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Hey guys, whoot back!

Hey : )

Howdy. Rei needs a table to open up.

why?

hay Eastriel and Rei. Want to do me a favor and sample the opening of my latest attempt at writing a book and tell me what you think and feel from reading it?

So i can take my laptop off my lap, and pull it in.

Where can I find this writing of yours?

I will post it in quote marks just hold on a second

I lay on the floor half way under my bed searching through the piles of shoes, school books and DVDs that were stacked under there. Throwing them behind me one by one not caring about were they landed. Nothing mattered but finding the box that held my secret treasure, the one thing I wasn’t suppose to have.

After poking around the dark my hands came to rest on the metal case my treasure was hidden in. My hands felt like they were touching ice as I pulled the case from the black void. I placed the key in the lock and gentle turned key, filling with excitement when I heard the clicking sound. I felt like a pirate opening a hidden treasure for the first time but there was no gold contained within this chest.

Reaching inside I pulled the old tattered book from the box. I moved my hand across the worn cover felling every little imperfection. Then I traced my fingers the engraved letters that spelled out the authors name “Fredrick Williamson.” I could feel the guilty sensation sallow me up inside while I smiled down at the cover. I knew his name was never to be spoken in this house hold. Still I pulled the book up against me hugging it tightly to my chest and imagining it was him I held in my arms.

Then I heard the front door slam shut downstairs, I could feel the house shake from the force she used. Then came the thunderous march of her feet on the stairs. Each step coming louder then the next like a monster approaching my bedroom. Bearing down on me like a angry beast that had just been released from her cage.

“Carly!” My mother yelled as she stormed into my bedroom like a violent tornado. Looking up I could see the anger in her eyes, as she scanned my bedroom floor. Her eyes twitched the angry building behind them as she surveyed the mess laying across my bedroom floor.

I could feel the hairs along my back standing on edge as her eyes laid to rest on mine. “What is this mess young lady!? Have you even started your chores yet!” She yelled down at me. Her voice reminiscent of a drill sergeant lecturing her newest batch of recruits, trying to break their resolve.

I quickly turned my eyes away from hers unable to stare into them. “Sorry” I mumbled the words out from my mouth. As I looked down my heart skipped a beat, the book was still sitting in my lap. Quickly I scurried the book to the side trying to hide it, hoping she didn’t see. I knew what would happen if knew I had his book.

“What is that your trying to find from me missy!” She yelled while she pounced down on me like a wild animal jumping on its pray. Her hands tugged at the book as her claws digged into it snatching it from my arms. With a snarl her stared down at the cover then back at me. My eyes darted across the room focusing on anything I could find. The DVD’s scattered across the floor. The pair of shoes that didn’t fit anymore and even last weeks English homework that I hadn’t bothered to start yet. I could still feel her eyes on me, burning wholes into my body. Her voice sounded slow and concise as she begin speaking allowed. “What is his work doing inside this house?” she asked the carm before the storm.

“I… Well…” I couldn’t seem to find the right words to explain my actions. Every time I opened my eyes I could feel her rage growing inside me. I felt overwhelmed like I was being eaten by the tension in the room. The storm know felt like it had been upgraded to a hurricane.

“How dare you bring this, this mans work into my house!” she seemed to scream the words at me. Her warm spit ran down the side of my face and I could feel her breathing down my throat. She felt like a dragon from one of my books that was about to sallow me whole as soon as I moved. My body started to shake maybe it was nevus or just the adrenaline pumping through my body as my blood started to boil. “That man is my father!” the words flew out from my with passion. It was my only connection to him.

Quickly I covered up my mouth. I felt shocked by my actions. Her feeling for the man had been lectured to me time and time again and all I could do was hope for the best. “Your father? Your father Carly! That man! That despicable Man! He left us, vanished with a second though for his family. Now he is famous and I am left working two jobs to make enough money to pay the bills. That man, he isn’t your father and he never well be!” her words felt like a death blow to my emotions. I have had this lecture time and time again, been told about how I should hate him and how me left us. There was just something about him that attracted me towards him. “He… but… he his my father and I wont forget that.” I pleaded. I could feel the tears welling behind my eyes. My mother could see them too, I could feel it yet I refused to cry.

With all my courage I looked up towards her as she put her hand to the front cover tarring out from the book. Frozen I watched helplessly. One by one, page by page her torn them from the book and ripped them to shreds. It was like the beast ripping away the skin from its carcass. Toying with its remains. As I heard each page ripe I felt my heart break slightly more until the remains lay in front of me. Torn to peace like my heart.

When I looked back up I saw my mother grinning. She looked like a proud cat having just captures a mouse. “Now be a good girl and clean up this mess.” She asked me. Her voice seeming squeaky, apparently happy with her handy work as she turned to leave the room.

Thats all 1060 words of the opening scene, only 69,000ish left to write ^^

Rei wants to go cry now.

~blush~ Sorry Rei, i guess powerful would describe it then?

hi everybody :)

~curls up in the corner~

Hay star and Maka how are you both doing?

I'm good thanks Mitsu, how are you?

Good, just been doing some work on a new book that i posted above. Was looking for some opinions on it since its the first time I have ever tried to write anything in first person and such. Going to watch How to Train your dragon on blue ray with Liz later on tonight. Rented it from love film.

hi there Mits.i am doing well.trying to get some gold to afford my hairpin so i can start working on my outfit.:) and how are you today?

hehehehe Maka, see above and then see above that again for the story I was talking about. Views and opinions are always welcome ^^

HIM returns again

Ah I see

Mits
ah i see sorry im a bit slow i am distracted XD
hey there HIM.

Hello there Maka

HIM
how are you?:3

HIM is alright still full o' cold.

Him that sounds like Nao-chan at the moment. She is snuggled up in bed sick

HIM
ah i see.im burning up but thats cause im sick and because of my laptop