Person 1 and Person 2 isn't good enough? Lol, Seito. I think you've mentioned this issue before. It's quite a complication.

That reminds me that I need to catch up on a LOT of fanfics. I tend to ignore my updates when I get them.

Originally Posted by Kat Dakuu

Person 1 and Person 2 isn't good enough? Lol, Seito. I think you've mentioned this issue before. It's quite a complication.

That reminds me that I need to catch up on a LOT of fanfics. I tend to ignore my updates when I get them.

Haha I wished! I have. I was gonna use the titles (virtues and sins) in Book 2 but then that has the potential to complicated if I decided to do Book 3 (Book 3 only needs to be written depending on how Book 2 decides to end) And complicated. OTL

Do try not to make things more complicated than they have to be. If you can, keep things contained to two books if that's going to cause problems later.

Yeah. That's a good idea to do. (Book 3 would only be a prequel but really it isn't needed)

i don't get the idea of making the third book in a series the prequel. I like my stories in order thank you very much.

I like them in order too but it spoils if it's first, it spoils everyone afterwards as it serves for the reason why everything went wrong in the first book (and how things are supposedly solved in the second book).

Success! 1.5k in words. I might actually reach 2k for once. xD

But do you really need the prequel then?

oh yippee! You're writing a lot.
I've almost got everything typed up now. I think when I'm done, I'll have 17k words in all.

That's what I'm on the fence about. On one hand (and especially if I change the ending to book 2) I shouldn't need it plus it means less work and not as complicated. On the other hand I'm not sure how to end Book 2 without resulting to a deus ex machina and if it explains all missing plot holes. I rather not write book 3 but first I have to find a good way to end book 2. (but since I'm not even done with book 1 yet, I figured I'll cross that bridge later).

\o/ and I still have three more pages to type up. * u * I didn't realize I had written so much.
Good job! owo b *cheers*

Just write book one and two and worry later! No need to think on it now if you don't have all the facts yet.

I thought I had written less too. I guess my hand writing is really tiny.

Yup! We'll burn that bridge later. xD

Hehe. Tiny writing for the win * u *

Hmm I think I'll split this chapter into two. I dump lots of information in it already, magic theory can come in a later chapter.

I haven't done a chapter marker since the first two and my prologue. I was writing all over the place and mostly in the middle and end when I couldn't open my file with the beginning writing. I could probably throw in a few chapters and the few words typing CHAPTER FIVE gets me.

You know... I thought I replied here. I was wondering why it stopped showing up in my subscriptions.

xD Nice. I get all confused if I don't split it up into chapters.

lol. I hate when that happens.

I do too. It wasn't bad when each new scene I was writing was in a different note, but now that it's in the same document again, I NEED chapter separators.

I probably closed a tab or something D: That happens a lot when I don't pay attention.

D: Oh boy. I hope you can separate it without too much trouble then.

I hate this one site I go to that doesn't open links in new tabs. I forget and close my tab instead of backspacing back to the original site.

I think I've already got it separated. I added a lot of chapter markers in and upped my word count! :D

Hello everyone the rain was back again today good grief

We got a storm here too. The power kept blinking off.

Originally Posted by Kat Dakuu

I hate this one site I go to that doesn't open links in new tabs. I forget and close my tab instead of backspacing back to the original site.

I think I've already got it separated. I added a lot of chapter markers in and upped my word count! :D

Ugh D: I hate when that happens! ><

Ooo \o/ yay! I've been successful in writing today. 4 full pages so far * u *

We got lucky are lights did not go off but there was a lot of thunder before.

four pages, seito?! That's a lot! good job. I don't ever start writing until after dinner.

Sailor, I love thunder.

I'm sacred of the thunder as well the lighting. but sometimes I wish I had better grammar skill's at times. so I could try write a fanfic sometimes. but I all way's get sacred unsure if people would like my ideas are not.

People post a lot of crappy fanfics out there, so I don't think there's any reason why not to post something. There is always a worse story out there. I don't notice your grammar anymore since I'm used to it. It's not much different than learning to read someone's bad hand writing.

You got a point there Kat and really you don't notice. my grammar cause your used to it well that is nice to hear I think. but a lot of people complain about bad grammar at times when your writing more then one chapter.

Indeed. I don't think many people like to read large amounts of technically poor writing. Can you practice and get better with grammar?

If I have to I'll let some one proof read it first for me. if I ever chose to write a fanfic out at all.