Ok, I edited it a bit. What do you think now?

Oh! It's cute! ^^
I like the bits of purple you worked in there but you could certainly use more of it!
Try ta find some way to get a little more purple on your arms/wrists and definitely near your feet.
Purple shoes maybe? :3 Cuz yah cant go runnin' around Mene barefoot! :P
OH! And also try to get a some red on your head with another head item.

But with some fixin', it could be a 10! But for now, 8/10! ^^'

You need some purple shoes.

8/10

What a fabulous start! I don't remember ever seeing that color combination. It's not ones I would ever think to put together, but you make it flow really well!
I agree with the others, light purple shoes would really add a lot. And are there any purple gloves that would show well from under your sleeves? That would really make the hands pop!
Hmmm, I wonder how it would look if your belt was black instead of red. I dunno if it would really make it better or not, I'm just wondering.
But yeah, it looks really good so far, and with a few tweaks it'll look spectacular!

Purple shoes and a red head item would make it look fantastic!

Very cute. <3
However, I think some black in the mid section would look balance out that colour a little more. And maybe some purple shoes?

9/10.

Hey guys I took some of your advice; what do you think of it now?

I think its cute :)