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Foxxi 04-03-2008 12:36 AM

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Originally Posted by Divine_lil_brat
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Originally Posted by ~Fox.of.Fire~
Divi is so hard to please!xDD

noooooo XD I'm just trying to get you guys to make the best possible avi I know you can make.

Besides having high standards is nothing bad, if I was a push over for every pretty avi, no one would want me to rate their avis.


Hmm true true!^^

Divine_lil_brat 04-03-2008 12:44 AM

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Originally Posted by Winterwolfgoddess
I have been having problems with the hairpin as well.

xD The neck is a problem though...hmm...

::plays around in MAC::

Maybe a bandana?

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Originally Posted by ~Fox.of.Fire~
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Originally Posted by Divine_lil_brat
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Originally Posted by ~Fox.of.Fire~
Divi is so hard to please!xDD

noooooo XD I'm just trying to get you guys to make the best possible avi I know you can make.

Besides having high standards is nothing bad, if I was a push over for every pretty avi, no one would want me to rate their avis.


Hmm true true!^^


I know ^^ thats why I said it lol. Besides I'm not that tough, just have an eye for detail and what not :D

Foxxi 04-03-2008 12:54 AM

Yeah I think that's what gets me!xD I don't like my avi noa.There's to much red in the middle.;__; xD

Divine_lil_brat 04-03-2008 12:59 AM

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Originally Posted by ~Fox.of.Fire~
Yeah I think that's what gets me!xD I don't like my avi noa.There's to much red in the middle.;__; xD

Needs gold :o

Winterwolfgoddess 04-03-2008 01:27 AM

::scrunches nose::
I hate the bandanas to be honest. xD

Divine_lil_brat 04-03-2008 02:21 AM

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Originally Posted by Winterwolfgoddess
::scrunches nose::
I hate the bandanas to be honest. xD

oh lol, how about the pink choker?

Winterwolfgoddess 04-03-2008 02:39 AM

hmm...Pink? xD

::looks::

It looks kinda weird....

xD I changed the hairpin though :D

Eserel 04-03-2008 02:39 AM

8"3
LOL,
Rate my new lame avvie.
I don't really care for it,
But I just had to use the new items.

NVM.
In the middle of changing.

Divine_lil_brat 04-03-2008 03:53 AM

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Originally Posted by Eserel
8"3
LOL,
Rate my new lame avvie.
I don't really care for it,
But I just had to use the new items.

NVM.
In the middle of changing.

lol okay, let me know when your done XD

Divine_lil_brat 04-03-2008 07:13 AM

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Originally Posted by Winterwolfgoddess
hmm...Pink? xD

::looks::

It looks kinda weird....

xD I changed the hairpin though :D


Whoa, I didn't even see that post until now. Sorry about that. I like the new pin, its look good, you can see it. I said pink because theres pink on the avi in random spots, but maybe something with a red or green could work.

Divine_lil_brat 04-03-2008 10:17 PM

Here the link to my randomly new thread Where I make you an avi of your dreams.

Click here to see more

Crappy Lia 04-03-2008 11:38 PM

do you rate dream avi's? >___<
if so, could you rate this one?

Navi 04-03-2008 11:56 PM

Even though I know this color scheme is way overdone - I'm curious as to what you think of this avatar.

wish 04-05-2008 01:27 PM



rate avvy pretty please miss divine? :3 <33

http://img404.imageshack.us/img404/2...teblacked1.png

http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/9123/avvyxt9.jpg

Divine_lil_brat 04-07-2008 07:00 AM

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Originally Posted by Enma
do you rate dream avi's? >___<
if so, could you rate this one?


Sure thing :D

Its cute but the scarf kinda throws it off. The color flow is head to toe as is the color flow but the head is drowned in black. Kinda keeps pulling the eye up rather than letting it flow to the feet with ease. Nice use of items and layer though :D

7/10


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Originally Posted by Navi
Even though I know this color scheme is way overdone - I'm curious as to what you think of this avatar.

I don't think I've seen this color combo before. If I have it didn't leave an impression.

Lets see, the flow is head to toe, though I think black earings would pop better and help the flow going. White shoes would be a good idea as well. The item combo is cute and over all is very simple/clean yet cute to look at.

7/10


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Originally Posted by wish


Sure thing ^^ Wish

Avi 1)

The flow is head to toe as well as the color flow. I like how you layered things and how you used the items. Though I think the white is a lil off balance, more on the head/gloves would be great but if not oh well. Its still a pretty avi. Perhaps a hand held could really enhance this avi.

7/10 the black/white balance is a lil off, maybe a different hairstyle?

Avi 2)

Very cute, simple yet eye catching. A smidgen more black on the head would be great and really help to balance out the blacks on the avi. Love the hairpin with this avi. A belt would be nice, but a need. Maybe a different necklace would be better to bring more blue on to the avi.

6/10 more could be done with it to make it stand out rather than being another cute avi. Hand helds, belt, scarf? any could work :)

Majinkoz 04-08-2008 03:21 PM

Could I pleast have a rate. XD

The only thing I think i want/need to change are the shoes..but I'm still working ou the whole sock/shoe combination. I just stuck the chicky down there because it added the gold on the bottom that I needed. >.<

Divine_lil_brat 04-08-2008 06:17 PM

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Originally Posted by Majinkoz
Could I pleast have a rate. XD

The only thing I think i want/need to change are the shoes..but I'm still working ou the whole sock/shoe combination. I just stuck the chicky down there because it added the gold on the bottom that I needed. >.<

Lol yeah, well I played with in on MAC and here are some of the ideas I came up with.


Bitter silver clam diggers
Black socks (any will do)
Gold shoes (any will do)

Or

White stockings/socks
Black Leg warmers
Gold-shoes(any will do)

And I would also thing about adding gold earings to help keep the flow running smoothly from the hat to the neck area and so on all the way down. The staff is great but the gold still needs to run smoothly on the avi itself. Oh, and gloves to help finish off the avi.

The Duckie was a good idea to help birng the gold flow all the way down.

I like the glitch and how you layered the items

8/10, Good Job.

Caroline 04-08-2008 06:32 PM

Rate me please, Divine? :)

Refresh if you don't see red/gold/black.

Divine_lil_brat 04-08-2008 06:55 PM

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Originally Posted by Caroline
Rate me please, Divine? :)

Refresh if you don't see red/gold/black.

Sure thing :D

Well I refreshed a few times and the only one that pops up would be the Gold/pink/red/black one so I'm going to go with, thats the one you wanted rated :)

Let me start with, I think its a Kick ass avi, and I love how it looks cluttered without being cluttered. Love the colors and how you really stop to look at it and try to figure it all out.

Rate:

Well the eye is drawn to the head and flow quickly moves downward to the rest of the avi. As for color flow, it works but its not strong. The black looks more like splashes here and there but as for the gold and red, its strong, even the pink.

My suggestions would be:

try to even out the black balance to the rest of the of the avi. The mid section looks busy, while the legs look kinda plain, try adding leg warmers and for the head, it needs more red and not from the mask. I know the top and shoes are a set but its hard to find things to match that set without using the set. Also maybe a different hairstyle or a different shade of the gold, just one or the other not both.

Over all I find it to be a very striking avi but color flow is off/ weak. Needs a few tweaks to help bring it up to its full potential.

8.5/10, almost a 9.

Caroline 04-08-2008 10:34 PM

Yup, that's the one. Thank you!

Hmm yeah, the black does kind of stick out in random splotches. Do you know if Glammy's black waspie is on the same layer as the belts? It removes the belt in the MAC but I don't know if that's accurate on Mene. It'd be awesome if the waspie could layer underneath. Legwarmers are a good idea; the black escort ones could work. ;o Yeah, I've been trying to come up with something to bring more red to the head area. The mask layered above head/hairpin items in the MAC so it looked more balanced with the red ribbon and red gems in the mask sticking out. I've tried red hair, but every style in red looks kind of weird to me.

Rainbows 04-08-2008 10:40 PM


Hey, Diviiiiiiiiine?
o 3o
-puppy dog eyes-
Could Rainbows get a rating?
> >


http://i203.photobucket.com/albums/a...ie/Avatar1.png

xD I don't think this is overdone, I promise!
-crosses my fingers behind my back-
When I screencapped it onto paint, I thought that a lot of avatars I've seen have been like this... =P
Oops?

> ~<
Sorry.
And, what do you think about my current avatar, also?
I'm not hoping it would be good enough for admin's pick (yet D: ), just wondering what I could do to it...

Winterwolfgoddess 04-09-2008 03:04 PM

Hmm, well, I just created an avvie and I am not entirely sure if I am satisfied with it or not, but I think it is halfway decent:
http://i32.tinypic.com/3013qcm.jpg
What do you think?

Majinkoz 04-11-2008 07:07 PM

i finally decided to try and get the MAC again and this time it worked! yay! I'm really not sure of all the different layers but this is what I came up with, tell me what you think. :)

http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j2...oz/GirlAvi.jpg

teddy super nova 04-11-2008 09:09 PM

what do you think of mine?

Eserel 04-12-2008 05:14 AM

Rate these?

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f2...Picture3-3.png

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f2...a/Picture8.png


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