my avi looks a bit incomplete to me, the head and torso is fine but something about my bottom half bothers me.

Any suggestions?
I wouldn't mind if someone would do a dream avi for me.. :angel:

Wow. o-o;

That's a lot of stuff to take in.
xD;

I have no idea what your theme is, I see purple, green, gold, white, black, and brown.
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Unless you're cosplaying...at least fit and use a theme? Then I'll be able to help you. ;D


I think, you're going for the black, brown, and gold effect. o-o
The sword REALLY throws it off, maybe try the Ra staff or something in the event commons?
Also, those shoes are a hugeeee no-no. The white is really random, and it somehow just doesn't blend in. o-o The shield is hecka random too, because the color is just so...different.
xD;

Maybe you're going for the elf fighter effect? ...if so, you need to still find things that match. xD;

A chickie at you feet..

one of the easter items

Originally Posted by Winter Wind

Wow. o-o;

That's a lot of stuff to take in.
xD;

I have no idea what your theme is, I see purple, green, gold, white, black, and brown.
@[email protected]
Unless you're cosplaying...at least fit and use a theme? Then I'll be able to help you. ;D


I think, you're going for the black, brown, and gold effect. o-o
The sword REALLY throws it off, maybe try the Ra staff or something in the event commons?
Also, those shoes are a hugeeee no-no. The white is really random, and it somehow just doesn't blend in. o-o The shield is hecka random too, because the color is just so...different.
xD;

Maybe you're going for the elf fighter effect? ...if so, you need to still find things that match. xD;

yeah I'm going to the fighter look.... that's why the sword with all it's purpleness.. >.<
I like everything else on myself but the shoes. they are a huge bother.

I'm not touching the head, that's for sure. xP
I also thought the golden pin and sash was okay with the shield.

Fighter look...hmmm.

If you're going for the elf look, I'd suggest either the gold or black roman shoe thingies that are in the event commons. ;D THey'd work better than those shoes. @[email protected] And perhaps try those purple basic stockings to match the sword? @[email protected]

It kinda looks like you threw the avi together. Nothing matches, and it takes a while before the idea of "fighter" sinks in. ...at least in my case. xD;;
Soo...try balancing out the colors? ;D

I think the oak shield would seriously work better, that shield you have is just so glaringly out of place. xD;;; In terms of color.

-matching perfectionist- xD;;

Maybe like an animal or something?

Aww, lots of colour.
Hmmm, could something green in the lower part help.

The concept is really nice
I'd say replacing the clothes with those of a more darker brown
And get boots instead of heels

pretty avi, I think you need bown in the feet area.

i don't know, but i think it needs brown...at the bottom :P

Other than the foot wear that others had said, balance your purple might fix the odd color balance issue I am seeing.

well I changed my avatar almost completely. .. :roll:

I see, it looks very good. One thing, there is too much brown
on the head, and the yellow butterfly pin is a bit too... yellow.
For the rest I think it looks very good.
Maybe change that head... thingy into a newyears pin, if you have one,
the colors would also match the blue of the harp.

Overall, I think it looks really nice. ♥

Maybe try adding a bit more of the dark brown to the bottom somehow? Leggings perhaps?

Try adding some blue to that empty space on the left side of your avi somehow.

8/10 its almost there, just needs a little somethin' somethin'.

leggings huh? I'll try to search for some good brown ones..

do you think the winter birds would be a good add of blue..?

I agree with Link, blue on the left side of your avii and maybe a pair of brown boots to balance everything out ?

9|10
edit;; I think the birds would look really good! and you could use that to even out the lack of blue on the left side....

=D

I like your avi how it is, I wouldn't add anythinkg. 9/10

thank you all for your answers ^^

I might try the birds, but I'm satisfied with my current avatar :)

thanks a lot <3