I did my avatar in one day! what do you think about it?

Honestly?
It's cluttered, lacks the silver of the hairpin, the blue of the pants and basket, and the black of the makeup.
The eyes also don't fit.
But I like the Red and gold you have going.

The blue is out of place, less you added a bit more of that, then it looks just scrambled for a lack of terms.

yeah i knew it was a bit much, but how about now? i changed it ^^

I just noticed how the fan is a different shade of red. xD
And I love how the gloves add black AND silver to help the hairpin and makeup, but it isn't really enough.

Originally Posted by Peanut

I just noticed how the fan is a different shade of red. xD
And I love how the gloves add black AND silver to help the hairpin and makeup, but it isn't really enough.

oh you're too picky hehe XD =3
i did the best i could with what i got and what i could afford, and also I did do it in one day, im still sort of new :roll:

Lol.
I'm being like the rest of the uptight everything much match people. xD

is many red, maybe if you put out the fan look better

I like the idea of how you managed it all in one day but it is a little bit crowded for me. Still a 7/10 would be reasonable :D

I also think it looks a bit cluttered, but it's impressive for one day.

Wow, one day? =O
Impresshive.

I think it looks kinda cluttered aswell, and the green on the necklace makes me twitch. Maybe it's me being nit-pickish.
Oh well, Other then that, very well done.

8|10

I think you should ditch the items you have in your hands...or find some more of that red to distribut around your avatar.

The reds from the fans don't really match the rest of the avvy...

5 out of 10. o.o

Wow, the people in this forum are picky. :sweat: I think it's very pretty, although the silver of the hairpin still seems a bit out of place to me.

.-.
Its not necessarily picky,
They have just seen better and are giving suggestions/criticism.
If its harsh,
Don't take it the wrong way,
They are just trying to help you.

I love how you matched the boots and the cape.
But peanut is right,
You need more silver and black.
Take out the fans because they block the body of your avvie and add another unnecessary shade of red.
Its not bad for being done in a day,
But its not necessarily fantastic either.
I say cover up your arms and legs and maybe change tops or bottoms so you don't have as many items from the same set.
And it looks like there is a speck of distracting green.
Probably from a necklace or something.
You can just take that off.

I think it'd look better without the fans your holding and a different hair pin.

But other than that it's sweet <3

I think hte fans you are helding don't match :) they are a bit brighter red than the rest of you, but I'd say 8/10

I think the problem is that the reds are too different shade and the 'clash'.

i like your whole color them. love the red and gold ^ ^

hmmm, maybe if you substitue the two fans out for a vday08 fan. maybe the red and black would be the same shades? im not sure though ^^;
i like where your avi is going though :3

It's okay but just lacks silver, has yellow in it and doesn't have yellow on top of bottom. It needs work, but it's a great start!

you douché bag :P

why don't you come to ME so i can tell you what reds are the same :P you lazy pile of gosh

I would get rid of the fans and the top since they're lighter reds. The top's not so much of an issue since it's covered up and not as noticeable, but it still stands out a bit. Try adding sliver around the feet and around the waist area. Other than that, it's really not bad. I love the whole gold and red colours though.

I would remove the make up and not put anything in your hands there's just to much going on by your hands. Other then that it looks good!