This is the truth, which is why you should always approach a first draft with the idea of just getting it down on paper. you can make it sound pretty later.

I want to revise my partner's post in an rp :ninja:
a different one than with either of you. she sounded intelligible when we were talking, but not so much with the rp. I'm hoping it's because it was the first post and she admitted she didn't quite know how to start it. she had to though imo because she's playing the scientist and I am the robot she made.

Hm... i don't know how to help you with that kat.

the periods were in random places where i wouldn't even put a comma. O.O I can live with that if the story is good though. it seems like a fun idea and I'm excited to be a robot.

Sounds interesting truthfully. It really may be that she really did not know how to start it. Hmmmm, makes me wanna read it to see how she did...

just stalk me like you usually do and you'll find it.

Oh, yeah. I am pretty sure I will. I have already noticed you posting on different rps.

haha. Hopefully it was just uncertainty on how to start it.

I only have three rps.

hm, she posted again and it's better. grammatically awful still but not rambly and completely lacking in setting and relation to other characters. at least i can work with it.

Maybe she just needs practice. Do you know if she has done rps before??

Mehi's right it could just be that. Rping takings a grove to get into.

Awwwww, Kat...three words in and she has me cringing....tell me she did not spell scientist like that?? She's killing me, Kat!!! Killing me.....*dies a horrible death as brain explodes*

i'm thinking she reminds me of Zea when we first started rping. Young and not so used to writing. Perhaps my good writing will rub off on her....worked that way with Zea it seems. by our last rp she we were awesome together.

Well, I hope she gets better because she killed the first post...murdered it actually...

haha. you found it?

A part of me wants to go look, but my job as a writing center says I don't need to see stuff like that outside of work

silly wingsy. but sometimes it's amusing to read things like this.

Oh, yeah, it was easy. I just went to the spy page because I remembered you said she had just posted and looked for the rp with you that wasn't with me or Wings. Easy.

You didn't have to tutor what I had to today kat. =.=

are people really that stupid, wingsy?

you are such a stalker, mehi. you know how to use that spy page like a boss!

Oh, yeah, two years of lurking have made me very good at spying.

Yes, people are Kat. You'd be surprised.

Also, I think mene has taken lurking to the next level with the spy page.

how sad wingsy.

I kinda like the spy option. I have a lot of stalkers...I wonder why?

You have so many stalkers because you are amazing.

is that it?