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Mamoru404 05-26-2008 02:56 PM

How's my Avi?!?!
 
Hey guys could you rate my avitar, i am not to sure if it is really good or not.

I like it but that is only one opinion

i started it yesterday, that was a long day lol.

Please tell me what you think, thanks

Lapin Blanche 05-26-2008 05:30 PM

I think it's gorgeous.

Exchange 05-26-2008 05:53 PM

I'd say it's a work in progress.
The black around your middle overpowers the bottom.
You need more black down there.
Also, the eye patch doesn't really match the generic yellow throughout your avatar
Your bow also has a hint of blue that's not found elsewhere in your avatar

But I love your color scheme.
<3

Mamoru404 05-26-2008 06:00 PM

[FONT="Comic Sans MS"Lapin: Why thank you!!! i think your Avitar is gorgeous as well! :)

ox3tyi: thank you very much for your critiqueing (i dunno how to spell :o lol) and your opinion is greatly appreciated
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Exchange 05-26-2008 06:37 PM

Sorry if I was being harsh.
x.x

I'm CDO like that

Mamoru404 05-26-2008 06:45 PM

Oh haha no you weren't being harsh haha i accept and critizm that i can get. so thank you i meant haha

Elwing 05-26-2008 10:40 PM

Quite good :) ^^
The white pants does not look good in my opinion
Maybe some short black pants for it instead...

Eserel 05-26-2008 11:54 PM

Black is a big chunk
Take off the flowy thingy
And the head phones would be hard to balance.
Just take them off too and try to add some white.
Is a white scarf too white?
The one that kinda goes behind avvies?
6/10

Bombshell 05-27-2008 01:56 AM

Maybe switch the white pants for some black pants? I like what you're going for though. n_n

Mamoru404 05-28-2008 05:21 PM

Yea i was kinda thinking that i would try black pants but for some reason they just didn't look as good as the white pants do, they just didn't fit, and i am also looking for a jester hat for mine it is the last finishing touch that i am trying to claim.

CLAMP 05-28-2008 09:25 PM

If you do want to keep some white, try adding in the white ayumui hat for some white on your head.

Bombshell 05-28-2008 11:46 PM

Hey that would work (what CLAMP suggested). It would help balance the white of the pants. n_n

comotized 05-29-2008 06:38 AM

I think it's really cute, i like the colors you picked but i'm kind of curious what it would look like with medium or long hair?

Meggie~ 05-31-2008 01:52 PM

well I love it :D
good choice of colour
and definately not too cluttered :)
so yeah, nice
something I should learn from when I'm buying some stuff for my avatar


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