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linkfreak131 09-01-2008 02:30 AM

Rate this MAC, please? =3
 
So, I've been wanted a new avatar, with a whole new color scheme for a while now, but I just can't seem to find anything that suits my tastes, for some reason. But, I managed to come up with this, and I'd like some opinions on it:

http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e3...Picture2-5.png

I don't really mind that the color scheme is over done, I just REALLY like how the avatar looks, over all. But, if there's anything else that you think I should add to it, or take away from it, please do tell me. =3 Thanks in advance!

Cerenity 09-01-2008 02:36 AM

Ooo, I really like it too! Um, maybe a white belt to break up the black in the middle a little bit?

MurasakiCrown 09-01-2008 02:53 AM

I like where this is going, but it feels a bit awkward somehow. There is a chunk of black on the torso, and a lot of white on the legs. You also need some black on your neck. Maybe one of the larger neck-ties? (sorry, I can't remember what they're called, but NOT the cutie scarves, the other ones..)I think that if you changed your stockings to black and put white socks on top of them the legs would look more interesting, and a white belt would certainly help (if there is one?). If not, you can do without the waspie. Also: try to layer some gloves? there are long and short gloves that layer well with each other that also fit your avi.

7/10

Cerenity 09-01-2008 03:42 AM

Ooo, yeah, a black neck thing would be great!

linkfreak131 09-01-2008 04:46 AM

Hm, well, no white belt was on the MAC, so I used the one of the white bustier's. Hopefully it'll layer just like that on Mene, since it works just as well as a belt does. ^^;;
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e3...Picture3-4.png

As for black around the neck, everything looked pretty bulky, to me. But the necklace seems to work out ok...
Surprisingly, though, it costs exactly the same as before. xD

xxDyLanxx 09-01-2008 05:25 AM

neat :] 9/10

MurasakiCrown 09-01-2008 03:02 PM

Haha, don't you just love little necklaces~? The bustier bothers me though... just the shape of it...



I was experimenting with your avi and I kind of.. went overboard... LOL *runs away*
http://i222.photobucket.com/albums/d...blackwhite.jpg

The pin-up top was really... meh...
and the fan was the only thing I can think of that looks "classy" enough for your avi. The pants... actually, I have no idea. I thought they looked neat XD;

linkfreak131 09-01-2008 03:10 PM

Ooo. I really like how those pants look on it! ^^ Not too sure about the fan, though. Do you think maybe the black and gold one would look better, or worse on it?

Thanks for the MAC, though, Platinum! I'll probably be tweaking it throughout the next couple of days, and then start to quest for it. =3

MurasakiCrown 09-01-2008 03:27 PM

You're welcome!

I debated between the black and white fan. The black one adds too much black near the middle, but the white one makes it sort of look like a big chunk of white, pants or no pants.

I still think it's weird how there's no white belts DX

Cherry Who? 09-01-2008 04:57 PM

There is a white belt now, so you know. It came with the space set. It's just not on MAC yet. ^^

MurasakiCrown 09-01-2008 04:58 PM

Oh, neat! I should stay away from the MAC though. Every time I use it, I buy a new outfit..

linkfreak131 09-05-2008 02:50 AM

Hey guys. =0 Would 'yall mind rating this for me? I think this is what I'm finally going to quest for, but I just want to make sure that this is good enough, for at least a 9/10, before I got off and sell my carni pin in order to get this. xD

http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e3...Picture5-5.png


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