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Aura 12-05-2007 10:25 PM

Seeking suggestions/ratings! ;D
 
'Kay, sooooo, my goal here is to create an outfit that could be considered for admins pick! :3 I'm pretty happy with my current avatar, but I'm not sure if it's just quite 'there' yet. So if you have any suggestions, please share them! All comments and ratings are appreciated. ^^

Here are a few variations done from suggestions that I have already received.
http://i14.tinypic.com/868jrcl.png

kumi 12-05-2007 10:27 PM

i think your avatar is already really good...well that is just my opinoin

Aura 12-05-2007 10:37 PM

Thankyou, kumi! :3

Also, random question - does anyone know whether stockings/socks layer over the Leotard/Swimsuit layer, or vice versa? D:

nescia 12-05-2007 11:46 PM

I like the one with the chick and bumble bee slippers best.

I'm not sure about the layers on Mene really.
You can wear the one-piece bathing suits with stockings though.
They don't even touch.
hehe

twizted child eve 12-05-2007 11:59 PM

I like the first and second ones the best. They are both well matched and balanced. ^^ The only thing I don't like is the belt in the first one.

Aura 12-06-2007 12:34 AM

Thankyou Nescia & twizted child eve! ^^
I'm kind of leaning towards the first one at the moment, too. Something about it still bugs me, though. xD
That's why I was wondering about the layering of stockings and leotards. I was thinking about getting a Charcoal Odyssey Suit to add to the outfit, but I was worried it wouldn't show up if stockings ended up layering over leotards/swimsuits.

fuyumi_saito 12-06-2007 05:10 AM

I like number two the best. ^^

Zweres 12-06-2007 06:07 AM

I would say Number 1, but the thing that bothers me is that I really, dislike the headphones on the avatar.

seisei 12-06-2007 12:26 PM

I wear the white Odyssey suit and it goes on top of stockings :)

My favourite is the middle one, I have a weakness for those boots though ;)

Titenya 12-06-2007 03:09 PM

I love you avi how it is. The chickey on your head is so cute, and it adds a little extra yello so it makes the avi complete.

mewmew07 12-07-2007 06:54 AM

I think I like the second one the best, with the orange balloon. There is a good balance of color and there is nothing on the top of the head. The other two have things on the top of the head and it makes it seem like it's a little too much.

Shaney 12-07-2007 01:31 PM

The second one seems to capture my eyes. It looks really good, honestly. <3 I'd give it a 8.5/10

Majinkoz 12-07-2007 06:29 PM

I think I definitely like the one with the bee slippers....it's like yellow back and forth...you have the chicky, then your orange hair, then the yellow scarf, a black shirt....yellow skirt, orange and black stockings and then you need something yellow again...the bee slippers!! yay!

I think the first one is definitely the best. :)

Aura 12-07-2007 10:48 PM

Thankyou all for the advice! <3

@seisei - Thankyou! I hope the same applies with the black odyssey suit. c:

@zweres - Aww, but I love my head phones. xD I suppose they do look a little clunky, though.

http://i6.tinypic.com/8g6sxur.png
This is what I made using some of the suggestions. I added the panda earmuffs because it felt to empty without the headphones, and to add a little more white near the top. Also added an orange balloon instead, as that one seemed to be more favorable. ^^ I'm going to try to get a black odyssey suit to add to this one and see how it looks, too. I'm hoping that will help balance the black a bit more, unless it's okay as it is.

Divine_lil_brat 12-08-2007 03:28 AM

8/10 I like it but at the same time its seems ab it busy or unorganized. Maybe its to much orange and yellow going on. All the stripes and splashes of yellow make it look buys and cluttered even though it really isn't. You might make adims pick but I think if you add (yes I said add >.<) fire flies it might help with all the yellow and red....


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