Hey guys. :3
I generally have nothing to do, so if you want some opinion on your avatar feel free to post here. ^^


BACKGROUND:
+I specialize in layering and balancing.

+I tend to rate low on those that don't have much creativity.

+HOWEVER, if you state that yours is a cosplay I will rate accordingly (but still take in layers and balances).

+I especially LOVE it when you use rarely-used items. :]


Here are some of my avatars, so you know what type I make/critique/specialize in.

one of your avatars made me go omgyerss in real life
the black white and rainbow one.
best avatar i've ever seen.

fyrst post

Why thank you. ^^

That one is quite possibly my favorite. >w<

I loveee the whole monochrome but BAMM SWIPE OF RAINBOW. >w<

I wanted to do that so badly, but you did that idea, so i dun wanna be a cheap ghetto knockoff D:

D:
Sorrryyy Pie, first come first serve?
Dx

I made that avi a couple months ago.

WOULD YOU LIKE A RATE? :3

My avatar is terrible... but I'll have a rate

winny- nahh
i am not done yet.
3.7k later i will get a rate.

zeap is gourge!
not ugly
G O U R G E

YAY MY FIRST RATE-EE. xD <3

8/10
I loveeee the layering you've done, especially since that dress is such a huge chunk.
howeverrr, I think you should get rid of those gold gloves. They're WAYY bulky.
I'd suggest perhaps a gold bracelet or something, because it'swayyy too much gold there.

Is there nothing you could put on your head? :0
likeee, say a King's Crown or a dark blue something? I know your hair basically takes care of it, but your head looks a bit lonely. xD;;

ALSO.
I spy a bit of white on the bottom.
Could you perhaps wear an Ayu's white hat, or maybe a white cutie scarf?
To balance out the white. :3
I'd try dove anklets, but I'm not sure if it'll get cut off by the dress.

@Pie: ohohkay. :3
come backkk when you're done too! >w<

Originally Posted by Winter Wind

D:
WOULD YOU LIKE A RATE? :3

NO :rawrmayor:


Just swinging by to say i SUPERDOOPERYEAHYEAHILIKEIT like your Black&White&Bam!Rainbow Avi.


J/k about the rate. 8D <3

rate thnx?

WHY NOT

winny's so populaa she should be a cheeleedahh

I FEEL LIKE DOING THIS AND I DON'T KNOW WHY

I'm a bit bored...

i don't balme yew sloslo

@Chunsaaa: YOU ALMOST BROKE MY HEART CHUNSA. T_T
/wants to rate. xD

Ahahaha, i'm glad people like it. :3 Thank you! <3
When I was wearing it a couple months ago, no one liked it. T_T They were all "wtf is up with that random belt?" And they didn't understand the theme/contrast of it all.
xD

7/10
I'm a very layer-y type of person, so those boots are immediate x's in my book. xD;;
Your hair doesn't really match the other purple, so eitherr you can change it to black, orrr screw the hair color and put on the black version of that hat. :3

The big square is really random...it's wayy too out there, especially with the whole flowy, heart, ruffley dress. If you want a belt or something I'd say maybe a waspie or a corset.

I dislike bare skin, so maybeee add some black shorts. :3









@SLowtrain: YAY THREE RATE-EE. >w<

8/10
I applaud you for your use of that robe. It's such a big chunk. xD
I don't think the right arm needs the beige. The robe is a big enough chunk of beige as is. If you keep it black, I think it'd balance it out more.
Those shorts match absolutely nothing. xD;;;;;;;
Perhaps a gold skirt, or something brown that matches your hair.
Since it's Windy, I always say to add anklewings, it reallyyy helps balance out the top. Maybe the raven ones? ...but then again it might be too much black. D:
Your head is a bit lonely too. D:
And that headband doesn't match the other golds. Perhapssssss a K-crown? Or maybe even a Midas crown? (...though I thinkkk that's a bit too big)
Maybe gold laurels? :3

And.
I dunno, no one liked it. T_T

lol forgot to add more of the brown from the shorts xD
I think I originally had something... BUT THEN IT WENT AWAY

aaanyway, this was for Project Mene, so most of your suggestions go against the theme xD

Ah no fail. T_T

What do you need specifically? :0
I'll try my best to rate accordingly. :3

I'd like to ask for a rate on this avi, which I tried to center around the dango hand item, thankies :3

nah, that's okay, I was only asking for a little fun xD

the challenge was to create an avatar that is peasant-ish with hints of royalty
and the cycle Disney themed, this challenge was based around Aladdin

Originally Posted by aphrodite remix

I'd like to ask for a rate on this avi, which I tried to center around the dango hand item, thankies :3

Ooooh, how creative~ :3
9/10

I'd say get rid of the belt.
The skirt seems to put enough black. Use the black pouch, I think a thinner black would be nice. :]
I'd recommend putting the green beads on the other side too, because the white dots are a bit distracting.
Lastly, I kind of dislike the hair. o-O.
You can telll there are two shades of black with that wig.
So...maybe you could use a shorter haircut?
And if you do that, perhaps a black cutie scarf? to put some black on the neck. Or the biggg black star necklace from the CP event store commons. :3
Your face is about the same shade as your blouse, and it looks really weird all melded together like that. xD

Originally Posted by slowtrain

nah, that's okay, I was only asking for a little fun xD

the challenge was to create an avatar that is peasant-ish with hints of royalty
and the cycle Disney themed, this challenge was based around Aladdin

ohhohkayz. :3
Good lucks~ :3

Alright, mind you I threw this together to make myself not naked, but I'll take a rate because they are fun xP


by the way I wanted to say the grey avi on the first post...with the rainbow scarf facinates me.

Thanks Cora. ^^
Getting quite a bit of compliments on it...wish people liked it when I actually wore it a few months ago.
xD <3

7/10
A bit bland. I like how that skirt goes on top of those puffy shorts though. :3
Since I'm a layer freak, boots are a bigggg no no in my book. xD;;
I'd suggest maybeeee some brown stockings, then some bulky black shoes? :3
The gold anklet thing is fine.
Cookie is rather random. o-O.
I think if you reallly want to hold a cookie, use the strawberry one. xD
A thicker gold belt would look cooler.
Orr, get rid of gold alltogether, since you only have 2 things gold. xD
Then you can use the black pouch. :3 And it's a nice thin band of balance. :3

It's kind of hard to do an avi when there's only about 10 items with that scarf/shorts color. xD;

What the heck I'll take a rate. I haven't been on Mene very long so this is my first go at an avi! Ahh I know it needs work....

lol, I'm surprised they didn't winter o.0

at first I was confused but then I couldn't help but to continue to look at the idea of it...it was soo unusual...reminds me of like the really old movies where everything is in black and white but every once in a while something has that tiny pop of color.

As for the plum, it makes me sad that there is not more items in that color as it is one of my favorites....I fear most of my favorites are like that.....teal....the bright blue in the space set....lavander....but then it also makes for more of a challenge.

And the cookie...it because I'm happy I got one xP its my first NPC item...given by my favorite NPC xP
I've been a vicky stalker since before the NPC's items xP

Thanks for the rate dear xP

Thankies, and to address a few issues, I thought I had the beads on both sides, but on closer inspection you're right but I did mean to have on each side. And I was debating the black pouch as well, so its good to hear that you were thinking that as well.

I love that hairstyle and never use it, but after you mentioned it I can tell more now that it is a different color between the wig and the hair color so a shorter style does make sense. The cutie scarf is a good idea, only reason I didn't have a black necklace to separate the peach face from the peach shirt is because part of the hair comes down but its a good suggestion and something I will probably change.

Thanks for the rate, very helpful :3

Go for it, gimme a rate.