yep...i got nothing for it... :cry: ...i need to try harder!!!

5760 doesn't sound right. Maybe 5760 for the V-day Pin :3 It's actually pretty hard to get items such as V-day items. But good luck on your avatar!
Ps rated like 7/10 because I've seen so many avatars like this. :3

Its pretty, but cluttered. 9/10

Originally Posted by Kittyberry

Its pretty, but cluttered. 9/10

I agree with this comment, you need to lose a few things and I would suggest changing the V-Day stuff for something else.
They are very expensive these days.

well, i got the price from the avatar creator, it showed the vday stuf and other things as 0...

...but i like the pin... :( im still keeping it...

EDIT:

i changed it a bit...took out the fireflies and changed some stuff...and i just relized that bra is purple...now i have to change it AGAIN... -.-*

8/10
i like it, but like the others said, i've seen this alot before

I give it a 6/10. You should probably add more gold, and change the hair color.

yeah...that sounds preety good...lemme try to fix it...

I like it mostly- it's a good start, and the style is cute. A few issues:

Underneath, the bareness is kind of too blatant. there's nothing wrong with a little bit of bareness, but you don't have anything on your central avatar but a bra and askirt and a sash that doesn't match. At least add some stockings that match the rest of it. Or maybe even some more interesting shoes.. Either would spice up your avatar.

Some matching issues- The chaos bra doesn't match anything. Drop it, find something red or gold to go on your avatar instead. Your hair color does not match anything- either try and throw in some brown or change it to another color in your avatar. Your bunny and your sash don't match the white on the fan. Substitute the sash, and don't worry about the bunny. Once you get rid of it, it'll only cut down on clutter, since it's not really noticeable anyway.

I think your avatar has really good potential- you just need to fix a lot of it. It's a great start.

6/10.

bunny what bunny? o.0

EDIT:
I changed it again...any better?
the number is the price minus the fan...

Replace the purple bra for a tarzan top.
And remove the ankle thingy. In my opinion those are the
things that does not match with the rest. 6/10.

Not only bad feedback, I love that skirt, hair and haircolor with the fan ^^

alright...this might take a bit...

EDIT:

Your latest- It still needs socks and more brown on the bottom. You only have brown on the top. And you only have black in the middle. You need to concentrate on one, basic color scheme and drop all the other colors that you can't fit in.

It's pretty to look at, but not very coordinated.

5/10.

It's a little to cluttered for my taste by still very pretty!

wait...my new, edited one, or the one on my first post?

Mikku, I was referring to the one right above my post. for future reference, maybe try editing your first post with your new avatars to let people know which ones you want rated? : )

Hmm no, the tarzan top isn't it after all... maybe something red?
Not the top that's part of the skirt, else it's too much of 'a set'.

well, i was wearing a red bra...

i really liked the first one except for the black sashy thingy

7/10. I think she could use a better top instead of just the bra.

well its quite cute, i think the sash isnt necessary =)
6.5/10

It looks nice, though I think there's too much black concentrated at the middle. Also, I can't help but think you could find a better shirt.
Anyway, it's a very nice start that could be really spiffy with some tweaking. :3