I think thats a good idea, a lot of people are doing that. Waiting for v-day I mean ^^ Your welcome.

Sure thing ^^

I like the color combo. I like how the flow is head to toe and how the colors go through out the avi. There isn't much else I can say, the flow is right, the colors go through out the avi evenly. Its a lil plain but it looks good. I might suggest adding some extra items just to get rid of the plain looking effect of your avi. You could add a necklace or something... Maybe another expression on the avi itself could help.

8/10 like I said, everything is there for a great avi, its just plain.

Well I think the other hair you had was better than this one, it takes away from the avi. As for items? lets me see:
Round Fan of Longevity
Leaf Green Leather Gloves
Flower Hairpin of Longevity
Flower Hairpin of Beauty
Sandals of Longevity

So from what I saw those items would work best with your current avi ^^

awww I'm not that harsh XD

Well I like it ^^ I will say almost none of the blues match but over all the colors flow through out the avi and the flow is head to tow, which is good. Maybe if you added something that was the same blue in the pants it could help. Most of the other blues match almost spot on. Just the blue on the pants are a tad to bright/dark.

7/10 its a nice start ^^

Mm a lot of those are really great avis, both expensive and creative. I think two of them, I won't say which, do not belong with the rest of them. Sorry it's just my opinion D;
Sorry once more D; D;

Your welcome ^^

huh? what are you talking about?


Oh wow 0.0 very unique ^^ I love it lol just for being random and almost giving the illusion of boobs lol.

The top of the avi rocks but after you hot the skirt it kinda dies. All the colors that were on the top of the avi don't seem to follow all the way to the feet. Sadly thou the eyes is drawn to the mid part of the avi and not the head, well not right away that is. I would try to find something to add to the head to draw the eye up, maybe something purple-ish with gold? But the hairpin is great ^^ I would suggest maybe using fishnet with an over lay of gold shoes. Maybe the starry shoes over purple fish nets or midnight shoes with pink or red fishnets, or the Sandals of Fortune but then that would be a set and make is less cool. Perhaps a different skirt that wasn't so puffy could help. The item over layers are great but sadly the top (head) looks a lil to plain next to the mid section as does the bottom (feet)

Over all 8.5/10, I love it as just some Jane doe, but as someone critiquing, I have to look at a lil differently.

I hope some of the suggestion were helpful ^^



Whats with the question mark? Of course I'll critique your avi, its what I do best...

Sadly the eye isn't drawn to the top(head) of the avi.
The is more drawn to the mid section (bust/waist) of the avi. Its a random use of items but yet the avi seems so plain. I might suggest finding another red item for the top (head) of the avi and maybe a different top on the avi, the red of the top doesn't go with any of the other reds in your avi. Maybe the basic red bra might match but its hard to tell. Other than that, all the colors flow through out the avi and theres a nice set of layering with items.

over all 7/10 plain and seen the combo a lot.

I love the pants but they just didn't go with this avi :/ did you try the blue/green ish hair color? it could work ^^ Good luck!




Your very welcome Korrye ^^ And I agree Glammy's avi is very unique ^^

Your welcome ^^

I would have suggested mac-ing it but the new items have yet to be added. The skirt isn't bad but needs more color brought to it.

Good luck on that. So far it rocks with a few key changes, It'll be even better ^^




Yay! ^^ I'm all happy now. I've been wanting to do another rate on your for ever now since the hair came back XD

I love the color combo and the use/layering of items. The hair really polishes off the avi and brings the whole thing together giving it that completed look. Like I said before, an armband would be great if you could a pair of gloves that would set off the avi.

over all 9/10, the arms are still to bare but the avi itself is awesome and very well done.Though the top of the avi isn't as busy as the bottom, it still rocks. I'm so pleased with this avi in so many ways, I could squeal XD

oh by the way, congrats on making it to the front page XD

If you could critique my avatar, that would be rad! I don't think it's complete yet, but I'm not sure what's missing to make it admin's pick worthy.

Here's a pic for reference, in case I change my outfit soon.

http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/5...ldblackvh1.png

Majin would love to be rated again. <3

Hey guys ^^ sorry I've been gone for the past couple of days. Been busy with moving and my new job XD Though I maybe moving again sometime again this month depending if I like living here or not. So again sorry for my vanishing act, I'll be playing catch up over the next couple of hours in between unpacking things until my room mate goes to work and leaves me be for a bit >.<

I'll edit this post once I have more time to look over all the avis and can give my complete attention too ^^

-Divine-

p.s.
Thanks again for being so patience ^^


Edit: With updates ^^




Wow thats so pretty ^^ I love the colors and the layers. The only thing I see so far is the belt is kinda gray and not dark enough to be black, and The neck area needs some black to break up all the gold. The hair does a good job but not enough to keep the black flowing on the front on the avi. Maybe some black gloves to bring black to the hands and help balance out the black on the avi.

Over all 8.5/10 close 9. I'm not sure if I want to give you a 9 or not. I love the colors bit those few keys bother me enough to drop it half a point. :/ drat my conflicting sides lol ^^



lol okay....I was kinda confused for a moment there but the edit helped XD G' luck on the Contest ^^ I'll see you there


Lol thanks ^^

Well I'm not sure if this is the avi or not but I'll go for it anyways ^^
Well at first glance it looks like your going for the whole half and half thing. Half white/red/gold/some black on top and black/white on bottom with a hint of gold. Its an interesting combo not plain but not really pleasing to look at for a long period of time. Maybe a gold belt to draw more gold from the head of the avi to the hips to make it more half and half if thats what your going for.

To be honest I'm kinda confuse on the theme of this avi, I don't want to rate and find out I was wrong with my judgment.

As of right now, 6.5/10. Not really organized but yet not really plain. Just kinda there to be looked at or a job half done.

Does that makes sense?

Well let me start by saying I like your current avi, the shoe's color is a bit off bu the rest of it pretty cool. Reminds me of a battle chick XD

Okay on to the pic.

Well the flow is head to toe and all the colors go through out the avi. My only real conflict with this avi would be the heaven balloon is a different shade of white and doesn't match any of the other whites on the avi. Same with the red of the shirt, doesn't match. The shoes kinda match the hairpin because they're so far from each other is hard to tell. The gold stops at the knees and needs to be brought down to the bottom as well, well maybe add the halo to bring the gold down.

7/10 cute over all but needs a lot of work to bring it all together.maybe a belt? Not sure at this time. Let me think it over and see if any ideas pop up. ^^


Thanks guys ^^ I missed you too if it helps XD

Of course you may ^^

I love the idea of this avi. It seems very joker-ish to me ^^ The flow is right, head to toe and the colors are used through out the avi as well. Though I love to see some more gold on this avi to help pull the hair pin and the loli into the avi more than just be props. So far they're the only items on this avi with gold. Maybe some gloves that are gold/black? and some different shoes? You could try the black/gold boots with red fishnets to bring the gold as well as the other colors to the bottom of the avi. You don't have to worry so much about the white because the cloak as white all the way to the floor, so no worries there. Maybe a necklace as well to bring more flare to the neck.

Over all 8.5/10 love the idea/look of the avi but needs more gold to tie in the hairpin and loli to the avi. Maybe a lighter color skirt as well, its kinda dark compared to the cloak and hat.

Thank you very much. <3

And yay for a new job. :)

Your very welcome ^^

And yes, yay new job XD

Okie dokie ^^

I love the mask with the hairpin ^^ Very cute. Overall its cute yet plain and un matching. The few items that do match are from a set and the pants under the skirt kinda blend. As much as I hate saying this, I would unequipped everything and really think about what you want on your avi. There isn't enough white on top and the black seems to over power this avi. SO Really think of what you want people to see when they look at your avi and what you want their reactions to be. I find it plain yet cute at the same time but nothing I would look at for a long time.

6/10 I like the colors and some of the items used but thats about it. :/ sorry if it seems harsh but I don't know how else to go about it. Please don't hate me TT

Thank you! Like I said, I know it needs some work, I'm just not sure what! And thanks about my current avvie, lol. I am currently looking for purple shoes that match better, but some of them aren't in the MAC yet, and I can't tell from the tiny picture in the store. I will try the halo, and maybe the gold double belt?

OK! So I messed around with it a bit, and I know this is going to be a long post, but here they are (sorry for such a long post!)

http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/8...vvies19sq3.jpg

No worries on the long post, I don't mind ^^

Okay so I like 4, 7,8,9....I may or my not like 5.

Any chance you can line them up 4 5 7 8 9 so I can get a better look at them? XD please!!!! ^^