs. And as soon as she came down she noticed a tall, very beautiful, blonde-haired girl at her door step. As soon as she seen her, a sudden feeling as if she'd known her before came upon Kari. "Ahh. Kari Chan! There you are, ohh, I’m sorry, let me introduce myself, I'm Yui." she said politely. "Mmm. I was wondering...do you think we could go for walk and have a chat about something?" she hesitantly had asked Kari. "Ahh. sure." she replied. Kari looked back at Yumi-san, and knowingly she nodded at Kari. And they walked out the door. A few blocks down almost near the park, they stopped. Yui-san looks intensely at her, and suddenly asked her if she had remembered her at all. She shook her head and told her about her memory loss. "Ahh. I see. Well, would you like to know?" she asked Kari with a grin on her face. She was a little hesitant but nodded. Just then Yui had jumped in front of Kari, tilted her head slightly to the side, and whispered in her ear.[/FONT][/COLOR][/CENTER][/SIZE] | | Comments | | Total Comments Comments | No comments have been made yet |
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