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@Tori: XD YEP! *makes it even harder* Kekekek to my knowledge the prince is still in the gardens, yes? :D *evil* I think getting himself sent to the dungeon again would be interesting XD especially since he's kinda mad at Toby xDDD So if he tried to get him out he'd tell him to go away >.> *cough* *cough* *hyper*
@Silenia: XD; I would have guessed around there--maybe a bit younger--my age (18/19) or so *cough* xD; |
@Silenia: I can see why they would guess 21. You're very mature for your age. ^^
Poetry should flow, yes? Not necessarily rhyme, hehe. I know too little to be a poet. xD Awww, you should save your gold for the V-day event commons. They'll be 50% off during the event. ^^ You're sweet to offer, but I'd feel guilty accepting. :3 @Tetsumiro: xD Awww, you sure like putting little Theo in chains!! Since it's almost 8am...I better start packing up around here and wait for my relief. xD Have a good day, everyone! :3 *excited to go to bed* |
Honestly? Thank you. :)
I know I should - but I shouldn't have given away over 1200 gold in less than a month anyway, right? I'm not even here for over a month. And yeah, poetry should flow, not necessarily rhyme. I can't find many English poems, so I'm trying to translate a few Dutch for you. xD EDIT: Ah, you're leaving? :( Don't forget to wake your roommate up, okay? |
@Tori: *FLAIL* You're gonna make me wait? XD Of course I like putting Theo in chains xD *coughcough* It's kinky >.> well--maybe it'd be in different situations LOL XD;
Mmm I'm sleepy--I was just staying up to keep Tori company and make gold Kekkekekek! xD I got my gown, RP AND Tori >.> I'm good to go. And I'm in pain xP So I should probably sleep. Toriii you better come back later and give the rps love <3 i'll post to the other two when I wake up xD @Silenia: Aww you're sweet xD You better keep it tho! Like TOri said, 50% off items! *savesavesave* I don't want to miss them this time xDDDD |
I know - but well, I make gold quite quick actually. As long as there are people online. Oh, and here's a poem I translated - don't know for sure if I translated it well - quite hard honestly, but well, I tried.
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Ooo that's pretty :3 It's hard to translate writing--especially poetry! Sometimes it loses its uh.. pizazz if the translator has trouble bringing through the emotion in the original text.
I think you did a wonderful job translating tho :3 It's still smooth and sensible~ |
Thank you a lot - it was indeed quite hard to translate. But as I am the one who wrote it, at least I know the feeling behind it. It makes it a bit easier to translate.
Another poem I wrote, although it seems more like a songtext to me. xD Quote:
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Very wonderful <3 You're an excellent poet :3 I write a little poetry, though I don't consider myself good by any means xD
One work of mine DID get published in an anthology, however >.>; I imagine they didn't get enough people to say no to many of us xDDD Tetsumiro's Poems Most of these I wrote when I was your age and a bit younger xD (2001-2003 and then Mortal's Wrath and Bottomless pit were around 2006/7 perhaps. MAYBE 05 xD; I really don't recall--lately time just molds together these past few years D: ) |
The first poem I posted was early 07 - begin january.
The second one was end 06, october. I have to guess a bit - I only know when I typed them out. Some of them were indeed created then, others were a few months old already. I have quite some poems from 03 to 05, but most of them are Dutch, so I'd have to translate them, and that's quite a lot of work. And some of them are almost impossible to translate. I'll read yours. :) And you really think I'm an excellent poet? :shock: :o Thank you a lot. :D |
xD yeah, I understand hehe. Translating is a pain. I translate things from Japanese to English and vice versa a lot :3 It's kinda fun, but I'm getting rusty xD; and I can only do simple things 8D;
Awesome :3 Let me know what you think--it's nice to get feedback sometimes, even though I don't really write anymore xD Just rps and stories :3 Of course! ^__^ I think your work is splendid <3 Anyway, unfortunately I must go to bed--I'm on the verge of passing out <3 Good night when it comes time for you xD So really, good afternoon lol! <3 Rest well as the time comes~ |
I read one of the poems now, when I've read them all I'll post my opinion/critique. But so far, I like it. :)
Good night to you - even though it is indeed yet afternoon her. Translating is indeed a pain. I need to do it more often - might help me to write English stories as well. Thank you for all those nice things you've said - I guess I'm a bit biased against my work - but most people are I guess. See you later I guess. |
Oh wow, Silenia. I really love the "Night" one. The lines "stars glistening in the night, jewels in heaven's crown." Ah, so pretty! <3
Guh, I didn't get to go home till 8:15am. I had to call my relief and he said he didn't even know he was working today. D< *eats lunch* |
@Tori: *FLYINGTACKLEGLOMPSandstealsyourlunch* Mmmm yum <3
xD Gotta love that--at least they don't have to travel miles and miles and miles to come replace you xD LOL That woulda sucked more <3 *looks around for a post and opens the others to work on posts* xDDD I'm so sleepy @[email protected] *just woke up* Must get brain working againnnn @Silenia: Waa, thanks <3 I'm glad you liked one so far x3 I'm pretty biased against my work--I'm very hard on myself xD; don't ask me why, I dunno xP I'm just a dork hahaha aw, you dun have to thank me for kind words x3; |
Ah, welcome back. :) Thank you for your opinion on them. If I react a bit... I don't know, mean or annoyed or defensive at anything you say, it's not your fault. Just so you know.
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@Silenia: woahhhh I didn't know you were still on xD It must be what--well I suppose around 8 or 9 pm now, mm? *isn't really sure* XD;;;;
How're you doing? |
9:21 PM now, yes. I've been offline between... hm, 5Pm and 9PM I think.
EDIT: I currently feel like shit - has to do with some kind of 'discussion' in a thread where I thought I was welcome. But honestly, discussion and 'all attacking one on her opinion about something that has only to do with her OWN situation' is not the same to me. |
@Silenia: Awh, yeah o.o; it wouldn't be.
oooohhh x3 good timing coming back, ja? haha x333 <3 @Tori: I posted to the Heaven and Hell rp :3 It'll take me longer to get something out for the school >.> Because--you all write enough xD I need to catch up and get my own Looooooooooooooooooooooooooooong post out :D |
It's 'okay' right now, but I don't know for how long.
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Oh my gosh!! I crossed the wall xP I bet it was a crime >.< So what am I peeking at?? Oh people ... AHH! *runs away* .. Bumps into a wall .. looks over.. Hi people .. ^.^
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Jadyalyn: Welcome over here. :D We like new people here. :) How are you doing?
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@Jadyalyn: Welcome! <3 How are you? :3
man it's gotten pretty quiet here >.> *...chirpchirp...* |
i still have tetsu's hands >:D
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@Tetsumiro: Pfft, I don't write long posts. 8D
Nah, the RAs just have to get their bums out of bed, come downstairs, and sit their bums in the chair I sat at for the past eight hours. ^_^ I loved watching everyone else getting relieved except me. *whines* @Silenia: ...eek. Don't let that person get to you. :< *is curious to know more though...* >_>; @Jadyalyn: Hello there! Nice to meet you. ^^ |
@Kikit: o.o Nuuuu *types with toes* Give-em' bacck! *TACKLE*
@TOri: XD I bet you did hahah xDD;; <3 nuuu >.> Of course not--well, compared to Kale xD No one writes long posts LOL XD |
@kitkat: *steals kit's chocolates*
@Tetsumiro: *looks at Tetsu's first post in the Heaven and Hell one* Riiiiight. :D |
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