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Old 11-30-2013, 04:57 AM







You can write poetry or post things that inspire you. You can post art of your own or others, just don't claim things that are not yours, and trust me I know how to figure that out. So let's begin shall we. Once a week I'll have a random item or gold giveaway and we'll see who wins that just to make this thread a little more interesting.

For Artists who wish to draw, write, or dream. Come enter my world of amazing light and dark beauty. Poetry and Art never has to be good, it could be dark, sad, or mad. Anything you wish to escape life's grasp. Ooops I began to rhyme again, once I start it turns into a habit, I'm sorry about that, and can't help it.




*You know the rules, I won't even state them. Okay maybe a few*

1) Be nice, follow rules, and don't make me kick you out.

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Old 11-30-2013, 04:58 AM




SPOILERX

Step-Father

Why did this happen?
Who are you to me?
You're not my father
so why do you bother?

You truly don't care
you don't even dare
you're only nice
because she is here

without my mother
around to be
I wouldn't be here
and I wouldn't be me

She says she loves you
I truly don't care
I don't get what she sees you in you
and I wouldn't dare believe it

You have a son now
you don't need me
why do I have to be here
and be the fourth wheel?

In your house I'm useless to you
In your world I don't exist except to so-called serve you
you hate me even though you don't say it
you think I'm stupid and I'm so used to it

Thanks to all the shitty things you've taught me.

SPOILERX

My Heart

My heart is broken, torn, and worn
I've forgotten just how warm you were
I've left you alone, with words of hate
just to move on from this wonderful date

I was a fool to keep ignoring you
I can't believe I've crushed your heart
I wish you could forgive me too
but I know there is nothing I can do

no words, thoughts, or things I do
can ever heal what I've said and done to you
you were real, you were right, and you were
the one to complete my heart

Now you're gone, moved on from me
my heart is shattered, my blood runs cold
I no longer care for any other soul
I'm rude to them, I'm cold to all

I refuse to bother with love anymore
I won't fall in love with another heart
I refuse to even try without you by my side
Still you talk, I wonder why, I've hurt you so much
and can't figure it out

I wish you didn't move on
I wish it was a lie
I wish I could turn back time
and heal our hearts just in time

I wish for you to be mine. </3

SPOILERX

Freak In A Cage

I'm in a cage, I feel like a freak
unlike my friends who are wonderfully free
They fall in love without a doubt
I fall from the clouds to the ground

My wings are broken, faded, and torn
their wings are shining with forever light
I can't hear my heartbeat anymore
everything they do, they try to be nice

Words, thoughts, actions, and more
they know what to say and to do even more
Once I close my eyes to sleep
I never wish to wake again as a freak

SPOILERX

The silence around me is deafening.
The moon is gold.
The Will-o'-the-wisp is beckoning.
My right-hand is cold.

My mind shrieks, "Turn away!"
But ghostly light is welcoming.
My legs do not obey.
The Wisp is beckoning.

Lead me onto strange paths,
Paths through and beyond the mist.
I don't notice the scratches on my calves
As I tirelessly follow the Wisp.

I have not the will to linger.
The grass has turned to stone.
A ring has fallen from my finger.
They'll find it long after I've gone.

High above the dirt,
Far below the heavens.
No path left. I know it will hurt,
Yet still the Wisp beckons.

The silence around me deafening.
I can't tell if the moon is gold.
The Will-o'-the-wisp is no longer beckoning.
My entire body is cold.


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MADE BY AIKACOONCAT
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Old 11-30-2013, 04:59 AM

saving

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Old 11-30-2013, 04:59 AM

open!!!

IF YOU POST POETRY OR ART I WILL ADD IT TO THE ABOVE BUT ONLY IF YOU WISH FOR ME TOO!

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Old 11-30-2013, 05:25 AM



It's not mine just some image I grabbed from google search. Just wanna say one day I hope to be able to do something like it or similar. That way I can actually make some art people might really want for real money (it's what I want as a job :D).

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Old 11-30-2013, 05:52 AM

Hopeful poet right here!

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Old 11-30-2013, 05:55 AM

You do poetry?

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Old 11-30-2013, 05:58 AM

Yup
I used to write little rhymes when I was younger. Then it morphed into all out poetry.

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Old 11-30-2013, 06:04 AM

Oooh =O you should share some of your stuff if you don't mind. I would love to see!

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Old 11-30-2013, 06:17 AM

Alright. Give me a few seconds :D

---------- Post added 11-30-2013 at 08:19 AM ----------

I posted this in the Literature forum. There's another one there aswell...

Quote:
The silence around me is deafening.
The moon is gold.
The Will-o'-the-wisp is beckoning.
My right-hand is cold.

My mind shrieks, "Turn away!"
But ghostly light is welcoming.
My legs do not obey.
The Wisp is beckoning.

Lead me onto strange paths,
Paths through and beyond the mist.
I don't notice the scratches on my calves
As I tirelessly follow the Wisp.

I have not the will to linger.
The grass has turned to stone.
A ring has fallen from my finger.
They'll find it long after I've gone.

High above the dirt,
Far below the heavens.
No path left. I know it will hurt,
Yet still the Wisp beckons.

The silence around me deafening.
I can't tell if the moon is gold.
The Will-o'-the-wisp is no longer beckoning.
My entire body is cold.

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Old 11-30-2013, 08:42 AM

Oooh that's some powerful stuff! :D I'll be sure to go look for you in the literature forum!

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Old 11-30-2013, 09:14 AM

Hee hee! Thank you, leave some feedback if you can. It's always helpful :D

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Old 11-30-2013, 05:14 PM

S.Z.P. I love that poem.

The first ones I posted in the HIDE boxes were my own I wrote yesturday, though there wasn't much thought given to it.

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Old 11-30-2013, 05:24 PM

Thank you very much :D
Seriously?! They're lovely! I like Freak in a Cage. That one stuck out the most for me :3
I was getting ready to read the fourth one and... "Oh, wait that's mine" LOL

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Old 11-30-2013, 05:26 PM

haha Yep I threw it up there, I can find more, but, right now I just want to draw. I need my victims though.

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Old 11-30-2013, 05:28 PM

Ugh, Potatoe cannot draw XP
I can doodle though XD
More like scribble...

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Old 11-30-2013, 05:41 PM

Click me to see art this is one of my many styles, just look under examples, i dont feel like linking them all again.

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Old 11-30-2013, 06:16 PM

Wow! Those are awesome!
Kind of an anime style, yes?

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Old 11-30-2013, 10:25 PM

Yes. I've always liked anime styled art.

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Old 11-30-2013, 11:40 PM

I'm ranting, to read look below:

OMG D: I'm doing Nick Evans art contest thingy and this art is gonna take foreeeeeeeeeever lol. Think I'll take breaks and do my art commissions in my shop

Okay, lol I need to type that SOMEWHERE so I was like.. why not here? :3

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Old 12-01-2013, 07:28 AM

Hej, why not.
Venting is goooooood!Remember that

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Old 12-01-2013, 10:20 AM

Ok well I spent all day today (almost quite literally) just on the faces of him and his girlfriend. I still have the clothes to to do, and the hair.. I'm not looking forward to either one of them especially the hair. I chose to do a realistic approach so.. I'm doing a portrait. But I think in the end whether I win or not he will still have what I worked so hard on and he just might print it along with the winners because he'll like it so much x3 or it'll just be saved on the computer and that works too lol. And this is my first time doing a digital portrait I'm just like OMG so time consuming, versus doing it on paper.

And I just cant believe professionals or just people who are really awesome can do stuff like that in half the time it will take me to do mine and do it sooo much better. I just wanna all those people. Then raise a zombie potato army to still all their art talent. And then I, and only I shall be the most wanted artist in the world *eyes get really big and dreamy* ... then it'll get too much for me so I'll need underlings.. and will have to give them some talent to help me.

And how will the taking and transferring of the talent happen? With the PK Talent Vortextron Gun XIII ;3

edit: ... yeah I went offtopic, but enjoy the way my mind works when I wanna say lots of stuff xD

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Old 12-01-2013, 10:44 AM

Ummmmm O_o
Your mind is quite interesting and similar to mine when I'm in a tizz.
I can provide the potatoe army if you like?

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Old 12-01-2013, 11:36 PM

:O Give me the potato army!

 


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