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Antagonist 09-05-2014 05:22 AM

How do you write descriptions? [:O]?

I never know which person's perspective I should use. I hate writing first-person perspectives but then when I try using third-person things get iffy when there's more than one character involved. [sweat]

MoodyBats 09-05-2014 05:26 AM

Horribly?
I just write what comes to mind but i guess that's really horrible.
Descriptions were never my strong suit.
I just write things step by step to how I imagine what my character's sees, feels and hears etc
but just the words I use makes it sound so..bad.

Yeah I am the same way. I write in third person since there is multiple main characters
but it's just very hard e.e
And somehow when I RP I write a lot better than when I write my own stories.

Antagonist 09-05-2014 05:29 AM

Same. I wrote a description on an OC once, went back and read through it again about a week later, and couldn't stop cringing at how horrible it was. >_>

I haven't RP'd in a while so I'm not sure what my RP style is like anymore. xD;;
But I guess RPing is easier because you only have to worry about one character at a time...

Libra 09-05-2014 05:42 AM

One thing is for sure, I HATE the way I write. I feel like it's awful, and if someone is gonna read it, I feel like I'm standing naked in front of them. For example: I would much rather strangers look at my resume and cover letter than even let my family/friends look over it.

I used to be that way with everything I wrote, and surely don't consider myself awful anymore. Now that I see the way other's write (never spelling a character's name right, ignoring parts of my posts, making up things they didn't even write in in the last post, grammar errors all over the place) at least while RPing, it makes me feel like I can enjoy making a story, rather than focusing on how badly my part was written [sweat].

I mean, especially from the perspective of an RPer, I don't expect others to be expert novelists. Nor would I expect that of fan fiction or other stories I might find on the internet. I always have high expectations for books that I buy though [lol]

Antagonist 09-05-2014 05:48 AM

Oh yeah, definitely. I rarely ever let my friends and family IRL see my drawings, let along (alone?) my writings. [sweat] I just feel so awkward about it. I think it has to do with people laughing at it back in the day when I showed them my drawings so after a while I just stopped showing it to people I know and would rather post it online where even if people laugh at it, they wouldn't know me.

I'm quite particular with the books I buy/read too, though I'm a lot more lenient with fanfictions. [lol] I can breeze through it as long as the plotline's good. Some of the older books I have have quite a few typos in them, from the era before spell-check was a thing. [XD]

Libra 09-05-2014 05:56 AM

[:o] I don't think I own a book that I've noticed a typo in. I think the oldest book in my room though is my Latin I book from high-school. Don't know how old the book actually is, but it's older than all the teen-fiction novels I own for sure xD

Antagonist 09-05-2014 05:58 AM

I think I own a lot of books that are over 10+ years. [XD] Some are almost 20 years old, so yeah...typos. [XD]

MoodyBats 09-05-2014 06:01 AM

@Antagonist
I just can't seem to write good anymore.
I use to sort of.

One of my stories on the writing site i go on someone read it
and they have these reactions that you can click for after you read it and someone did a few of those
so maybe my writing isn't super terrible but nothing will really convince me otherwise
unless I see it for myself.

@Libra
I rather no one from menewsha read my stories because I will feel the same way.
My sister said she read one of my stories the other day and i felt too exposed. [shock]

Antagonist 09-05-2014 06:05 AM

My writing style changes all over the place. Sometimes they're okay, sometimes I just want to rip the papers out into little tiny pieces.
Most of the time I just write and read them myself and never let anyone else read it and eventually they'll just stay there until they're forgotten. [XD];
I've posted a few pieces on my FFN account and the response seems nice enough for the most part. But for some reason once people've read it I just don't know how to continue anymore and they just sit there from then on, unfinished. [headdesk]

MoodyBats 09-05-2014 01:12 PM

What is FFN?
And I am the same way once someone reads my stories.
My friends over at chloria want a chapter 2 to my story I named Porcelain Skins[don't ask why i named it that
I just did]. It's basically about a girl who was at a testing facility and they erased her memory for some reason
she comes back after 9 years or something not remembering a thing as her mother recently passed and left her in the care
of the owner of the facility.

I am still figuring out the plot.
Although I thought of how to progress in my fanfic.
But my fanfic is probably going to be the most I am going to write in as far as any of my stories go.

I'll probably work on that during NanoWrimo [heart]
Like I get ideas as if they were an anime or a movie, including in my dreams so that makes me want to write more [love]

I can never tell with my writing if it changes or not.
I mean obviously it gets better but i still feel I have a long ways to go you know?

SuperZombiePotatoe 09-05-2014 01:24 PM

I think every writer feels like that. Always needing to improve.

Antagonist 09-05-2014 01:28 PM

FFN = fanfiction.net, a website almost exclusively for fanfiction. xD
Archiveofourown is nice too, and IMHO has better writers.

I have a lot of ideas, but never any inspiration to fill out the details to make them into full stories. They're full of over-powered characters anyway...bad habit of mine. I can't seem to make normal-powered characters. >_>;

SuperZombiePotatoe 09-05-2014 01:32 PM

I like Archiveofourown, but I've never heard of IMHO >_>

Yeah, I'm a slave to that as well. So many plots, so many characters, can't bring myself to put them on paper.
I'm trying to force myself though and it's working out well! I finally finished the prologue of a story/potential novel [boogie]

Antagonist 09-05-2014 01:34 PM

IMHO isn't a website, it's the abbreviation for 'in my humble opinion', sorry for the confusion. [XD];;;

My original characters are pretty much all Gary Stus, so I just play with them in my head and never writing them out. [lol];;

SuperZombiePotatoe 09-05-2014 01:37 PM

HAHA! I was wondering [rofl]

All of my characters started out as Gary Stus/Mary Sues. But, they kind of grew up with me. I'm happy with most of them, but some of them... ich.

Antagonist 09-05-2014 01:40 PM

lol Same here. A lot of my OCs have been around for like over a decade, with appearance and personality and powers growing and changing throughout time. [lol] One of my OCs started out with long, straight gold hair and now it's super curly and white (and still long). [XD]

I've had a few asshole OCs...they annoy me personally but I keep them around for sentimentality reasons. [lol]

Pistachio_Moustache 09-05-2014 01:48 PM

IMHO could also stand for "In my honest opinion."
xDD

MoodyBats 09-05-2014 02:16 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by SuperZombiePotatoe (Post 1772916217)
I think every writer feels like that. Always needing to improve.

Don't forget the artists too[illgetu]


Quote:

Originally Posted by Antagonist (Post 1772916226)
FFN = fanfiction.net, a website almost exclusively for fanfiction. xD
Archiveofourown is nice too, and IMHO has better writers.

I have a lot of ideas, but never any inspiration to fill out the details to make them into full stories. They're full of over-powered characters anyway...bad habit of mine. I can't seem to make normal-powered characters. >_>;

Oh okay.
I am so behind with joining all these writer sites.
I recently joined Figment and i really like it there. It's quiet though
but you can join groups, RP and earn achievements/badges.

I have so much inspiration it's spewing out of my head like a valcano
erupting. And I am not joking.
Which is why i do both writing and draw.
I want to draw what I imagine my characters doing in a scene.
Like i had this awesome dream of the current fanfic of AOT and it was just...wow so awesome. and when i woke up i was so sad because real life is so boring. [gonk]

Antagonist 09-05-2014 02:19 PM

@Pistachio: Oh, yeah, there's that...depends on how the reader wants to interpret it then. [XD]

@Fuu: I only know those because I found FFN ages ago while searching for fanfics to read, and Archiveofourown because FFN was going about deleting R-rated fics so the writers were all in an uproar about it and spreading the word about a new, better site to post their stories...[XD];
I have a lot of ideas for drawing, I just severely lack the skills to be able to draw them out the way I picture it in my mind. [XD]
And real life is one of the reasons why I like reading/watching fantasy stuff. Because I don't like real life and prefer to immerse myself in a fantasy or sci-fi world...hence why I rarely ever read or watch realistic, RL stuff. [lol]

MoodyBats 09-05-2014 02:23 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Antagonist (Post 1772916297)
@Pistachio: Oh, yeah, there's that...depends on how the reader wants to interpret it then. [XD]

@Fuu: I only know those because I found FFN ages ago while searching for fanfics to read, and Archiveofourown because FFN was going about deleting R-rated fics so the writers were all in an uproar about it and spreading the word about a new, better site to post their stories...[XD];
I have a lot of ideas for drawing, I just severely lack the skills to be able to draw them out the way I picture it in my mind. [XD]
And real life is one of the reasons why I like reading/watching fantasy stuff. Because I don't like real life and prefer to immerse myself in a fantasy or sci-fi world...hence why I rarely ever read or watch realistic, RL stuff. [lol]


Lol I see.
the only writing sites I know of are Wattpad, writer's cafe and now figment.

writer's cafe someone wrote this kind of awesome story or i at least
thought it was awesome.
I should probably find that story again. XD

Yeah real life is so boring.
The only exciting thing i look forward to in RL is moving to chicago, getting a job and going/graduating college and possibly making my fashion line one day.

Other then that i find the fantasy world FAR much more exciting and fun
which is another reason i enjoy to write.
I love creating a world for my characters.

Though Steven I am still stuck on what to do with her. e.e

Antagonist 09-05-2014 02:26 PM

Ooh if you find the story can you link me? [eager]
I don't read enough original stories these days. [XD]

I don't have anything exciting to look forward to in my life at the moment.
Well I suppose that school starting in a few days should be exciting, but I'm not really feeling it. [sweat]
I suppose that the day I'm supposed to report in would be fun/exciting in a way...

Yeah, that's one of the reasons why I love daydreaming so much. Anything can happen, and happen the way I want it to.
I often reuse my characters for different worlds, adjusting their powers to fit into the world and stuff. [lol]

MoodyBats 09-05-2014 02:57 PM

I am a drop out so i have to study my license in order
to take myself to my GED classes.
My relatives will not help at all.
Or they will but i will owe them money or something in return or they will make me feel guilty
about not having a license. e.e

My life is a little on the slow track due to a family thing but my relatives don't get it so I am trying to do everything
on my own.

Ah are you in college then?
If so do you mind if i ask what you major and minor in?
*curious*

i daydream all the time.
When i was in school everyone would tell me to stop daydreaming and pay attention[sweat]

And I will definitely link you any good stories I find.
What are your interests just so i don't link you something that isn't something you would read.

I just have no clue where steven belongs.
She is such a difficult character.
Her and her sister both. They are both demons but Steven is more like...a weapon to kill anyone that gets
in the way of her assignment so she is like a demon assassin. [lol]

Antagonist 09-05-2014 04:51 PM

Oh, that sucks. [:o]
At least the upside is that you'll be very independent when it all comes through? [sweat]
Gods know I'm horrible at life, I barely know how to pay my taxes on my own...

Nah, heading for graduate school actually. For another useless degree in English. (majored in English back in college, and now I'm stuck with English again for graduate school...I'm no good at anything else so English's the only major I can do [:(])

lol I often daydream so deeply that I often don't hear people talking to/calling me until they poke me. [XD];;

Hmm...I read just about everything, but I don't like angst or romance-central stories. I enjoy humor, fantasy, and action most. [:)] An example would be something Harry Potter- or LOTR-like, and nothing like A Song of Ice and Fire because that series is just too depressing.

My OCs are either very passionate/hyper-active, or very cold/emotionless/robotic. [XD]
Like, high-on-crack kind of passionate/hyper, and T-1000 kind of emotionless/robotic. [XD];;;

MoodyBats 09-05-2014 05:05 PM

Nah it's cool.
I don't really consider any of them my family aside from my parents, sister and two cousins.

Ah I see.
When I go to college I want to major in fashion design and maybe minor in
graphic design. I am still a little unsure.
I plan to go to college in chicago. Anywhere but where i live now would be fine.
But chicago has a lot to offer to me. [lol]

Lol I mostly listen to my music while daydreaming or when i am just walking around the house and then i snap out of it when I have no idea why i am in the bathroom with a pan. [XP] [sweat]

Ah I see.
I am the same way with the stories i like.
I never read harry potter though. Reading is so hard for me when there are actual books because i get migraines when i read.
But if I find anything that is your cup a tea i will link it to you.

I've never even heard of a song of fire and ice.
But if it's depressing that is probably on the list of what not to read.

Most of my characters have bad attitudes or are rebels for some
reason.
I am not really someone for the goodie goodie type as then
i play them too nice. [lol]

And i managed to edit some of my fanfic which now I am very
pleased with the details i added.
though can't really decide on calling the main character's mother, Mom or her name when she talks or there is a scene with her so i sort of did both [lol]

Antagonist 09-05-2014 05:19 PM

Those sound a lot more practical than mine. [XD]
Especially since I don't live in an English-speaking country so majoring in English is pretty useless when you compare the degree to someone who actually lives in an English-speaking country.

lmao!! I don't think I've ever ended up doing something like walking into the bathroom with a pan before [rofl]
I often misplace things and can't remember where I'd placed it though, because I was distracted doing something else and forgot I placed my cup in the living room or some other. [:P]

Thanks! I mostly read fanfiction these days...it gets to the point where I'd read a ton of fanfiction of a series I've never even read/watched and end up knowing most of what happened in the series anyway. [XD]; I've only watched season 9 of Supernatural but ended up knowing most of what happened anyway from seasons 1 - 8 thanks to all the fanfics I've been reading. Also read a few Doctor Who ones though I don't really understand them.

You may have heard of the TV series Game of Thrones? That's the name of the series in books~ (or rather, the name of the first book I think)
Pretty much everyone dies in it. [XD]

Oh gosh yeah, my characters are all amoral at best. I'm pretty deep in with the whole 'there's no good or evil' concept and my characters reflect that. [XD];; I can't make a 'good' character without them annoying me. [lol] Sure they sometimes do random acts of kindness but it's usually a 'I feel like it' moment rather than doing it out of the goodness of their hearts. [XD]

I haven't written anything in ages. I should dig out that Supernatural x Marvel-movie!verse thing I had been working on while at work before I left...


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