I want other peoples oppinions. I've been working on this avatar for I dont know how long, and I would like to know what you think. Add? Take away?

I just bought a bunch of new things from the Special Even Store for the new event, and sat here for about an hour trying on things and selling back what I didnt like.

The scheme is supposed to be red and gold, and my original intentions were to make him look like he was from the desert, but the new items have somewhat changed that.

Not too bad! But it just looks like theres something missing.
You should try some other shoes or maybe stockings underneath them.
Maybe some black ones to go with your hair?
The bottom definitely needs more black AND gold, like the gold on the head item.
Red gloves would work well too, maybe the dragon armor ones, not sure of the name!
OHOH, and ontop of the dragon ones, black leather gloves.

I think your avatar is pretty good but I think maybe you should get rid of the lantern because the wood part is not very will... It does not match very much. Maybe try something else like a toy of some sort? I have no idea. ^^

I would change the eye color to coordinate with the color scheme, so either gold or red. I don't really like the look with the lantern, no so much the staff part of it but the actual lantern. Perhaps have a lantern in the other hand, and maybe have the Spirit of the Phoenix in the background?

I think you should change your hair to red. I know the theme kind of requires it to be bare, but it still bothers me a bit just because it doesn't look complete. try some brown pants or socks to match the staff. Red or gold eyes & something red around the shoulders would work.

I guess I'd put some more red on the top of the avatar. Can't think of anything though. Sorry -___-

i think it looks good but i would definitely change the eye color.

I've actualy been trying to get up enough gold to get the red and yellow/gold wings from the last event. The one with the flowers? But yeah, that is supposed to be on there. It isn't /really/ complete yet, anyway.

Thank you all for your suggestions! I'll try some of the things you've all mentioned.

Alright. I've made a few changes. I changed hair, eyes, items the avatar holds, and what he's wearing on his arms. I just cant seem to find a good necklace.

Hmm...
I like your avi as it is right now ;)
Think everything match well together ^.~

It looks fine as it is to me.
But personaly I don't like that staff xD

Personaly, I dont like the staff either. XD But I cant find anything else to match that I can afford now, after buying all kinds of new things.

...Anyone think it would look alright if I added one or both of the last to Event items? The moon and/or the sash thing?

I think it looks perfect the way it is.
Adding them might make it look too cluttered, but you can give it a try if you feel like it.

^___^

I'm really thinking mostly about the 'Stardust Sash'... The moon might.... But then again, so would the wings I had wanted....

Yeah the stardust sash or the moon would be okay, but I'm not sure how that'd look like. Gold wings would also be a good idea...or the Astral Halo?

Gold/ red stuff I guess, but the avatar I'm looking at now looks mighty fine to me.

=3

^^ Thank you! ..I was thinking of the red and gold/yellow fairy-ish wings from the spring event... I dont know, though, if I can get the Cresent Moon....

*nods* Yeah the moon would fill a bit of space, that and a few of the items you got on work well for the shade it comes in so hope ya get it.

Weee~! <3333 -finaly got it, ecstatic-.....>>; -thinking of trying a blue and gold theme now-

Wow! It looks better then I thought it would! =O
And congrats on getting it.

^^ Thank you! =D I also got my first avie arts. <33333333 -/extremely/ happy-