With the applications available on the iPod Touch you can help the environment or yourself. One thing that is available is the ability to make the GPS obsolete in your vehicle due to an application, saving you money and time. In today’s paperless world, objects such as an address book, calendar, notepad, and photo albums can be eliminated with a simple application. Also, when one has the iPod Touch and a wi-fi access point, there really is not a need to carry around a laptop. Personally, I believe that the iPod Touch is an excellent way to save important dates, write notes, and calculate prices and things of that matter when it comes to the real world. Living in a society that is ever changing, it is useful to have a device like that iPod Touch at your side to help you make sense of it all.


What do you think of it now? D:
You think that's a good closing sentence and all?
And do you think society fits right in the last sentence?

I don't much like the first sentence. And "due to" just sounds too odd. The end sentence isn't bad at all.

I have a question about your essay. Is this informal to a point where you can use first person? Because use "I" a couple of places.

I want to go back to high school. :(

I don't. >.< There wasn't one thing I liked about it.

I didn't like it either. But I never got to complete it either. I guess it's just that, I know I'd do a lot better in high school now. And I'd probably work harder, too. Maybe I just want some social interaction as well.

lol Hindsight is everything. x3 I wish I could go back and start from elementary. xD

Yeah. D:
I can't think of a good first sentence.. Help?! XD

And Chai, I was doing that because I had to say how I felt about it in some point in the article. ;3

I enjoyed elementary. It wasn't so bad then. I lived in a neighbor hood with a ton of kids my age. We lived by the school, supermarket, both parks and the water ditch was just down the road. We would all get together and go swimming. I'd go to school and be with my best friend Jennifer, Rose, Alana and Phillip. I remember one year I got this crayon box set. Had huge crayons, small crayons, neon, and sparkly crayons! All my friends would color with them at recess. Then we'd go over to Rose's house and jump on her trampoline. Then we'd go to my house and play on the swings and play in the yard when dad had the irrigation going.

I MISS BEING YOUNGER. ;O;

lol I love how your best friends were named Jennifer and Rose. ^_-

I liked coloring with crayons until fifth grade, then I was introduced to Prisma pencils. : 3

I don't know, Evan. I'm not great with this stuff. I suppose you don't have to alter it. Just change or to and I guess?

Chai. Haha, I know, right? I actually got back in touch with Jennifer a few weeks ago. Although, when my parents got divorced and I move, I never saw Rose again. Besides, her parents never liked me. They were a bit racist towards white people.

Okay, here is my first sentence. xD ::

Applications play a key role in the functionality of the iPod Touch.

The applications available on the iPod Touch can simplify daily tasks and help the environment. With the applications available on the iPod Touch, you can make the GPS obsolete in your vehicle, saving you money and time. Also, when you have the iPod Touch and a wi-fi access point, there is no need to carry around a laptop, adding to the amazing abilities of this little piece of technology. The iPod is an excellent way to save important dates, write notes, and calculate prices. By eliminating the use for paper-based objects such as an address book, calendar, notepad, and photo albums, this device can assist in saving the environment; a primary concern in today’s paperless world. It would be interesting to see how I could function without a device such as the iPod touch, especially when there are so many things to keep up with in a world such as this.

I played with it a little bit, but not sure if it helped or not. ^^;

Hey, I'm heading off to bed. I'm really rather tired and I'm not doing so well right now. I'll talk to you all later.

Thanks Chai~
And I'm sorry Jennifer. <3

Hi Foam :)

Jen is back!

-nudge thread-
i am done with that essay xD

Hello, everyone! Wow, that's awesome, seeing you all work together to help someone out with their assignment. Now that's teamwork :)

my friend called me out of nowhere and begged me to do his assignment which was why i took sometime off from mene Dx

I would never do someone's assignment for them, lol...I would only help them to do it. I mean, they aren't going to learn anything if they don't do the work them self. Then when it comes to exam time, they are hurting.

i am a person who finds it hard to say no :gonk:

I used to be the same way, leasfy, until I realized that by not saying no, I was actually hurting the people more in the long run, that I was supposed to be helping.

i think i will start to try that xD
cos he called me when i just arrived at home and jumped to my bed and opened mene ; - ;

Hehe, that sounds a bit annoying, though of course how could he know that :P