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Is Windy online? I'd like a rating!
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I wouldn't mind a rate xP
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8/10 HAI BISUBISU. <333333333333333333333333
You've got some atlantis and light blue color mixups there. The sash on your waist is a bit too dark. I'd rather you use a light blue belt. THen for the top. Your stomach is basically baree. I'd say wear a pink midriff top, and maybe a white shirt under that. Your shoes don't match. At all. I'm not sure if there are any lightblue shoes, but anything but atlantis. It looks really weird. o-o Maybe the Chilly slippers. :3 It's such a cute avi. <3 HAI CORA. :3 8/10 Red on your head. Nao. xD Maybe the Romantic's White Hairpin? :3 Or the red one would work. I'd say add something like an emo tear drop OR a red heart on your cheek. It'd be cuter. I thinkkkk you can remove the dove wings. It's too feathery, and you already have a raven for feathers. And the hairpin will take care of the white (I think), not to mention your eyes are whited out. Try a red midriff top? Or a red pin up top? You have two whites (scarf and corset), and you have to separate them. COuld you maybe have red stockings then gray ankle socks? |
::proceeds to virtually flog windy::
Why didn't you tell me you had a rating thread? Huh? Lol, nice way to deal with boredness though! Carry on! <3 |
Windy, better?
I really wanted to show some skin, but I bought a shirt anyway, then found a loophole! White skin! Yay! <3 |
Windy just so you know I replied to your question in my thread. ^^
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LOVE the avatar, so cute! ^^ Wish the shoulder thingies were less dark blue, but eh. xD; Could your hair maybe be a tad bit longer? So we can have more of that light blue. It might add a bit more balance to the avatar, since the shoulderthings are so dark. |
I am wishing for rates, yes~
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Plat's back! :3
8/10 I think there's a bit too much green near your middle. You're only using green as an accent color, so take off the waist wrap. Also, your socks. The green is rather off. Maybe black tube socks and an accurately-colored green pair of stockings? I think there are more colors for stockings than socks, but I'm not sure. You need gold on your hands. Try the star catcher bangles. Personally, I'd MUCH rather the gold swirly anklet instead of the flat, straight ones you have on. It'd add a bit more detail and contrast to your rather structured layering. I'd personally pull off the harem headress, because your head is crowded enough already, and it's not as though you're even using the flower attached to it. I think if you used just the romance hairpin, you could pull of the green accents a bit better. And the leaves(?) on that headress stick out WAY too much. Very distracting. I'd like it if you could hold something gold. Perferable on your right hand. LIke...a gold lyre. ...meaning the hand not next to the watch, since it's rather open to interpretation which is left and right. xD Could you maybe try a gold neck bandana? Or something, that little TINY circle of gold aint cutting it. xD I think you're incorporating WAYY too many colors to properly fit them all one the avatar, but it's still pretty cool. :3 |
Hey I changed my Avi. Could you rate me again? And tell me what else I could add.
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I'm probably going to get a low rate on my avi, but can you rate anyway? >.>
And can you give me some advice about what common item(s) would go well with sash I'm wearing? |
Hi again Seer! ^^
Hmmmm. YOu only have two things on at the meoment, so I can't really rate you... The purple threads on the side of your pants don't match the purple of your dresss. xD;;; You could try a black hat of some sort, a top hat maybe? Then black cutie scarf around your neck. Maybe a black waspie in the middle, and some dark purple shoes (I dunno any though.) Black gloves? But then again, I dunno if it'd make your avi too black around the middle. Try some chaos clips. They're part of a set, but you won't find much purple that matches your dress. Sure thing Blkmage! ^^ You don't have anything that matches your avatar, so...5/10. At least you have room for creativity, right? xD To balance white, try a white cutie scarf, a white belt, maybe white gloves. I'd try out some white shoes, or maybe the EGL white socks. To balance the sash...hmmmmmmmm. I really don't know any items that would match with the weird pink/purple. xD; I can only think of the items from the Chaos set, but even those don't match very well. Your dress is rather hard to add to, in my opinion. You could try wearing a Chicky On My Head...but then it wouldn't match with your star. Your star doesn't really match, and there are hardly any items with that faded gold/yellow. @[email protected];;; You also have red flowers. Try the dark chocolate socks, and maybe a red neck bandana. Then maybeee a red candy pin? And perhaps red gloves. |
I'm not good with avi's so to say. Is this better? I'm trying to make something that'll match this sash.
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I like it simple ;)
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please rate this one, I made a new one ^_^
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@Blkmage:
Hmmmmm. First, you should choose two or three colors to match the sash. :3 Seems like you've got white, black, orange, and yellow. The lantern makes the whole avatar messy, so I think you should try the sash+kitsunecaboodle theme. That means you could put something orange and white on your head (two items preferably), a white cutie scarf, maybe an orange tanktop, then perhaps a white midriff top. (I don't know what this would look like, but I chose items that can layer on top and would match the color scheme.) Basically, try to wear orange, black, and white items. :3 The purple/pink is taken care of by the sash, since it spreads it out. Best of luckk! I personally have had issues trying to match that sash as well. x-x @Synthetika: Hey there! ^^ Ooh, how interesting. 8/10 I'd suggest a black cutie scarf, because the green from your hair and the cravat needs to be separated, so it doesn't look like one big lump. Try also a gold neck bandana, you need some gold near your neck. I think a green acid skirt might balance out the green in your hair. Also, for your shoes, those just don't work. @[email protected] The legwarmer part of those looks rather out of place on your avatar. Try...perhaps some black tube socks? Then teal anklesocks, and maybe green shoes. :3 Or you could try teal tube socks, green anklesocks, gold shoes, and a raven anklewings. :3 |
^_^ thanks i was messing around with this outfit so much in the mac and was having a hard time this was my final result, i like the way some of your suggestions look now i just have to work on earning up my gold and mess around in the mac some more
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The MAC takes wayy too long for my computer to load.
T_T But it's a really neat color combo, I haven't tried that out before. :3 |
Hey i added some more so could you rate it so I can see how I am coming along?
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i like those avis you've had they're awesome!
and sure, i wouldn't mind being rated. =^_^= it's not fully complete yet, but i just don't have enough money to get what i want yet. |
Why not? Rate me please? |
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I'd say add a purple Ayumi's hat to your head, and maybee something white and black. Perhaps...a spooky Hairpin? I'd try a white cutie scarf too. Maybe a black waspie, and some black gloves. Then you could try those longg purple gloves with silver/gold near the hands (it'll be covered up by the black gloves.) Thennnnnn...purple stockings? :3 Quote:
And sure. :3 6/10 I can see where it's going, and it looks super cute. But since I'm a layer type of person, it looks a bit too bare for me. Try maybe a pink t-shirt, and a green midriff top. I'd personally take off the legwarmers, because they don't leave much to work with layers, and then add some stockings and two pairs of socks. :3 Maybe pink stockings, green tube socks, pink ankle socks, and then beige shoes? I dunno. Quote:
7/10 You're wearing a set, and there isn't enough layering for my tastes. I'd suggest to balance out white, you could try a Black and White Voodoo side hat. The mini, tilted Top Hat one. Then you could try a white cutie scarf, and maybe a white belt of some sort. Maybe some white shoes? Or maybe white socks and black shoes. I dont' know how to layer it but not remove your style/taste. D: Sorry for the sorta lacking criticism. T_T |
*waves* hey windy, so i made another one ^o^
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Hey again! ^^
OOOH. I like this one. >w< 8/10 ALMOST THERE. I think you can pull out purple stockings, and go with gold stockings then purple socks maybe? I'm not seeing enough gold down there. Try a black t-shirt, I THINK that layers under the gold, yes? @[email protected] If not, your shirt's gold is too muted, so try a black tshirt and a gold neck bandana. :3 Then maybe even a black cutie scarf. Your head needs goldddd. Try...a midas crown? Or Starry Hairpins, that would be super cute. But then you'd have to take off the black pin... Maybeee use a Black and White Voodoo hat? :3 The side tilt one. |
the black tshirt worked out pretty well with it :) i switched out for the stars too, ^_^ added some shoulder pads too i forgot i was going to put those on this outfit xD
not sure about the stockings since their pretty light compared to the other purples and golds :P i also tried out a bowtie because that seemed like it would be fitting but it may be a little too low im not sure, what do you think? |
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