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SuperZombiePotatoe 05-21-2014 05:17 AM

Greetings! [wave]
Would BSW rate and critique me please?
I'm trying to work on my avi making skills [:D]

http://i818.photobucket.com/albums/z...ps4c1f7a4a.png

bloodstainedwings 05-21-2014 08:55 AM

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Originally Posted by SuperZombiePotatoe (Post 1772713124)
Greetings! [wave]
Would BSW rate and critique me please?
I'm trying to work on my avi making skills [:D]

http://i818.photobucket.com/albums/z...ps4c1f7a4a.png

its very interesting but you need some yellow and white on the head, assuming the hair is going to be black. just for balance. i really like the skirt layering and the leg layering. its interesting and could easily be missed.

9/10

SuperZombiePotatoe 05-21-2014 09:06 AM

I was wondering about the head actually. Maybe a headband?

Kirin Rosenbaum 05-21-2014 03:06 PM

*wanders in and waves*

star2000shadow 05-21-2014 03:32 PM

hey yeah guys 'waves ' how you doing?

Lexadis 05-21-2014 04:54 PM

Hello star!

CosmicFoxKitty 05-21-2014 06:49 PM

Can I get your opinion on my alice avi?

http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k4...ps99a2ce70.jpg

bloodstainedwings 05-21-2014 07:48 PM

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Originally Posted by SuperZombiePotatoe (Post 1772713574)
I was wondering about the head actually. Maybe a headband?

you could do something real strange and have the hair pink, and then use the black and yellow lolita head band thing and a white hairpin.

---------- Post added 05-21-2014 at 03:50 PM ----------

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Originally Posted by CosmicFoxKitty (Post 1772714562)
Can I get your opinion on my alice avi?

http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k4...ps99a2ce70.jpg

i think its perfect! literally. i dont think anything could make it better

---------- Post added 05-21-2014 at 03:52 PM ----------

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Originally Posted by star2000shadow (Post 1772714055)
hey yeah guys 'waves ' how you doing?

hey hey! im ok i guess everything considered. My Nonna just passed. but she has been sick for over a year.

McNugget 05-21-2014 08:12 PM

May I have a rating and advice on my current avatar please?

http://i.imgur.com/YL6myK9.png

Kirin Rosenbaum 05-21-2014 08:28 PM

BSW could you send me the item suggestions you made about my avatar?

bloodstainedwings 05-21-2014 08:33 PM

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Originally Posted by McNugget (Post 1772714735)
May I have a rating and advice on my current avatar please?

http://i.imgur.com/YL6myK9.png

that is beyond creepy! i love it! all the blood and the ravens.. so cool. i especially love the explosion in the back. I have no idea how you accomplished that, but it looks wicked! I will say that the very foreground seems a little bare, i am feeling the same way with my avatar... not sure what would fix that though. i used a frame, but that really wouldnt work with your avatar... so i would say leave it. its great the way it is.

10/10

McNugget 05-21-2014 08:37 PM

Thanks BSW [=3] [oops]

By the way, The background was a layering incident that ended up looking good so I kept it [lol] Behind the house from the sunny side-up CI is the background from the tome of nightmares layered on the background from Indra's storms in case you were wondering~

bloodstainedwings 05-21-2014 08:44 PM

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Originally Posted by Kirin Rosenbaum (Post 1772714762)
BSW could you send me the item suggestions you made about my avatar?

yes indeedy. also, I am not sure if you like the direction i took with the rp. if you want me to change it I will.

---------- Post added 05-21-2014 at 04:45 PM ----------

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Originally Posted by McNugget (Post 1772714778)
Thanks BSW [=3] [oops]

By the way, The background was a layering incident that ended up looking good so I kept it [lol] Behind the house from the sunny side-up CI is the background from the tome of nightmares layered on the background from Indra's storms in case you were wondering~

wait, that explosion is always there and i never noticed it????!!!?what the waht!? no wait i read that wrong. its the lava fro the tome of nightmares. well, it looks awesome.

McNugget 05-21-2014 08:48 PM

lol it's not really an explosion. It's part of a volcano [XD].


Ohhh.. I see you found out.. Hahaha <_>. I feel so stupid [sweat]

Lexadis 05-21-2014 08:49 PM

I thought It had something to do with bonfires [XD]

CosmicFoxKitty 05-21-2014 09:12 PM

Thanks for the thoughts :3

CrimsonShadow 05-21-2014 09:52 PM

Hey BSW!! How are you?!

Can I get a rate on this??
http://i.imgur.com/ZshHUJy.png

bloodstainedwings 05-22-2014 08:56 AM

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Originally Posted by CrimsonShadow (Post 1772714921)
Hey BSW!! How are you?!

Can I get a rate on this??
http://i.imgur.com/ZshHUJy.png

its very strange...i honestly am not sure what i think. the avatar is an alien so it technically matches, but the red and white verses the green and yellow is offsetting to me. the alien itself is freaky looking to be honest...and i guess i hardly ever think of aliens as freaky. its very off putting and unsettling. so if that is what you are going for, you did fabulously. as an avatar, there is nothing 'wrong' with it, great layering, interesting concept, great facial expression etc. It is just so offsetting for me that i cant say i like it.

9/10

---------- Post added 05-22-2014 at 04:56 AM ----------

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Originally Posted by CosmicFoxKitty (Post 1772714842)
Thanks for the thoughts :3

any time.

CosmicFoxKitty 05-22-2014 09:31 AM

^_^ I stayed up all night lol I'm so lame xD

Kirin Rosenbaum 05-22-2014 06:14 PM

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Originally Posted by bloodstainedwings (Post 1772714789)
yes indeedy. also, I am not sure if you like the direction i took with the rp. if you want me to change it I will.

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wait, that explosion is always there and i never noticed it????!!!?what the waht!? no wait i read that wrong. its the lava fro the tome of nightmares. well, it looks awesome.

I do. I am just waiting for inspiration and am saving for the robe you suggested. What do you think of the hair?

bloodstainedwings 05-22-2014 10:50 PM

actually i really like it the way it is right now. just those two items and the hair really makes a difference. now you just need a head item that matches the skirt and you are all set!

Kirin Rosenbaum 05-23-2014 01:17 AM

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Originally Posted by bloodstainedwings (Post 1772717583)
actually i really like it the way it is right now. just those two items and the hair really makes a difference. now you just need a head item that matches the skirt and you are all set!

What would you suggest for the head?

bloodstainedwings 05-23-2014 09:03 AM

no idea, why not go into the hats store and preview anything you think might work and when you find something that will, buy it. thats what i normally do.

Kirin Rosenbaum 05-23-2014 01:14 PM

Not a lot of extra golds to do that.

CrimsonShadow 05-24-2014 09:51 AM

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Originally Posted by bloodstainedwings (Post 1772716071)
its very strange...i honestly am not sure what i think. the avatar is an alien so it technically matches, but the red and white verses the green and yellow is offsetting to me. the alien itself is freaky looking to be honest...and i guess i hardly ever think of aliens as freaky. its very off putting and unsettling. so if that is what you are going for, you did fabulously. as an avatar, there is nothing 'wrong' with it, great layering, interesting concept, great facial expression etc. It is just so offsetting for me that i cant say i like it.

9/10

---------- Post added 05-22-2014 at 04:56 AM ----------



any time.

Yes! That's what I was going for^^ Thanks BSW!!


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