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/Pops in from lurking
I'd love a Platty rate. c: <3 |
YOU LURKER. *points dramatically*
Love that you're making the sash work. That thing in general is built to look imbalanced. The hair certainly helps, since it's going the other direction. Your whites and silvers match each-other well. The socks get a little light but they work well enough. Do the Japanese ones look slightly darker? Pinks are hard to match but you worked well with what we have. The chest area gets to be a little off. Basic top? I think there might be a brighter one that matches better. there might be just a bit too much black on your head starting to merge together. White tassel could help break it up, hoping it wont' get too cluttered. 9/10. Nice colors, good balance, maybe some slight tweaking. |
*plops in and sits on Platty*
Could I get a rate, please? <3 And any item suggestions you have to help improve my current avatar would be great as well. :3nod: |
Am I suddenly Sandy Claws? X'D
I think.. you need more black on your body. The hat and shoes are fairly large and need to be balanced out. Perhaps a smidge of red on your head, too. You need a black neck item and a dark purple around your neck/shoulders. The shoulder wraps are female-only, but you might be able switch genders, put one on, and then switch back? XD You could also choose slightly longer hair. You also need black and purple around your waist? You could alternatively take the purple out, which would make this easier to balance. Red hair and stockings? Also, the shorts feel out of place with the whole aqua/pirate thing you have going on. They seem too contemporary. 6/10 I like some of your previous ones better >.< |
Platty has sand in her claws now?
I wouldn't mind a platty rate either xP |
Can Hime get a Platty rate too? :D
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:drool:
I mean, yes. o.e! I pretty much love this XD Maybe the tiniest bit of silver on the arms neck would be my only issue. I never knew that hair could look "pretty" xD 9.5/10 |
Plattty~ <3
Did the tassel help this avatar any? Or do I just look overcluttered? xD |
I think it keeps your head area from getting too dark. Speaking of clutter, I got rated down for the amount of items I like to wear again o.e
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Thanks Platty :D
Yes I felt my arms to be a bit bare since I got this outfit on :D I wonder if there's anything silver or maybe, blue/purple (in that particular shade then) I tried the moonlit bracers, but there a bit 'meh' to me |
Aw, I thought about suggesting those. I don't really use them myself since my arms tend to be covered by something or other o.e Having trouble with my OWN arms, at the moment. XD
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Poor platty, I think you make alot of items look nice
I think you missed my post o.0 Can I get a rate? |
@ Platty - Loving your new colour combo. :drool:
The purples flow really well. c: |
Oops, sorry D8
I think most of it is really nice. If you want to incorporate dark green, get rid of the fishnets and yellow stockings, and maybe use dark green stockings and yellow shorts? you have enough yellow to balance out well enough, I just think that what's missing is that extra shade of green you've started incorporating nicely. It will also move you away from looking too much like a set. The doll doesn't match but I can see why it's there. Some blood, perhaps? XDDD I'm so cruel o.e Is there a yellow cutie scarf, by any chance? Or a small yellow neck item? I feel like that's the only place you don't have something bright. 7/10 And thank you, silver <3 |
Tee hee, I could get rid of the dolly. I was actually going for the little girl playing dress up but I look more just monster xP
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That happens with Godzilla-like items XD Digging the dark green stockings <3
I'm trying to see if I can think of a way to make this more childish.. I feel like yours walks that fine line between theme and balance but..I wonder if adding another toy would help at all? |
Perhaps, I think I may have a few toys laying around from when I did baby mayor.
I think it would probably look better without the toy xP |
It was pretty funny, though XDD
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RAWR *shakes doll incassently*
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You must have killed her! XD
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yup and now I will eat her *nom nom*
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How was she? XD
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She tasted yummy ^.^
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Hey, is this umbrella too dark to work? It's annoying me. >_>
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MM..I have mixed feelings about it. It kind of works with your outfit, mostly theme-wise. The color is barely close enough, though. It does feel a bit unfitting to me.
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