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Briar Rose 10-25-2009 06:18 PM

A cinnamon sugar one...^^ Woulda been amazing if it had been fresh, lol.

What are your favorite kind of doughnuts?

@ACE: Why not? It's a great section...I really want to write right now, but I can't think of what to write XD

Ace Strife 10-25-2009 06:24 PM

I dont like reading, my mind wonders off after few minutes :ninja:

Midnight Tiger 10-25-2009 06:26 PM

Hmm...My favorite would have to be the Boston Cremes ;p
I'd love to write right now but i get kinda nervous whenever i post stuff online cause i wouldn't know whether or not i've gotten better or if my writing has gotten worse :sweat:

Briar Rose 10-25-2009 06:32 PM

@ACE: Lol, I bet if you read my stuff your mind wouldn't wander :D -has ego- Lol.

@Tiger: OOOOH I love those xD
Well why don't you post something in here? I'm an English Major, so i can give you some hints, tips, and tricks ^^

Midnight Tiger 10-25-2009 06:56 PM

Err...maybe :sweat:
If i can type up something really good then i will. You being an English Major would make me more nervous cause i can only think of all the things you'd point out @[email protected]

Briar Rose 10-25-2009 07:08 PM

Oh don't worry about me! I am a fellow writer, and I know how annoying it is to have people only point out bad things, or only say "That sucks". I'm sure you write well :D And you being nervous just makes me want to read your works more. I've found that the more people are nervous about having people read their works, the better writers they are. It's the snooty "I'm the best writer in ther world" types that can't write themselves out of a paper bag :D

Midnight Tiger 10-25-2009 07:14 PM

Lol, that really true? Hmm...maybe it's cause us nervous types are more open to knowing we have mistakes in our work...

Briar Rose 10-25-2009 07:19 PM

Perhaps ^^ I am still one of those nervous types, despite having all that knowledge of English xD

It just means you're modest, and it will be easier to help you with your writing because you are open to it, instead of saying "There's nothing wrong with my work!" xD

Ace Strife 10-25-2009 09:12 PM

Ohh whats your stuff are like

Briar Rose 10-26-2009 03:11 PM

ME?

I write a lot of fantasy stuff....mainly short stories that I work on later. Do you want to read one? I don't mind putting it up here :D

Ace Strife 10-26-2009 03:14 PM

Oh cool xD and Yes I would love to :lol:

Briar Rose 10-26-2009 04:58 PM

This one is still a work in progress, but I must say, I love it ^^






~ A cold, drizzly day marked the beginning of autumn for a sleepy little town nestled on a small island, supporting numerous residents. It was surrounded by other islands, too numerous to count, although this isle was the only one inhabited. Looking out toward the harbor, waves could be seen breaking upon the beaches with gentle splashing, and boats with their sails furled swaying in the caressing breeze that allowed flocks of birds to gracefully ride the sky's waves above, touching the sky. This island was glowing with daily beauty; most of the year it was sunny, cheery, and warm. There was an abundance of rolling green hills dotted by farm houses and small patches of forests.

Among the brightly colored buildings, was a cold and forbidding castle-esque place. It was three stories tall, made from gray stone, now fading with age, with only one window on the lowest level. It was framed in a dark mahogany wood panel, with sun-bleached streaks running along the grain of the wood, revealing the buildings age just like the stone it was built with. On the glass, little remnants of a long forgotten sign still clung, like the frothy bubbles left on the side of a mug of devoured root-beer float. That window gave passersby a view of an unnaturally clean room. Wooden chairs upholstered with white cotton, white carpet, and fresh white and gray striped wallpaper.

Behind a white marble counter top sat a pretty young girl, nearing twenty-four. Her long brunette curls were tucked up into a ponytail with freshly straightened bangs sweeping over the right side of her face, and back behind her ear. She wore a nurses uniform: a white knee-length dress buttoned top to bottom, with a red stripe on the ends of the short sleeves. She was the only real friendly face, and she sat behind that counter from the moment visitors were allowed in until the moment the last person left.

Although someone peering through the window wouldn't be able to see, a middle-aged gray haired woman sat in the corner on one of the chairs, staring at the wallpaper ahead of her. Her hazel eyes zoned off into the distance, seeing nothing, while her wrinkled hands clutched her bright red purse that was nestled on her lap. She didn't enjoy this part of her visit. Waiting for the "okay" to walk past all of the lonely people inside, what she thought to be, cages, with nothing but a chamber pot and a mattress on the floor. Those were the longest hallways she had ever walked down, and yet, it was something she did every month, on the same day, no matter what.

Finally, a doctor garbed in all white, poked his eagle nose through the door frame. The last straggly remnants of his thin white hair refusing to leave or lay flat against his scalp, paired with his beady black eyes, made for a foreboding tower of a man.

"Mrs. Hedgeworth?" He said, breaking her out of her trance, his beady eyes squinting in pain from the dull light that shown through the dusty window. She stood up slowly, as if it hurt her to do this again. It seemed like years had gone by since last she saw him, and yet it was only a month. She followed the lanky doctor down the long corridors, past the poor not-so-innocent souls that shouted rude and obnoxious things. Finally, at the third floor, they came to a stop in front of a bolted metal door. She took a deep breath, then nodded her readiness at the doctor. He then opened the door to reveal a small, skinny man, who looked no older than twelve, although he was thirty-seven. His eyes opened wide as the bright light of the dark day scattered around him.

"A... An... Angel?" He whispered in the voice of a frightened child. Mrs. Hedgeworth smiled compassionately. It was always the same.

"Yes, my child. Angel." She stepped into the white padded room and embraced the man in the white leather straight-jacket that used to be her son. ~

Ace Strife 10-26-2009 09:28 PM

Wow nice story, and very detailed ^^

Briar Rose 10-26-2009 09:29 PM

Thanks! -glomp- Finally!! I've been so bored. I was just about to go start cleaning >.<" You saved me! lol

How are you?

Ace Strife 10-26-2009 09:39 PM

Haha xD am sorry -hugs- I didn't feel well so I fell into Sleep spell, this place seems dead soo much now days.

How are you?? and what ya been up 2?

Briar Rose 10-26-2009 09:42 PM

It's just the calm before the storm :D You'll see!

I'm alright, eating an amazing muffin....xD

Ace Strife 10-26-2009 09:46 PM

Haha is it weird or do we just have awesome mind?? I said the same thing to someone else ealier xD

and if it double chocochip xD

Briar Rose 10-26-2009 09:47 PM

Lol! Well, great minds think alike! :lol:

It's a blackberry cobbler muffin with brown sugar on top....one of the best muffins I have ever had...and I'm not a big muffin person...lol. I need another one...xD

Ace Strife 10-26-2009 10:00 PM

Indeed does xD

and ooh not big fan of blackberry hehe I only like only chocolate chip or double chocochip but am not a big fan of muffins either, Cookies for the win

Briar Rose 10-26-2009 10:03 PM

Lol, I love chocolate chip cookies ^^

Well....we have chocolate muffins with chocolate chips in them...XD

Ace Strife 10-26-2009 10:12 PM

^^ yay for cookies and you should totally share with me :lol:

Briar Rose 10-26-2009 10:13 PM

Lol I would...but the whole distance thing...:lol:

I'm making scones tomorrow -yawn-

Ace Strife 10-26-2009 10:20 PM

Send it through your CD Drive :ninja:

and Oh I love making those at Cooking class at school hehe

Briar Rose 10-26-2009 10:21 PM

LOL :lol: Wish I could! xD

Scones are just too easy for me...and it's not even fun here. It's already premade, I just throw them in the oven ...

Ace Strife 10-26-2009 10:33 PM

Premade as they have everything in them o.o' thats no fun to make


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