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Haihai again. Its a new avvie. >;] Tell me whatchya think! http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f2...icture10-1.png |
Ok, changed hair color and pin color - rerate? Does that help to balance it? =]
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Alright, I've done what we talked about before. Took off the hat, added headwings and left the hairpin. How's it look? I think I like it a lot ^-^ Rerate/critique?
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May I please get a rate? I personally really liked how this glitched avi turned out. It's supposed to be mroe of a black and white with a spash of red here and there not a black white and red avi.
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Its simple yet clean. The flows it head to toe though some white on the head would be a good idea to help balance out the white flow. Maybe add the contacts or the black heart tattoo to bring something to the face. I like how things layered and the times used. Simple, clean, 7/10. Maybe try adding a hand held to bring the hands more into the avi. Quote:
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its lookin' really good. The flow is head to toe as well as the color flow. Though I love to see more read on the hair besides the pin. Though at this point I don't know what could work without taking the wings off, I know I'm having the same problem with my avi. SO I'll to think of something to help you out there. 8/10 its nice, colors are good, just need more red on the head. Quote:
Well I love the glitch and how it works out to be such a cute avi. Though I think red gloved would be just enough red to make that splash without being to much. Right now it looks odd with the pin and just the red on the shoes, so just gloves and call it good. It really makes the hair pin pop. 8/10, cool glitch but needs just a tad more red to make it a splash instead of a spot :D |
Rate mine please?
Maybe this time I will get in the 9.5 or 9/10 category!xDD |
Can you rate me please?^_^ I don't expect any higher numbers, I just want someone elses opinion on it:P
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Rate mah new avi? ;D
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The color flow is head to toe, the well as the eye flow. The head and bottom part of the avi are very well done but it seem to die in the mid section (torso). Some white would be a great add to this avi, maybe a white long sleeve with a gold vest over top could really help make this avi pop. Maybe try adding the pink heart tattoo to bring something to the face or maybe the gold eye patch. 8/10, Just need a few minor things to make it better. Quote:
Okay, fair enough :D Well its cutes, kinda reminds me of a clown :D the cool ones. The color/eye flow is head to toe and the colors mix well each other. Though is seem set-ish (top, gloves, stockings are a set. Scarf, belt are a set too) I think a hand held would be good with this avi and maybe something else on the head to make it busy like the rest of it. 7/10 :D good job, just try to break away from sets. Quote:
Haha nice try but no, I made that avi therefore I can't rate it. Maybe if you added something to it or tweaked it to make it your own, I could rate it. Though I think i would add red leg warmers to it, but thats just me. Looks good though, does it :D I'm glad you liked it. |
Incredibly naive person here... And yar, I'd really appreciate a good, down to earth critique ^^
AV 1. http://i172.photobucket.com/albums/w...-Kat/macme.gif AV 2. http://i172.photobucket.com/albums/w...y-Kat/mac2.gif I'm trying to keep it mostly pink/cream, but there aren't a whole lot of items out there that match that. I was kinda going for an outfit that I might attain this century. Both of these avatars are about 4800 gold, or close to that. But that may just be more naivety. Anyhow, thank you very much for your time, I'll look forward to your critique :) |
The leg warmers make it look terrible. xD
Edit: I'm wearing the silver spiral ruby tiara. Rate? xDDDD |
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So far I think one is the best. The only thing that doesn't work on this avi would be the red tee under the dress, the yellow on it pulls the eyes down to it to quickly. I think adding red shoes and belt would help even out the balance of red on the avi and help the over all look and fell of the avi. maybe try adding contacts and a heart tattoo to bring the eye to the face more, so it isn't over looked. 7/10 cute but could use a lil work. Quote:
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Haha. The avatar's too perfect to do anything to. ;[
I'll try different shoes. |
Thank you for your suggestions! I'll play around with it a little more on the MAC next time I get the chance ^^
The yellow unfortunately isn't on the undershirt (which is actually that Shiek Red Swimsuit, if I remember the name correctly), it's on the Cherished Skirt, but if I can remember what the undershirt I used for number 2 is, I could probably substitute that for it, as it will cover the yellow. I appreciate the rating very much, and thank you for your time :). |
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yeah I know, Thats what I aimed for :D Quote:
Oh, I thought it was. lol Yeah? well maybe something else could work too :D Your welcome and I'm hope things work out :D |
Changed the shoes. They look good. :3
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Eeeep!Still not good enough eh?Foxxi will make his avi better!^^
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Like things to add: Contacts Heartballoon Staff of healing Red or white fireflies So I think any of those items could really enhance the avi is so0 many ways. contacts: to bring red/color to the eyes and make them pop. Heartballoon: To help bring more red to the top of the avi and to use up as much dead space as possible. Staff of healing: It has the gold/white of the avi and would bring a different handheld to the avi and take up dead space. Fireflies: to bring more color to the avi and to make the avi pop more. Now, how you add the item(s) is up to you, You can add them all or just one/two, but either way it'll make the avi better as well as make it your own. Oh and the shoes do work really well this avi, bravo. I didn't even think of those shoes 8/10, almost perfect yet not quite there :D Quote:
You'll get there Foxxi :D I know you will, you've come close before. |
May you please rate my current avvie?
(white, black, green, yellow) |
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Well... The eye flow is off, the brightness of the jacket pulls the eye from the head to where you don't even look to the head until you scan down to the feet. The head seem a lil plain and blah compare to the bright colors used on the rest of the avi. I think the chicky on my head would be a good idea to bring more color to the head I would try use the harem gloves to bring more white to the bottom half of the avi and to tame the bright yellow. Also trading one of the green bra like tops to lay over the white top to bring more green up the avi. (Tiki bra or Royal top of Artemis) Glammy's black waspie would bring more black to the mid section and if you didn't want to add one of the top you could always try the green bandana. Then maybe a green hairpin instead of the sunflower, it really doesn't go or match anything. These are all suggestion and idea to help make you avis flow better. You don't have to add all or any of the items, but I think chicky would be the one thing I might add to help the flow.... 6/10, just doesn't flow right but a good start :D |
Lol, alright.
Edit: What about my earthday inspired one? (changed avvies) |
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wow, thats quiet a difference. Very eye catching, so let go head and give it a once over. Good flow, though again, the head still is rather plain compare to the rest of the avi. Though the rest of it is really nice, the skirt is a bit of in tone/shade but still looks good with the avi. At this point in time I would suggest a neck item, and possible a different hairpin, one you could see would be better. :D Other than those lil things its very nice and gets 8/10. Just needs some tweaking to make things flow more evenly. |
Divi is so hard to please!xDD
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Besides having high standards is nothing bad, if I was a push over for every pretty avi, no one would want me to rate their avis. |
I have been having problems with the hairpin as well.
xD The neck is a problem though...hmm... ::plays around in MAC:: |
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