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leah17 01-18-2008 06:17 PM

Hey rate my avi
 
ok i am trying to make a good avi, but i need help i don't know what else to add....
Heres how you can help
1)rate
2)then add some suggestions
3)then chat if you want

fuyumi_saito 01-18-2008 06:38 PM

8/10

You need more gold..and perhaps another color like.. blue...yeah that's the only one I can think of that looks good with purple...>_<'' but it's very original. Purple isn't the most popular color on here, I've noticed ^^(that's a good thing)

leah17 01-18-2008 06:40 PM

I am working on the gold part
but i really like the color purple
Thank you

fuyumi_saito 01-18-2008 06:50 PM

I like purple too. There aren't too many items that are purple though. Mostly black, white, blue, red, gold, and green.

leah17 01-18-2008 06:51 PM

yeah i know
but i am willing to work with what i got
:)

twizted child eve 01-18-2008 07:21 PM

Add gold shoes to make it more balanced. It's nice. I like it. ^^

Muggles Running Amok 01-19-2008 02:54 AM



Very pretty. : ) I would suggest more gold at the bottom, maybe with some better gold shoes. Also, since there is black in your hairpin, you need more black items as well. I would try the gloves of darkness because they have both gold and black.

7/10, it's a good start.


Divine_lil_brat 01-19-2008 03:34 AM

Needs more gold, try the halo and/or the harp. Both would work well with this avi. Very nice though. 7/10

mewmew07 01-19-2008 07:56 AM

It is nice the way that it is, but I agree with others in that you could use some more gold at the bottom or on your avatar to help balance out the gold and purple.

leah17 01-22-2008 02:55 PM

thanks to everyone

Titenya 01-22-2008 04:40 PM

8/10

It's a good start. I like the colors, but I would like to see more white and gold in it. Look for a hairpin or a hat possably. And a neclace would be nice as well. If you can find something that matches, a hand held item would be good as well.

leah17 01-24-2008 01:40 PM

could make me a dream avi?

Elwing 01-24-2008 02:03 PM

It's nice, like I said in the Rate the avatar above you thread.
But it needs some gold on the head, and maybe a bit white
to match with the stockings.

And yeah, why not making a dream avi ^^

sayuri_nitta 01-24-2008 02:40 PM

Needs gold on the head, the scarf doesnt go at all (in my personal opinion), and there needs to be balance for the white on your legs ^_^

mewmew07 01-24-2008 10:21 PM

It looks good, though the ears and tail don't go with the outfit. Maybe take them off and get some gold on the head. Maybe a hat/crown or a hairpin.

nescia 01-25-2008 12:17 AM

Very pretty.
I think that you should either add more black or remove the Yumeh ears and tail.
A lantern or another handheld would like nice with this, too.

About your first post, I usually let using multiple colors slide when people are setting up permanent threads.
I think that using eight color tags (1 blue, 1 indigo, 3 cyan, 3 darkblue) for one post is a bit excessive though.
I'll be editing your post.
Please do not do this in the future.

leah17 01-25-2008 12:30 PM

ok

Mascot Sith 01-25-2008 03:36 PM

I gice it a 7.5/10
Needs more gold, and change the gloves
Put different gloves
It would look better

leah17 01-25-2008 05:49 PM

ok i will try........
but at the moment i am working/posting to get enough gold

Jali 01-25-2008 07:25 PM

Not too bad! I think it's actually pretty cute and well done, but it could use some working on.
It definitely needs some more white/gold on the upper area, why don't you try head items such as...

Day Hairpin - I think this head item would work the best, it's the one with the white moon and has a gold bead dangling from it, that'll even out some of the white and gold in the head area. P:

Stary Headpin - A little pricey but the gold matches with your other golds!

You just need to work on finding a decent head item that will even out the colors a little better, but i'm sure you can do it!

8.5/10

Edit: Oh yeah, and you might want to consider removing the Yummeh cat ears and tail, unless you want to work on getting more items, black items, to make them work ><
I think it would look better without them, in my opinion and just go for the white/purple/gold theme, adding black is just a little too much!

Television 01-26-2008 10:41 PM

i would rate it 7/10 its not that i don't like it or something but your avatar need some more gold than it would look a bit balanced


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