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woohoohelloppl 11-14-2009 09:27 PM

WINNNDDDYYYYY!
Could you rate my current avatar and this?

http://i26.tinypic.com/29ctmif.jpg


OHHH.
And this fail MAC.
http://i33.tinypic.com/qx9mo7.png
Psst.
I borrowed ideas for the head from you. D:

Synthetika 11-14-2009 10:55 PM

Will you rate me please :)

Winter Wind 11-14-2009 11:08 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Marquisse (Post 1765642910)
What the heck I'll take a rate. I haven't been on Mene very long so this is my first go at an avi! Ahh I know it needs work....


7/10
It's a bit messy.
@[email protected]
Wayyy too much stuff going on, haha.
I think you can get rid of the lantern; the pixels from the glow really add distractions and confusions.
Maybe try a red headband, distribute the red a bit on the head. :]
I'd say a red neck bandana, so you can balance out the reds. Then try a red space skirt, it's a brilliant way to add some red in the middle. ORRR, you can go for a red belt. But I think the skirt is cuter. :3
I'm a layer freak, so those biggg chunky black boots are a no-no. xD;;
I'd much rather something like black stockings, red socks, green shoes (match the green on the coffin), and dove anklewings (CI item).


Quote:

Originally Posted by Cora Lorington (Post 1765642941)
lol, I'm surprised they didn't winter o.0

at first I was confused but then I couldn't help but to continue to look at the idea of it...it was soo unusual...reminds me of like the really old movies where everything is in black and white but every once in a while something has that tiny pop of color.

As for the plum, it makes me sad that there is not more items in that color as it is one of my favorites....I fear most of my favorites are like that.....teal....the bright blue in the space set....lavander....but then it also makes for more of a challenge.

And the cookie...it because I'm happy I got one xP its my first NPC item...given by my favorite NPC xP
I've been a vicky stalker since before the NPC's items xP

Thanks for the rate dear xP

No problemmm. <3

Yeaa...I rather do love the plum, but the layer freak inside me screams no when I try to buy some, since I can't balance it out well. T_T

Oooh, same! ^^
The strawberry one is my favorite though. x3 Something about a green booger cookie scares me. xD <3


Quote:

Originally Posted by aphrodite remix (Post 1765643027)
Thankies, and to address a few issues, I thought I had the beads on both sides, but on closer inspection you're right but I did mean to have on each side. And I was debating the black pouch as well, so its good to hear that you were thinking that as well.

I love that hairstyle and never use it, but after you mentioned it I can tell more now that it is a different color between the wig and the hair color so a shorter style does make sense. The cutie scarf is a good idea, only reason I didn't have a black necklace to separate the peach face from the peach shirt is because part of the hair comes down but its a good suggestion and something I will probably change.

Thanks for the rate, very helpful :3

Glad you found it helpful! ^^

Quote:

Originally Posted by Eastriel (Post 1765646163)
Go for it, gimme a rate.

Ooooooooooh creative. :3
8/10

I like how you're using all the rainbow colors, butttttt you have some rather big chunks of color.
Such as that red bandana. @[email protected]
It's wayyyyyyy too much, considering the rest of your avi has little strips of color.
I don't know many red headpieces...
But what you could also do, is get rid of that headband, use a red headband, put a Chicky on My Head (Easter o7). Or maybee a yellow butterfly pin. :]

Then for your neck, try a yellow cutie scarf. :3
Then perhaps a red butterfly pin; you need some more red there.
A solid belt would look better - I couldn't tell if that belt was purple or black because of the limited pixels. (and the big blank spots on the belt).

I dunno how to fix the bottom without basically taking everything off and starting again. xD;;;; Since the top is so busy with colors here and there, the bottom looks almost a bit too structured, with HUGEEE chunks of color.

Also, you have some random silver feet things that match nothing. Try pulling them off.

ORRR.
you can incorporate the silver with a silver belt, a silver necklace, silver earrings, silver laurels (!!!!!!!!!!!!).
But then it wouldn't be as POP with rainbow. xD;
...sorry for the not-so-helpful critique. T_T </3


Quote:

Originally Posted by woohoohelloppl (Post 1765647543)
WINNNDDDYYYYY!
Could you rate my current avatar and this?

http://i26.tinypic.com/29ctmif.jpg


OHHH.
And this fail MAC.
http://i33.tinypic.com/qx9mo7.png
Psst.
I borrowed ideas for the head from you. D:

Wow uhm.
That's a lot. xD

Current avatar: 6/10
Too many shades of red and white and silver.
Too much skin showing. xD;;
Add some black gloves, maybe a red shortsleeve under neath.
You'll have to give me a bit more to work with for a really good critique, haha. xD;;;;;

MAC1: OOH HOW CUTE.
8/10
You have a bunch of gold frills on your hat, yet nowhere else. o-O.
A white cutie scarf will get rid of the icky green around your neck and balance out the red.
No need for that blanket, it's too much of a chunk and you don't need to hold any more red.
Get rid of those icky green ankle socks, try using orange or something.

MAC2: I'm glad you liked my avatar. ^^

Uhmmm...
7/10
VERY messy.
I get the idea, but you've used WAYY too many items. @[email protected]
Get rid of those white cuffs, looks like you've painted a stripe of white all around your middle. xD
Use a red gun. You have enough white. xD
No pink shoes. Spread out the red a bit more. xD;;;
The pinks are just a big BALL of color. xD;;;

I think you tried to make a rainbow thing on the bottom, but you've used too many shades and you haven't balanced them out, so it looks really messy.



@Synthetika:
7/10

Layer wise, you need to balance out your hair's blue. (it's hard...there aren't many items in that color). Put on some shoes, maybe the green shoes from that set.
Some brown and green on top too. Maybe some green laurels? :3 I dunno what you could do for brownt hough. (-doesn't have any brown things-) xD..

As a cosplay, you look like a dashing elf. :3
But in terms of layer and color balance, you'll need to put a few more items in before I can truly tell you what to take off and what else to add. :3



Kay 11-14-2009 11:56 PM

Hello. Would you mind rating my avatar for me please?

Winter Wind 11-15-2009 12:11 AM

Sure. ^^

8/10
Very cutee.

Try a green singlet top? Then maybe a silver space skirt. Green laurels to add more green to your head, and maybe AYumi's white bow. :3 the hair one.

The lantern is pretty random...if you do that I suggest you spread out more gold,with...gold laurels, a gold space skirt, gold stockings, gold neck bandana. :]

And the pumpkins are just plain creepy. xD; get rid of them please.

AND SINCE there is red, maybe try a red headband, a red space skirt, a red neck bandana. :3

Personally, I'd get rid of the leg warmers, since you can't layer around them, and mess with more socks/stockings/skirts/pants. :3

bloomichelle 11-15-2009 12:12 AM

I"M BORED TOO!!! ANYWAYS, I"M NEW SO I DON"T HAVE ANY STYLE AT ALL!!!!

Winter Wind 11-15-2009 01:06 AM

That's not true. :3
You can play tetris to get a bit of gold, then buy a few items.
New doesn't mean no style.

Arikana 11-15-2009 01:34 AM

Oooo, rate me please?! >w<

Winter Wind 11-15-2009 01:57 AM

Sure thing. ^^

7/10
It's cute. :3
Somebody's ready for Christmas, huh. xD <3

In terms of layering, you need wayyy more yellow on your feet, try the yellow cutie shoes. :3
I personally hate leg warmers, because they're such a huge chunk of color, so maybeeee use green stockings of some sort, then maybe yellow tube socks, then red ankle socks? :3

Also, to spread out the green on your head, maybe add in a green butterfly hairpin?
Or you can get rid of the yellow triangle and use a Chicky On My Head. :3 That'd be SUPER cute.

The sparkles also make your avatar seem a bit too busy.

Very cutee. :3

Arikana 11-15-2009 02:05 AM

Ahaha.. a lot of people have been saying it's so Christmas-y too! XD

Alright, time to go footwear shopping soon! >w<

And merci beaucoup for the rating! <3

Winter Wind 11-15-2009 02:11 AM

.../doesn't know French

De nada! ...that's Spanish though. xD;;;

Arikana 11-15-2009 02:15 AM

No worries. Spanish is awesome too! :D
Though, ASL is totally the coolest language ever.. but too bad it's not a written language. :(

Winter Wind 11-15-2009 02:20 AM

I would really love to learn that.
>w<

Cept with my awful memory and clumsiness, I'd probably end up insulting someone instead of trying to be nice. T_T

Arikana 11-15-2009 02:33 AM

Mmmm.. ASL is pure win. :D
Especially watching people sign, it's so breathtakingly amazing how they can just communicate with their hands. >w<

Aw, just take your time and perhaps you will know how to sign perfectly in the future! <3
You can do it! >:3

Winter Wind 11-15-2009 03:03 AM

Wish it was offered at my school.
T____T

Arikana 11-15-2009 03:05 AM

Mmmm.. same here.

But I'm considering applying for this college program that teaches it. <3
Though, I need to figure out what else I wanna apply for first.. @[email protected];

woohoohelloppl 11-15-2009 07:15 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Winter Wind (Post 1765648480)
Wow uhm.
That's a lot. xD

Current avatar: 6/10
Too many shades of red and white and silver.
Too much skin showing. xD;;
Add some black gloves, maybe a red shortsleeve under neath.
You'll have to give me a bit more to work with for a really good critique, haha. xD;;;;;

MAC1: OOH HOW CUTE.
8/10
You have a bunch of gold frills on your hat, yet nowhere else. o-O.
A white cutie scarf will get rid of the icky green around your neck and balance out the red.
No need for that blanket, it's too much of a chunk and you don't need to hold any more red.
Get rid of those icky green ankle socks, try using orange or something.

MAC2: I'm glad you liked my avatar. ^^

Uhmmm...
7/10
VERY messy.
I get the idea, but you've used WAYY too many items. @[email protected]
Get rid of those white cuffs, looks like you've painted a stripe of white all around your middle. xD
Use a red gun. You have enough white. xD
No pink shoes. Spread out the red a bit more. xD;;;
The pinks are just a big BALL of color. xD;;;

I think you tried to make a rainbow thing on the bottom, but you've used too many shades and you haven't balanced them out, so it looks really messy.

Thank you, Windy. ^^

Seer of the Past 11-15-2009 07:29 PM

Could youplease rate me. If you think i should change could you give me an idea?

Winter Wind 11-15-2009 07:55 PM

Sure thing! ^^

Seeing as you're wearing a set...there's not much I can say about distributing colors and what not. xD

Hmmm.
Try the bone belt too, so you have some white around your middle.
I'd personally wear the dove anklewings (CI item), so you have a bit of white on the bottom.
Maybe have the white socks with hearts on them? (I'm wearing them)
Then you can also try black stockings, to cover up your hands. :3

Maybee some black gloves as well. :]

7/10, but only because you're wearing a set, so it doesn't allow for much creativity.

Cami 11-15-2009 07:57 PM

Heya, Chilly. Gimme a rate.

Winter Wind 11-15-2009 08:57 PM

Sure thing C-c-c-c-Camii. <3

8/10

Your socks don't match.
xD;;;;;
And I KNOW there are atlantis socks somewhere.
x3

Atlantis neck bandana to balance out the atlantis colors.

A CROWNNN. :3
K-crown would look good, and add gold. Orr, star clips. :3
GOld earrings too.

Try the Midas arm bangle things. :3

Need some gold down on your feet...dunno how to get that though.
Maybe gold stockings? :3

Cami 11-16-2009 01:15 AM

XD I'll give you 500 gold if you find socks that match.

Kay 11-16-2009 02:09 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Winter Wind (Post 1765649118)
Sure. ^^

8/10
Very cutee.

Try a green singlet top? Then maybe a silver space skirt. Green laurels to add more green to your head, and maybe AYumi's white bow. :3 the hair one.

The lantern is pretty random...if you do that I suggest you spread out more gold,with...gold laurels, a gold space skirt, gold stockings, gold neck bandana. :]

And the pumpkins are just plain creepy. xD; get rid of them please.

AND SINCE there is red, maybe try a red headband, a red space skirt, a red neck bandana. :3

Personally, I'd get rid of the leg warmers, since you can't layer around them, and mess with more socks/stockings/skirts/pants. :3

Ok, I made a bunch of changes, I'm still working on it. I need something to help cover up the arms. But what I've got so far is looking good I think.

Synthetika 11-16-2009 02:39 AM

Will you rate this one please ^_^

Winter Wind 11-16-2009 03:39 AM

@Kay: Loving the new colors. :3

Synthetika: Sure! ^^
8/10

I'd wear a black buckled corset. The black on the bustier is too light.
SInce you have silver on your avatar, try a silver space skirt.
As for the bottom, I think white or silver stockings will do, or maybe white socks with black hearts on them.
i don't think you need the eye patch, it's a bit too much black.

I'm not sure if you're trying to incoporate silver or not...if you aren't, disregard the above.
xD

If you aren't trying to use silver, then it looks pretty good...
I would, however, suggest Rhapsody shorts (the black ones with red trimming), then layer a black miniskirt on top. This would also take the hugeeee redness from your waist.


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