;D

I don't like fish either. It's mushy, most kinds don't taste good, and then you have to deal with all the little bones.... Euck!

Amen! Just nasty for me. >____<
One time I bought one of those bags of green beans that you cook in the bag in the microwave. When I went to go eat it, it tasted like fish and smelled like fish. I almost threw up. D:

D:
but but

I need to clean my room. It's a mess again. And it smells like mango in here. D:

i wanna mango :gonk:

Have them all! They're evil!
I like 'em too much that they make me sick. :(

Now I'm eating a Kiwi!

mango here cost me about 2 dollar per each :gonk:

They are pretty expensive. I bought about five and they cost me about $1.79 each.

i knoe :gonk: back in darwin i can get them for free :cry:

FREE?! Seriously? o-o

D: yes
there is this mango tree at university where mum and dad always pick mango from that tree and come home with two shopping bags full of mango

Wow. I bet those lasted you a long while. I would definitely get sick of them soon, lol.

they taste sweet i can eat about 6 or probably more since mango is one of my fav fruits

That's quite a lot. Takes me forever just to eat one, lol.

-puts more to your mouth-
>D

Don't make me vomit all over you! :illgetu:

why will you vomit?-act innocent-

Got sick from eating too much mango earlier.
dun need more. :talk2hand:

JENNIFER. D:
I can't fix this last paragraph.
I edited it some::

With the applications available on the iPod Touch, you can even make the GPS obsolete in your vehicle, saving you money and time. By eliminating the use for paper based objects such as an address book, calendar, notepad, and even photo albums, this device can also assist the cause of saving the environment, which is a primary concern in today’s paperless world. Also, when one has the iPod Touch and a wi-fi access point, there really is not a need to carry around a laptop, adding to the amazing abilities of this little piece of technology. Personally, I believe that the iPod is an excellent way to save important dates, write notes, and calculate prices and things of that matter when it comes to the real world. It would be interest to see how I could function without a device such as the iPod touch, especially when there are so many things to keep up with in a world such as this.

fine i wont give you more but gimme your duckie for my meal >D

Very good, Evan. Point very well shown! Although, still quite a few run-on sentences. :XD

Originally Posted by `F o a m

JENNIFER. D:
I can't fix this last paragraph.
I edited it some::

With the applications available on the iPod Touch, you can even make the GPS obsolete in your vehicle, saving you money and time. By eliminating the use for paper based objects such as an address book, calendar, notepad, and even photo albums, this device can also assist the cause of saving the environment, which is a primary concern in today’s paperless world. Also, when one has the iPod Touch and a wi-fi access point, there really is not a need to carry around a laptop, adding to the amazing abilities of this little piece of technology. Personally, I believe that the iPod is an excellent way to save important dates, write notes, and calculate prices and things of that matter when it comes to the real world. It would be interest to see how I could function without a device such as the iPod touch, especially when there are so many things to keep up with in a world such as this.

I know I'm butting, but don't hurt me too much. p; But I would suggest getting rid of the word "even" in the first sentence. It just sounds more concrete without it. Imo anyways.

Dammit.
quote it and bold out stuff I should change.
PLEASE. D:

@Chai~ Oo! Good idea. XD

Originally Posted by `F o a m

JENNIFER. D:
I can't fix this last paragraph.
I edited it some::

With the applications available on the iPod Touch, you can even make the GPS obsolete in your vehicle, saving you money and time. By eliminating the use for paper based objects such as an address book, calendar, notepad, and even photo albums, this device can also assist the cause of saving the environment, which is a primary concern in today’s paperless world. Also, when one has the iPod Touch and a wi-fi access point, there really is not a need to carry around a laptop, adding to the amazing abilities of this little piece of technology. Personally, I believe that the iPod is an excellent way to save important dates, write notes, and calculate prices and things of that matter when it comes to the real world. It would be interest to see how I could function without a device such as the iPod touch, especially when there are so many things to keep up with in a world such as this.

I suck at fixing run-on sentences. Ask my ninth grade English teacher. >___> But wouldn't those bolded areas count as run-ons? Just add a few semi colons and periods perhaps.