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first attempt at a dream avi
so i finally got the dream avi creator to work so i gave it a shot and this was the first out fit that i came up with. could you guys please tell me what you think? i would love constructive critisisam because this is my first time working with a mene avi and i could use some helpful advice. <3
http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/6316/myaviej1.png |
Well....for you first one, its pretty good....but it could use a bit of fixing up! <3
I love that there are two shades of blue....(a darker and a lighter one) but I'm not a big fan of all one color avvie. Try to mix in two or three colors and layer them so they fit nicely. Furthermore, if you were aiming for a blue avvie, then why do you have black shoes? :O The shoes sort of stand out and stuff. Your avvie could use a dark blue pair of pants, to complement the top (or dark blue leggings/stockings...etc) Um...but that's only my opinion....I love how the hair matches the skirt, and the gold on the hairpin matches the lantern gold. And since you also have some gold color in the picture, why not add some gold, such as a belt, a handheld, etc. I hope this helps in any way! >:D |
oh believe me i know it could!
well the shoes are black because i forgot to change them to a blue pair. XD i tried to tie in bits of gold but i couldn't find a belt or anything like that that i liked. i'm trying to find one now. i will take a look at the stocking/pants now. <3. that really did help thanks so much! <3 |
I agree with RoyalSquishy in that the legs look a bit naked. Also, to bring in more gold, try a necklace, and maybe look for stockings/pants/shoes that would bring gold in as well.
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It's a nice start, but it's not finished.
I added a bunch of stuff for you. ^^ Here: http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/3...andgoldao2.png |
Wow, for your first time using that thing I would say you did a great job! I have not taken the time to figure out how to use the dream avvie creator yet. Congrats!
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Very nice for your first try ^^, i like the stuff Cherry added too! looks very pro, and blue is my favorite color so i realy love that dream avi!.
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thanks for the feed back everyone!
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its really cute
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