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07-09-2014 05:16 PM |
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Originally Posted by Cora
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Is she volunteering at a library? Or giving a lecture? I'm not really sure what's going here. [sweat] The background items are most confusing. I don't understand the purpose of the futuristic windown, other than it just being a window. Also, the purple curtain clashes with the colors on the avatar, as does the blue crystal on the book in her hands. There just seems to be a lack of flow throughout, though I do like your outfit choice. But I don't know how fitting it is to your theme.
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Originally Posted by steelmagghia
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I definitely prefer the bottom more, but the shirt just screams bad to me. A dead fish seems too negative for volunteer work, to me. Aren't there black shirts with smiley faces on them? Perhaps look into the other graphic Ts Menewsha offers. Also, the syringe is a little too big for the birds. I saw you used the smaller one earlier, but it was a bit too scary. Perhaps look into bags that look like aid bags, instead? Like the bags from the recent artist CI (I'm not sure what' it's called! [gonk]). The syringe isn't overly bad if you can't find a good change. :3
---------- Post added 07-09-2014 at 01:19 PM ----------
Also, congrats fireprincess on winning the previous round!
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