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#8451
Old 04-16-2014, 07:40 AM

Easty, I definitely get the "prophet" theme from your avi, the outfit and the background are developing well. For some improvements, I would tweak the hair colors to have greater contrast and look slightly more realistic. Also, I'm not totally sold on all the animals; I take it they represent various omens or symbolic visions? I think that's the weakest point in what you have so far.

Wyrm, I like the way your current avi looks. The dark blue sky adds a nice broodiness to the scene, and I like the tailcoat. The white feathers on your hips make your bird look a little rumpled though; maybe you could use a white apron for the belly area instead? Also maybe try out so black eyes, instead of the red ones, since the red doesn't match with anything else in the avi?

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#8452
Old 04-16-2014, 08:37 AM

Chexala: yes they are all the the things she could see in her vision, theres not just animals, the candle the arrow and the skull also have different meanings, i am debating whether or not to remove one or two so it appears less cluttered. --- I'm thinking to get rid of the rabbit might do the trick, and I definitely agree about the hair.

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#8453
Old 04-16-2014, 02:21 PM

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Wyrm, I like the way your current avi looks. The dark blue sky adds a nice broodiness to the scene, and I like the tailcoat. The white feathers on your hips make your bird look a little rumpled though; maybe you could use a white apron for the belly area instead? Also maybe try out so black eyes, instead of the red ones, since the red doesn't match with anything else in the avi?
None of the aprons seem to layer well-- they all layer over the tailcoat instead of under, and I wind up looking like a freaky maitre'd. I might try just losing those hipfeathers and see how that goes. As for the eyes, I've been looking around for something better... the only things I have with eyes are Siriusly? and the creepy doll one. The trick with black eyes is making them stand out.

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#8454
Old 04-17-2014, 12:13 AM

How about this?

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#8455
Old 04-17-2014, 12:18 AM

Ah, too bad about the aprons. I like this latest version, with the blue eyes, they look great with the sky.

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#8456
Old 04-17-2014, 12:21 AM

I think I'll probably stick with this as my entry... I'm pretty happy with how it looks, although I still wish I could get more birds in. Maybe I should do a Tippi Hedren cosplay.

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#8457
Old 04-17-2014, 12:54 AM

Tippi Hedren?

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#8458
Old 04-17-2014, 12:56 AM

She was the actress in the Alfred Hitchcock Film 'The Birds'

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#8459
Old 04-17-2014, 01:02 AM

Oooh. I still have never seen that. I think I have it on my tablet though...I should watch it.

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Old 04-17-2014, 01:11 AM

It's one of the classics... although I admit I haven't seen the whole thing, either. It's not my preferred type of Hitchcock film.

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#8461
Old 04-17-2014, 05:57 PM

@My Friends; because entries are due in two hours and I only have half of your entries turned in, I'm going to give you until 5PM Arizona time to submit your entries for this round! That means you have six hours from the time of this post to turn in your entries if you haven't already!

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#8462
Old 04-17-2014, 06:26 PM

Oh, wow! Thanks for the extension~

Could I get some opinions on this avi? I'm going with a Japanese omen that says

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If you see a spider in the morning, it means good luck so you shouldn't kill it.

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#8463
Old 04-17-2014, 06:37 PM

Ohhh yes I'm so sorry im away on holiday and the time got away from me!

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#8464
Old 04-17-2014, 07:03 PM

Annnnnddd my entry is made, and now the nerves begin!

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#8465
Old 04-17-2014, 07:33 PM

Wyrm, there is another item that has crows, but they'd be close up and idk if you want that since you're not trying to be a crow. However, if you do want to, they're in the Tome of Nightmares CI.

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#8466
Old 04-18-2014, 01:02 AM

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Oh, wow! Thanks for the extension~

Could I get some opinions on this avi? I'm going with a Japanese omen that says


i dont think you should change a thing.

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#8467
Old 04-18-2014, 09:11 AM

@My Friends; I've updated all the entries and such. Please let me know if I missed anything so I can fix it!

Mythos, since you didn't get anything turned in to me, I just used what you had posted in the thread. If you want to do a description for it, feel free to message it to me and I'll update that for the judges.

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#8468
Old 04-18-2014, 09:31 AM

Project Mene: my reference image isn't in my post.
Also could you add 'and so on' after my descriptions of some of the omens, otherwise it could be called in to question why some of the other animals and sure are on the avi >.<

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#8469
Old 04-18-2014, 04:20 PM

Your reference image is hyperlinked to the word "sibyls," but I added in the so on for you.

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#8470
Old 04-18-2014, 05:23 PM

Oh, might want to be careful about posting one after the other with your main and mule, Eastyy. It's considered double posting.

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#8471
Old 04-18-2014, 05:52 PM

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Wyrm, there is another item that has crows, but they'd be close up and idk if you want that since you're not trying to be a crow. However, if you do want to, they're in the Tome of Nightmares CI.
I tried that, and they didn't layer well with the wings. Thank you, though!

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#8472
Old 04-18-2014, 06:37 PM

Get things in so I can judge before I start my move!

*terribly nervous now that things are in boxes*

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#8473
Old 04-18-2014, 08:14 PM

It'll be great Long! <3

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#8474
Old 04-18-2014, 10:20 PM

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@My Friends I've updated all the entries and such. Please let me know if I missed anything so I can fix it!

Mythos, since you didn't get anything turned in to me, I just used what you had posted in the thread. If you want to do a description for it, feel free to message it to me and I'll update that for the judges.
Thank you!! My plans was completely rescheduled several times last week and by the end of it I had lost all track of time. I'm sorry to have kept you and caused more work for you than was needed. I will send a short description in a moment. : )

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#8475
Old 04-19-2014, 02:42 AM

Are lady bugs a bad omen?

 


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