+ Very simple and nice theme. Something I'd wear IRL. ^^
- .I agree with BBR on this. The coffin seems out of place. You could add some vampire fangs to make it seem like you're vampire, since it sort of feels like it already. I mean...you've got a glass of blood in your hands and a coffin next to you! The hair color and the colors of your outfit sort of contribute to that too. XD

Good ~ It's very lovely and flows nicely.
Harsh ~ Get rid of the greenery. It doesn't really add anything to the outfit and theme.

@ sweet_serender159 - Like Wooh suggested adding fangs would help tie the coffin better. I would also suggest adding a headband like the Bitter Band or Licorice Headband and add a silver hairpin if you do. Now if you go with a headband like the Treats Headband or then a red or red black hairpin will work. You could also go with the Tricks Headband and a red and silver hairpin instead. Of course there are some bows in Headworks that you might want to look at and consider as well. I'd have to look around to give you an exact suggestion on a hairpin.

Other then that I'd suggest getting a silver belt or something for the middle. The Moon Child Sash would be a good choice.

+Its so pretty! I love all the colors and how the black helps give it more depth.
-It's really, really busy, and only because the patterns on your items are busy, not because you have a lot of items on. It limits anything more you could do with this.

+ KARATE KID ^^ i like that theme ;P
- maybe you can add something gold on your head.

Good: The nature look, always good.
Harsh: The white skirt, it looks like theres a waterfall from under your smaller skirt... .__.;;
*awkward silence*

Ooh, I'm liking this Elwing! :D

The Good: Great color use -- I'm glad to see you branching out to different brown shades!

The Harsh: I don't like the hairpin. The purple throws it all off. I'd probably switch it for the Night Hairpin instead.

Good: The balance of the whites/blues is done well.
Harsh: The avatar blends in with the background a bit too much.

Good ~ I love the colors and it's very pretty.
Harsh ~ The speck of green from the necklace stands out. If only that necklace didn't have that speck of green.

{ Good } I love the colours!!!
[ Harsh ] the staff has this golden moon and it's not really the same colour as the rest of the orange/black/white thing you have going on


also thanks for the help! d besides the headbands and such did you have any other ideas?

Good: Your hair and eyes match wonderfully!!!

Bad: Um...items...any items?

Good: Overall I love the avatars
Harsh: The hair is a touch too light.

+Wonderful combination of ancient/modern items.
-Tiny greenish/yellow on the necklace distracted me for a bit.

good: beautiful. you look like a pretty tree
harsh: the eyes don't match all that well

Good: Oh, so pretty!!!! XD

Harsh: The bodice and eyes don’t match the rest very well…

Good: I like overall how it looks. It makes me think of some kind of royalty with her royal pet.
Bad: The dim red you have on your head would probably look better if you had something like the classic red to put on your head. That way it would probably even out with the other red on you. :yes:

Good: I love how fun this avatar looks.
Harsh: The squid makes it a bit top heavy.

Good: I like how you used the gold and black. :yes:
Bad: I don't like that tiny bit of green. It just looks a bit odd.

Good: You have a great balance between fun with the candy and the death with the skulls. Yin and yang, yeah. =)
Harsh: Can't say I am a fan of the calamari look, sorry. They just tend to freak me out. x_x

good: all the colors fit together; everything was put together very well
harsh: its not as creative as it could be

{ Good } I love the mask haha its epic!
[ Harsh ] hmm feels not yet finished!

+Nice, clean outfit.
-Maybe too much gray on the head.

Good: I love it! It’s all nature-y!!!

Harsh: The eyes, and then the white on the thighs looks just a bit off…

The Good: Nice use of a red/white color scheme! Many times this can look overdone, but I think you've made it quite fresh! :D

The Harsh: (and this isn't really harsh, but a suggestion) I'd like to see your hair with white highlights... Just to mimic the vertical red and white lines of your skirt. :D

(I’ll definitely give it a shot, but in the past everyone has said it makes it look pink! >.< I’ve been trying with the hair for forever…hate this new setup…)

Good: So dark and mysterious. Original and well put together.

Harsh: Oh, jeez…I really don’t wanna evaluate any moderators…don’t be mad please? I think you should try and bring a bit more green into the avatar…

Good: I like the over all balance and how elegant the whole avatar looks. The darker hair looks better as well.

Harsh: the light red on the head stands out a bit too much now.