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Apocrypha 04-12-2008 06:24 AM

May I have a rate of this? :]

http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/8116/apowsd1.jpg

Thank you :]

Divine_lil_brat 04-12-2008 07:59 AM

Okay, I'll start working on them now, and have it all posted by morning...

if not sooner.

Divine_lil_brat 04-13-2008 12:38 AM

-people on page 44-

Quote:

Originally Posted by Caroline
Yup, that's the one. Thank you!

Hmm yeah, the black does kind of stick out in random splotches. Do you know if Glammy's black waspie is on the same layer as the belts? It removes the belt in the MAC but I don't know if that's accurate on Mene. It'd be awesome if the waspie could layer underneath. Legwarmers are a good idea; the black escort ones could work. ;o Yeah, I've been trying to come up with something to bring more red to the head area. The mask layered above head/hairpin items in the MAC so it looked more balanced with the red ribbon and red gems in the mask sticking out. I've tried red hair, but every style in red looks kind of weird to me.


The glammy's blet is set as a belt and will remove the other belt.

But I agree with you on the rest of it, The leg warmer layer over stocking on mene but not on the mac, go figure XD


Quote:

Originally Posted by XxRAiNBoWS

Hey, Diviiiiiiiiine?
o 3o
-puppy dog eyes-
Could Rainbows get a rating?
> >


http://i203.photobucket.com/albums/a...ie/Avatar1.png

xD I don't think this is overdone, I promise!
-crosses my fingers behind my back-
When I screencapped it onto paint, I thought that a lot of avatars I've seen have been like this... =P
Oops?

> ~<
Sorry.
And, what do you think about my current avatar, also?
I'm not hoping it would be good enough for admin's pick (yet D: ), just wondering what I could do to it...

Sure thing, Sorry it took me so long to get back XD

Okay so for your current, lovin' it.

The color flow is nice, but it needs more gray pasted the belt as well as red. But I do like the look. 7/10

As for the other the avi, its been done, just in other colors....

Its cute but the color flow is off and really isn't that well thought out. I'd give it a 6/10 need more layering and more green to help the balance even out.


Quote:

Originally Posted by Winterwolfgoddess
Hmm, well, I just created an avvie and I am not entirely sure if I am satisfied with it or not, but I think it is halfway decent:
http://i32.tinypic.com/3013qcm.jpg
What do you think?


I like it, its different yet mainstream. Its school girl-ish with a twist. The color flow is good, head to toe, though it needs more of that off white-ish on the head. I love the layering and the over all look and feel of the avi, I haven't seen any like this and I love it for that.

8/10 very nice, but its lacking something... I just can't put my finger on it.


Quote:

Originally Posted by Majinkoz
i finally decided to try and get the MAC again and this time it worked! yay! I'm really not sure of all the different layers but this is what I came up with, tell me what you think. :)

http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j2...oz/GirlAvi.jpg

uhm, I'm not feelin' it as some would say. It has to much gold/yellow going on and not enough green nor pink, white to help balance out the colors. I hate to say, but it doesn't look like it was thought out at all.... I like the idea of items used but the colors just don't mesh that well together.

4/10


Quote:

Originally Posted by teddy super nova
what do you think of mine?

Its randomly cute and eye catching. The color flow is good, as well as the eye flow. The black is a bit off balance and seem to keep the eye there. I like the use of items as well the layering of items. I think you might need more yellow/gold on the head to really help the colors to be balance.

7/10

Divine_lil_brat 04-13-2008 01:12 AM

-People on page 45-

Sure thing Eserel ^^

Avi 1)

Rate: 9/10

I love the look, reminds me so much of Arabian nights. The color flow is good, more red on the head would be a good idea, maybe the heart balloon or a head band. And maybe another hand held like the Deep Crimson Gold Pistol, something that will tie with your color scheme.

Avi 2)

Rate: 8.5/10

Same with the look,, love it but this one seems to be lacking. Hand helds, fire flies, something to help complete the look.

Love them Eserel, good job ^^

Quote:

Originally Posted by Apocrypha
May I have a rate of this? :]

http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/8116/apowsd1.jpg

Thank you :]


Sure t'ing :)

Color flow as well as eye flow is well done, Right away I would suggest a black belt to bring black i9nto the mid of the avi. The green/gold/white are really well balanced and I love the look and layering of the avi. its busy yet not to over done.

8.5/10 the belt would really kick it up a notch. :D

Winterwolfgoddess 04-13-2008 01:46 AM

xD That is the problem I am having with the avatar. It is simple yet something seems missing and it has been driving me nuts since I am tempted to make it.

As for the top, I am thinking of adding the new Ivory Cream Bonnet once that is added to the MAC to see what it looks like. xD That might not be a good idea though.
I was also thinking of adding the paw bag.

Divine_lil_brat 04-13-2008 01:48 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Winterwolfgoddess
xD That is the problem I am having with the avatar. It is simple yet something seems missing and it has been driving me nuts since I am tempted to make it.

As for the top, I am thinking of adding the new Ivory Cream Bonnet once that is added to the MAC to see what it looks like. xD That might not be a good idea though.
I was also thinking of adding the paw bag.


yeah, those could be what its missing. I would love to see it with both items after you added them. I think it would really set the avi over the top ^^

Winterwolfgoddess 04-13-2008 02:02 AM

I will wait to do it again until the MAC is updated and then see what you think. ::nods::

Divine_lil_brat 04-13-2008 02:08 AM

yay ^^

Eserel 04-13-2008 02:39 AM

:3
Thanks for the rates!
I'm questing the second one right now.
Then I plan on getting the Royal Bow of Tapio and some Red Fireflies.
I was just too lazy to remake it and add it in.

Divine_lil_brat 04-13-2008 04:29 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Eserel
:3
Thanks for the rates!
I'm questing the second one right now.
Then I plan on getting the Royal Bow of Tapio and some Red Fireflies.
I was just too lazy to remake it and add it in.

Those could works, try macing it and bring it back. I'd love to see it ^^

Paprika 04-13-2008 04:45 AM

Can you rate these outfits? (lemme get the linkies real quick xD)

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g1...eamavvie-1.jpg
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g1.../meneavvie.jpg

Divine_lil_brat 04-13-2008 06:04 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Paprika


Sure thing ^^

Avi 1)

Rate: 7/10

the color flow is good but the silver belt really doesn't go, but a black belt would be a good idea to help tie on the hat. The lamb is cute and gives a nice look.

It simple yet to plain to make a splash.

Avi 2)

Rate: 6/10

Its cute but been done before and now lacks any pop. The color flow is good though and I like the items, but like I said its been done to over kill.

foggyday 04-13-2008 06:32 AM

Hi divine.XD
i am just here randomly..cough, yesh you saw me in the rate the avi above your thread

i tried to add more white..Dx..not sure.for ..i dont really like these cutie scarfs..sigh...

/looks for help

Arkeyla 04-13-2008 10:45 AM

Could you please give my current avi a rate and critique?

Edit - spelling mistakes!

Eserel 04-13-2008 04:32 PM

XP
I'll remake it later Dev,
I'm having too much fun making new ones.
8"3

I tried making the impossible Rag work.
Did I sorta succeed?
XP
I think I need to take off the sash.
http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f2...a/Picture1.png

Navi 04-13-2008 06:54 PM

I always come with over-done color schemes; but I like the new items. Something feels wrong about this though. Thoughts?

Foxxi 04-13-2008 07:03 PM

Rate my avi?I know you made something similar in the thread I made,but I added a little bit more on it.

Divine_lil_brat 04-13-2008 09:44 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by foggyday
Hi divine.XD
i am just here randomly..cough, yesh you saw me in the rate the avi above your thread

i tried to add more white..Dx..not sure.for ..i dont really like these cutie scarfs..sigh...

/looks for help


I love that avi, to bad you changed it before I was able to give you a full once over, but as for the one your wearing now...

I like it, very simple in color and items but it works very well. The only thing I could think of adding is maybe pink earing.

7/10


Quote:

Originally Posted by Arkeyla
Could you please give my current avi a rate and critique?

Edit - spelling mistakes!



Sure thing ^^

Well the color flow is good as well as the eye flow. Layering is well done, I think purple around the neck area would be a good add. Maybe neck tie or earings could do that. Simple, clean but it works well. Still needs some work on making everything mesh better.

6.5/10, Maybe a different hair style or add another hand held?


Quote:

Originally Posted by Eserel
XP
I'll remake it later Dev,
I'm having too much fun making new ones.
8"3

I tried making the impossible Rag work.
Did I sorta succeed?
XP
I think I need to take off the sash.
http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f2...a/Picture1.png



I think it was a good attempt. I know how hard it is to work with the rag top, tried and failed lol.

The colors flow well but maybe pants would have worked better than a skirt, of long shorts. The color balance is pretty good but it needs white at the neck to break up all the beig.

7/10 simple but it works, Very nicely done.


Quote:

Originally Posted by Navi
I always come with over-done color schemes; but I like the new items. Something feels wrong about this though. Thoughts?

0-0 whoa, lot of layering and splashes of colors. Its all the same color just different shades. Its to busy even for my taste. The dress is to distracting and pulls the eye from the head way to much. Its kinda a mess and hurts the eye.

6/10


Quote:

Originally Posted by ~Fox.of.Fire~
Rate my avi?I know you made something similar in the thread I made,but I added a little bit more on it.



lol okay.

color flow is good but the white and gold are a lil unbalanced around the neck and head area. The shoes are a bit random with the look but work.

7.5/10, just needs some work.

foggyday 04-14-2008 12:24 AM

hm..which one were u looking at before??XD

wait..did i have pink gloves on [email protected]@?

pink earings eh..*.*

Alaunt 04-14-2008 05:38 AM

I was just wondering if there was any way that I could modify my currently avi.

I know that the legcoolers don't quite match, but I don't have any stocking to take them off . . . so, please ignore those, unless you think they are fine.

Divine_lil_brat 04-14-2008 10:56 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by foggyday
hm..which one were u looking at before??XD

wait..did i have pink gloves on [email protected]@?

pink earings eh..*.*

I don't remember, I think it was green/red/black.

uh huh pink earings ^^

Quote:

Originally Posted by Alaunt
I was just wondering if there was any way that I could modify my currently avi.

I know that the legcoolers don't quite match, but I don't have any stocking to take them off . . . so, please ignore those, unless you think they are fine.

I think they work fine with the avi.

Madoneko 04-14-2008 11:07 PM


What would you recommend I change about my avi and how? :3

Also, just for fun, give me a rate? I'm not sure it'll go high but it's worth a shot! ^o^

Chexala 04-14-2008 11:29 PM

Hi.
Just curious what you think of my current avatar.
C:

Eserel 04-15-2008 01:37 AM

XD
Kay.
So I fixed my rag one,
I think the fire sash thing was just throwing it all off.
And I couldn't resist adding my favorite color / item combo in.
XDD

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f2...Picture1-5.png http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f2...Picture4-2.png

foggyday 04-15-2008 06:19 AM

ohhhh.XD u didnt refresh or something back then..neither way.thanks?XP

me still need to search for pink earings..*.*


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