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#1
Old 02-13-2008, 10:32 PM

So far i'm liking how this is all turning out. I still need to get my phoenix gloves and a couple more things but is there anything else that can be specifically pointed out to me?

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Old 02-13-2008, 10:33 PM

yup the foxes cover up the lower body of the avi

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Old 02-13-2008, 10:35 PM

The foxes don't match.
In my opinion it'd look better without them ^^

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Old 02-13-2008, 10:38 PM

Ok, so i put the foxes away... Now i think i look good. Any other opinions?

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Old 02-14-2008, 01:06 AM

7/10

it's missing stuff.. unbalanced..maybe find something to go with the green and gold..and..everything else in the sword. kinda cool though..you could always get rid of the sword and try for some other weapon.

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Old 02-14-2008, 01:14 AM

  • I think you'll need some green to match the sword. Though, I don't know of any items that are light green like that. :?

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Old 02-14-2008, 03:55 AM

It's a good start, but the sword for sure needs something to match it. I think a shirt of some kind would work nice,but I can't suggest anything off the top of my head.

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Old 02-14-2008, 05:27 AM

Abandon the sword, unless you want a really green avatar that sword is not going to work.

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Old 02-14-2008, 08:15 PM

It okay, if your going to use that sword your going to need to add more green to the avi.
6/10

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Old 02-16-2008, 03:35 AM

You could use a shirt. Since the upper half is a bit bare, and maybe a sword to match.

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Old 02-16-2008, 03:41 AM


It's kind of set-ish at the moment. ^-^;

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Old 02-16-2008, 04:08 PM

6/10.
The shades of orange don't go well next to each other and stuff.
Maybe changing the hair color or the visors/glasses could help a bit.

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Old 02-17-2008, 03:14 AM

Very nice!
I like it a lot better without the garnet sword, as I saw you with it the last time I came across the thread.
It's really simple, but still put together nicely.

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Old 02-18-2008, 02:21 AM

I like the combination so far, it definately has a pheonix appeal in the color scheme. The outfit you chose for him so far is very slim, so I would consider giving him something for his hand down the road, after you get your gloves. Or something for the background wuold also be appealing, just something small to add a little pop of attitude to fill him out.

But I really like how it has turned out so far!

 


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