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#1576
Old 05-19-2010, 06:09 PM

Good: I love your avi! By mixing the silver and black with that shade of red, it tones down the warm tones in it, and I like that a lot. The wings are perfect too! It's really hard to dislike anything really....

Harsh: I don't know id I like the yellow gold on the armbands and the anklets & sandals. Perhaps more silver? Or that brass that is in your hairclip, that works too!

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#1577
Old 05-19-2010, 10:07 PM

Loveness: You used that flowy dress. While on another avi I would have hated it, it fits in right with the theme.

Hateness: The goat-like legs. The heck?

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#1578
Old 05-19-2010, 11:19 PM

Pro: The colors are good together.
Con: The fox hat doesn't seem to fit into the avatar.

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#1579
Old 05-19-2010, 11:39 PM

Good: Sort of moon goddess theme, I'm guessing.

Harsh: The stars and the Shredder like grill on her head.

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#1580
Old 05-20-2010, 02:16 AM

Good: Interesting look you have going. The sleeves match the eyes.

Harsh: Needs a lot of work. Very incomplete looking. Also almost nothing ties those colors together. You have three separate pieces in three different colors. Other than the sleeves, as mentioned above, no color is repeated which makes you look very mismatched. I would like to see it once you do a bit more with it.

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#1581
Old 05-20-2010, 02:22 AM

lol you again~ ;)

Good: I love the almost seamless white.

Bad: The box on the head and around the waist dont match exactly but thats just me being picky :3 I love the simplicity of the look though :)

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#1582
Old 05-20-2010, 02:27 AM

Good: I like the way you used the colours, and how you made her look mysterious. :XD
Bad: I think the white on the arms seems like too much for that colour. Maybe put some gold on the arms or wrists instead?

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#1583
Old 05-20-2010, 02:29 AM

Good: I love the theme of like a moviegoer actually in a perhaps a godzilla movie. or maybe a little kid playing movie. very cute!!
Bad: um... The outfit could be more compex, maybe a different shirt that spreads the colors out more evenly. But really I'm searching for a bad there.

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#1584
Old 05-20-2010, 02:33 AM

Good: Wow! Very nice. It's a very unique looking avi which can be hard to pull off. I love it.

Harsh: Umm...the snowy cobblestones are a bluish color that doesn't really tie in to the rest of the avi. (really fishing for a bad here)

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#1585
Old 05-20-2010, 06:08 PM

Good: I like the theme. I love cats :3 Its an overall nice and simple avi, very nice :)

Harsh: I think you need a different color shirt. Maybe a lighter pink. There's just too much white. And the nose is a little bit wierd in my opinion. I think you could do without it. Or try something else.

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#1586
Old 05-20-2010, 09:04 PM

Good: It looks very pretty and elegant.

Bad: The shades of red vary a lot through the avi, like the one in the skirt looks more pinkish than red, and it'd be awesome if they were the same shade or at least closer together in shade

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#1587
Old 05-20-2010, 09:53 PM

Good: Oh wow, you really make that work! It has flow, elegance and everything seems to tie together very well.

questionable: I guess if I really look at it, the black shirt could be done better. I'm not sure if that openness to it fits just right. Perhaps just a solid black in stead of the plain white undershirt?

I wouldn't change it all too much though ^_^ very well done.

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#1588
Old 05-20-2010, 10:05 PM

Happy: I love the silver on such dark skin.
Sad: I love the bits of the circlet on the face, but the main part of it (with the heart) doesn't match anything else. :<

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#1589
Old 05-20-2010, 10:12 PM

good: I love the color contrasts the white, with the black, and the pink looks great!!! absolutely awesome!

bad: The avi looks really cute and like happy until you look at the face, then it takes on a kinda creepy feel, it seems kinda strange

(silenttiger what is that ribbon thing you have equipped? is it part of that skirt??)

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#1590
Old 05-20-2010, 10:15 PM

Woah!!! Totally in love with it! ^u^

Umm...I guess the only thing I could think of to be bad is when you pay attention to the shoes, they don't seem to flow with the rest of it. Like, what you can see if kinda bulky...

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#1591
Old 05-21-2010, 03:39 AM

good: its simple and not overly busy

harsh: its boring and unbalanced

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#1592
Old 05-21-2010, 04:22 AM

Good: It is very well balanced in colour.
Bad: The big spikey wheel thing looks sharp and pointy. :lol: I honestly see nothing bad about this one BSW. XD

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#1593
Old 05-21-2010, 05:23 AM

The Good : I like how the greens are working together in this outfit~ :3 <3<3

The Harsh : I wish you didn't use so many items from one set. ^^;; Much as I have nothing against using sets together, it would have been nice if there was a little bit more variation so that you could have made your avatar more unique~ :'D <3<3

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#1594
Old 05-21-2010, 05:25 AM

Good: ABSOLUTELY LOV THIS AVI!! I love the color scheme and the wisp of smoke loos amazing.

Bad: um i hav only one bad and it's so nitpicky and silly cuz this avi is awesome but the gold on the bottm of the dress looks a little strange though i dont know why.

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#1595
Old 05-21-2010, 05:29 AM

The Good : Love the composition of this avatar~! ^^ Also like the roses, which normally I wouldn't like. xDD;;

The Harsh : The bow looks sort of odd for me? =O I think a smaller handheld item on that side would be better. XP <3<3

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#1596
Old 05-21-2010, 06:32 AM

Good: =O It's amazing. I'm a sucker for those hinted colors~~ <3 especially since you tied the indigo color in so well with the gold tinted piece around the shoulders~

harsh: well, there's something... confusing about it... but not sure what o-O sorry. :D i like the smoke kinda i think maybe... :XD

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#1597
Old 05-21-2010, 02:17 PM

The Good : The gold popping out is interesting~ =O <3<3

The Harsh : I really don't like the skull borders, sorry. >3>;; </3

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#1598
Old 05-21-2010, 02:57 PM

Good: It has a nice flow to it. It's nicely put together. :)
Bad: I see nothing wrong with it except that it seems a bit empty. Perhaps add something in the backround?

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#1599
Old 05-21-2010, 03:20 PM

good: everything matches really well.

harsh: it feels very set like which lacks creativity. there is much more that could be done thats more creative to get the same feeling.

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Old 05-22-2010, 06:37 AM

Good: I love the way you tied the colors to the background. very pretty!!

harsh: the chakram seems kinda random but at the same time i love it so i don't know!

 


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