Saravi Boo
Licking threads since 2010!
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05-26-2011, 08:10 PM
Hmm...pretty but it seems a little plain...maybe add a staff or something in her hand?
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Anaxilea
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05-26-2011, 08:12 PM
My favorite thing about this avatar is the yin yang fishes. They really complete the look! You've got a disproportionate white/black ratio though, so the lightness of the top fish is throwing it off a little. I'd suggest adding something white around your torso area.
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Roka
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05-26-2011, 09:14 PM
Definitely take out the headband, fangs, and fish bag.
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Enzeru
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05-26-2011, 10:16 PM
Add teal on top of the head.
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Bearzy
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05-27-2011, 05:13 AM
If that background is purposfully purple. I say don't change a thing.
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Roka
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05-28-2011, 02:38 AM
Separate the red and black near the feet with a touch of white?
Enzeru: It's nearly impossible to do that. xD That's why I made the eyes teal.
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Chickie Nuggs
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05-28-2011, 09:12 PM
I think that, instead of the black heart pin, you should find a small hairpin item that has teal color on it. However, I don't know if there are any, so don't change a thing unless you can find a teal pin. If there are any in candy form, that would go so perfect with your halloween theme. :P
Edit: Nevermind I just re-read your comment saying that there are no teal hair pin items so...don't change a thing.
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bloodstainedwings
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05-29-2011, 03:29 PM
add a white belt. it would help to balance out the white in your outfit.
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Ignis
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05-30-2011, 04:14 PM
I would say add some purple or whatever color that is in your neck area. To separate the blue hair and shoulder area.
It also looks like the organza is a different kind of [orange?] than the rest of the yellow-y gold color.
Maybe add some white in the feet area?
I love the colors you chose to use by the way! <3
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Bearzy
dusting off the cobwebs
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05-31-2011, 03:52 AM
Your colours are wonderfully matched, but you seem a little cluttered. Too many colours perhaps? What happens if you take out the green?
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Hresvelgr
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05-31-2011, 07:52 PM
I would layer your stockings. Some long grey and white maybe towards your foot. It just seems very top heavy to me. :/
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McNugget
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05-31-2011, 09:43 PM
Maybe add some white to the head?Like a hat or something?
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05-31-2011, 11:26 PM
Usuke... you are rather cluttered. I can't stare too long at it. I think it's a combo of the lighting and skeleton, lose one and I'd feel like it wasn't so manic.
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Bearzy
dusting off the cobwebs
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06-01-2011, 08:27 AM
I hate to say it... but pink. You need more pink.
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Enzeru
Her Ladyship
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06-01-2011, 05:33 PM
Hair color doesn't match.
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White_rose930
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06-01-2011, 06:11 PM
The background color makes me feel like you need a little bit of purple in the outfit =/
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Dystopia
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06-02-2011, 04:45 AM
o.o Its a bit simple, but I like it. Leave it.
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Beliar
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06-02-2011, 07:44 AM
I like the theme going on here with the white and red. The long black hair is too stand alone-ish I think though, so maybe a little more black should be incorporated into the outfit to pull it together.
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Ignis
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06-02-2011, 01:51 PM
I think the Hair color is throwing me off a bit...Maybe change your hair to red to match the other reds in your outfit.
Just darken the hair, I think. Maybe you could have a hand held item to match your theme?
there is a lot of white at your feet area...but I don't really see a problem with that, unless you meant for the bow to cover the gold down there... The head is the main area that needs focusing on, i think.
I love where you are going with it though~ <3
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Iltu
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06-02-2011, 02:14 PM
Don't change a thing! Your avatar is super cute and balanced.
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Krazy Kiara
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06-02-2011, 08:52 PM
dont change a thing its cute and i likey it :drool:
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Mystic
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06-02-2011, 10:53 PM
A bit of white near the feet. I like the top half, the bottom just is missing a bit of white.
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Linnea
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06-02-2011, 11:51 PM
you should add something orange on the neck to match the orange on the legs and the little peeking out of the waist!
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Roka
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06-08-2011, 10:50 PM
Don't change a thing. It's wonderful.
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Fiona_Watergate
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06-08-2011, 11:58 PM
Don't change a thing I love her so so so much.
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