The avatar to your left is my first MAC.
I would love it if you could please rate it and tell me what else i need to complete it.
I am looking for all advice.
And would like if you could show me where i have gone wrong and where i have gone right (if i have).
Also if you could show me the item i should buy to improve it.
Much loved. ♥

It's very nice. I like it a lot!
Try some green dragon gloves? And maybe some gold leather (or is it suede? Who cares) gloves over that?

Wow thank you.
xD
Much loved. ♥

It needs gloves indeed, but it looks very cool!! Well done ^^

Thank you.

So you know, it's against the rules to end all of your posts with a sign off. Just put it in your signature. ^^

Oh.
Im so sorry.
:$ I feel so stupid.

It's alright. ^^ It happens sometimes.

Cheers.
Does my avatar look better now in your opinion?

Yeah, it does. I'm trying to think of what else it could use.
A crown would work, buuuuuttttt I don't think that's in your price range. XDD
Maybe some Lioness earrings?

All it needs now is just little finishing touches. You know, a little item here and there.

The only thing that really bothers me is the bit of blue at the end of the skirt. It stands out too much to me. I'm not too sure on how to fix that other than using a different skirt or using blue somewhere else in the avatar. It's a pretty cute looking avatar overall though.