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12-26-2008, 08:08 PM
Here is what I have so far:
Not sure if this one has too much other color or not.
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12-26-2008, 08:21 PM
@Sizzla: Wow, yours is amazing! x3
The one thing that bothers me about it is the top. The shade of green is too light.
The gloves bother me a little bit too, because you've got dark green everwhere else.
Otherwise, it's fabulous~
@Crepsley: Ehh... I liked it better before. It's doesn't have too much red now, but it looks kind of messy. ;.;
@Kiari: I like your first avatar a lot better than the second one you have posted. It's pretty well balanced, except for the socks/stockings. I don't know why, but they look funny to me. Is there a different gold/yellow that you can try using? If not, maybe white would be a better option...
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12-26-2008, 08:23 PM
Alrighty thanks pixore. I thought they looked better on the avatar maker but yeah i could change them. XD thanks for the input. <3
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12-26-2008, 11:33 PM
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Okay, I need advice. I've made a couple of green avatars so far, but this one is more 'me' by far:
Thoughts?
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I have to say I don't really like this one. The colors are off, as is the balance. It just looks a little awkward.
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Originally Posted by CrepsleyKabob
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Better or worse? D:
Wow, Sizzla... yours is amazing XD; Though, there's lots and lots of blue on top and very little on bottom. Maybe instead of using blue crew(?? the short ones) socks and black stockings, use black crew sock and blue stockings? So the blue will be more visible, but the black will still be there.
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I liked the first one better. It was more balanced. I just felt it had too much red. The new one is odd, and looks like it has a bloated stomach because of the armor thing.
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Here is what I have so far:
Not sure if this one has too much other color or not.

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I think the first of the two is better. But the bottom looks a little bland compared to the top. I would see if a skirt would help complete the look.
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rude and not ginger
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12-27-2008, 01:56 AM
sizz
yours seems too dark at the bottom... :/
I'm thinking I'll probably submit mine as is (minus the presents and background)
any last suggestions?
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12-27-2008, 02:04 AM
xD Seiki looks like an Alice in Wonderland Baker. xD
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12-27-2008, 07:42 AM
Uh, thanks. I think xD
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12-27-2008, 10:43 AM
Hmm, I shall post my creations in a bit, or later on. =O <3
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12-27-2008, 10:53 AM
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So okay, out of those two the first one's better XD;
I was playing around with the MAC some more last night and made two more. Should I go for one of them instead?

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12-27-2008, 01:59 PM
@Kiari, first one but use different gold stockings :)
@Creps, i like the first of the new ones o: silver matches rather well (but thats just me)
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12-27-2008, 02:04 PM
any last suggestions for my av before I submit it? (minus the presents and background)
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12-27-2008, 02:08 PM
Ooo, Creps I like the second of your new ones - very tribal.
Here is my start at the avatar, I really wanted to use the sword and wreath because they are viney and stuff and that makes me think of earthy things. But I'm not sure how everything works together. it seems a little cluttered/busy/disconnected to me.
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12-27-2008, 04:32 PM
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So okay, out of those two the first one's better XD;
I was playing around with the MAC some more last night and made two more. Should I go for one of them instead?
 
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The second one is well balanced and I think it looks great. But... I've seen other people make similar avatars before so it's not really original to me.
The first one needs some work. It's an interesting color scheme, so I would try playing around with it some more. I think the teal needs to go, or at least, more teal needs to be added toward the center and top of the avi. Right now, the shoes really stand out and it's distracting.
Also, the green sash just doesn't match at all, so I would get rid of it completely. And, I know it's hard to find green head items, but the green flower hairpins also don't match. :sweat:
I'm sorry... but I just think all of your avatars so far (except the second one above) have too many different shades of the same color. It's okay if you want to use both light and dark green, but you have to get them to match.
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Originally Posted by slowtrain
any last suggestions for my av before I submit it? (minus the presents and background)
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It looks great to me. x3
I don't think anything needs to be added to it.
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Originally Posted by Navi
Ooo, Creps I like the second of your new ones - very tribal.
Here is my start at the avatar, I really wanted to use the sword and wreath because they are viney and stuff and that makes me think of earthy things. But I'm not sure how everything works together. it seems a little cluttered/busy/disconnected to me.

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Awesome, you're using the shade of purple that most people neglect. :D
I think the silver veil needs to go though. Right now, you have way too much silver toward the center of your avatar and you need more toward your head. Maybe you could try one of the silver tiaras?
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12-27-2008, 05:42 PM
I dont know if this maybe has too much purple.......this is my current fav though I still like the other too....
This is the old one
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12-27-2008, 05:43 PM
Okay. Thanks for all your help, everyone! Looks like I've still got some work to do xD;
Andd posting this here too, if anyone wants some more event commons you should check this out: free stuff
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12-27-2008, 05:55 PM
Creps - Those are much better.
Navi - It doesn't seem disjointed to me. She looks like some kind of... garden warrior. I like it.
Cora - The first one has too much purple. I wouldn't say that normally, but it's become the main color, where green is supposed to be the main color. And that space skirt is really off.
And you're having a similar problem with the second. Try ditching one or two brown items and replacing them with something green.
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12-27-2008, 06:04 PM
xD I like it Seiki. xD
xD I just have to put themes on everything :lol:
Hmm...what is the blue skirt thing under the apron and over the ayumi skirt? It is the heaven skirt?
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12-27-2008, 06:13 PM
I might use the purple for myself but I realized you where right....too much purple...and the other was too much brown....but I desided the second was easier to tweak...this is what I came up with.....
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Seiki Nova
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12-27-2008, 06:29 PM
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xD I like it Seiki. xD
xD I just have to put themes on everything :lol:
Hmm...what is the blue skirt thing under the apron and over the ayumi skirt? It is the heaven skirt?
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Its a mixture of the heaven skirt and the blue and silver tulip dress. And thanks again.
Creps, can I give my list away to Es since she isn't here for the event? I want her to be able to get some commons too, but I don't really know what she would want so I was wondering if it could just be a gold donation to her?
Just asking here because I don't know if we're allowed to give our list away if we already have the stuff we want...
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12-27-2008, 07:55 PM
Cora - The green is the main color now. ^^
Seiki - Oooh, good call. Ese.
I guess... items in colors she uses a lot? And items that are good for layering? So probably... basically what you got? xD
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12-27-2008, 08:06 PM
I don't know what I got. I wasn't really interested in a lot of the items. I only spent about 5k on items from the event >>
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12-27-2008, 08:22 PM
Yeah, same.
I saved 3k and got everything I really wanted with that. Now I'm just getting things that might come in handy some day.
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Seiki Nova
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12-27-2008, 08:33 PM
I thought that the items would be better. I saved up a ton because I usually never save up enough for events and end up having to buy them at full price. I was shocked at how little I actually liked though. The sets just seemed a little out there this time.
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Kultura
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Seiki Nova
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12-27-2008, 08:56 PM
I pretty much agree with your ordering Kultura. I would change the skirt on the first one to the acid one from the steampunk set. And remove the sash.
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