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Old 04-15-2010, 09:31 PM

This is a private rp for Vomity and I. The tittle sucks. I will think of a better one though.

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Old 04-16-2010, 12:25 PM

[Haha sorry I planned on doing the first post I just had to go right after I made it. I get the feeling you are becoming flustered with me though. I figured we could just develop our characters as we go though.. Here is my posty]

Kael was relieved to be off the ship. He had been on it for several weeks now and he was beginning to feel as if he would never again see the sun. It had been dank and dreary in the hold where his cell was. Even chained as he was now it was good to feel the earth underneath his bare feet. His golden eyes looked to the sky as he was led along but each breath seemed to mock him. The air was salty and fresh but carried the smell of human and animal sweat. He frowned at that but surveyed the area.

He had seemed humans before but they were always emissaries from the mainland. He had never seen the working class of humans. The emissaries had all been old and looked alike. The working class was diverse and no two looked alike. They stared as he passed surrounded by guards and following a luxurious carriage that held the man that ordered his capture.

He didn’t know why they had stolen him away from Dea. All he knew was that they thought him nothing more than a talented talking beast. He was so much more than that. Before he was stolen away he was the sole heir of the leader of his clan. Groomed his whole life to take up the position when his father’s time was done. Now he knew his parents and friends would morn him dead. They would never suspect that he had been kidnapped.

People still stared as he passed he looked down at his arm. The pale white skin was interrupted by bold dark stripes and was praised at home. Here he felt out of place and alone.

It wasn’t much longer before they stopped at a giant gate and the guards spoke with the guardians of the gate. They had passed into grander living quarters a while ago but this one was the largest by far. Kael hadn’t known that building this large were possible. He stared as he was led through the gate.

The man in the carriage descended and he approached Kael. He ordered the larger chains to be removed from his arms and legs but there were still bands connecting his wrists together and the man attached a lead to the center. Kael seethed, he resented being treated like an animal but he had learned his first night aboard the ship that fighting back when you are sorely outnumbered only ends in pain.

Then he was led into the castle, the man simply glowed with triumph as people stared. Then they entered a huge chamber, “Presenting Duke Seriph. He has come bearing a gift.

[Hope this is okay. I wanted to make a lead in but also have a back-story. I just figured this would be okay. If its not tell me and I’ll change it okay!]

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Old 04-17-2010, 09:21 PM

[Obviously I should have checked the thread before I messaged you back. I am glad you posted! I like your characters attitude he is devilish :)]

Upon entering the giant room Keal was stunned, everything about this new place seemed to leave him that way. He didn't like it at all. His golden eyes scanned the room with mistrust. He also didn't like how they announced him as a 'gift.' As if he could just be givin from one human to another. He was no man's property.

Almost immediately a young man, perhaps a year or so his junior, approached where they had entered. The man completely ignored the duke who had brounght him and was focused on Kael himself. There was something about the dark haired man that unnerved Kael. "What is he?" The young man asked the Duke.

"He is called an Alielan my leige," The Duke said with false humility although the man ignored him.

"What's your name?" The man asked him. He responded, "Kael," although he was not sure his response was heard. It unnerved him greater still when the young man announced him perfect. Perfect for what exactally? He wondered. The lead was then exchanged from the hands of the Duke to the young man's hands. Perhaps then he could simply be givin as a gift from one to another. He suppressed a growl threatening to begin deep in his throat.

This exchange should have comforted him after the poor treatment he had recieved from the hands of the dukes men but it did not. The duke was dismissed and the man simply turned and walked away with Kael's lead in his hand leaving Kael no choice but to follow.

The words that next left the young man's lips turned him to ice with its chill. "You belong to me now. Do you understand? I like to pamper my pets, but if you're bad, I will punish you," Such a blatent threat and statement of ownership. Punish me? Punish me how? Kael's inner voice growled at the man. I could shred you in a second if these manicles did not keep me. Kael was a prominant member of his people and was not used to being spoken to as the man was. He resented the fact that the man felt he had the right to own another being. He held perfectly still as the man reached to touch his ears. Kael did not like to be touched without his permission.

And then the man expressed concern about his treatment on the ship. The young man was like a bee, peacefully minding its business in one instant, and at you with its stinger in the next. He hesitated slightly then said in his most polite voice, "You are kind to ask after my hunger," he said. The words felt strange in his mouth but he had been taught the human language as a cub in Dea. He was unsure how the young man would prefer to be answered. He had the feeling that he could flip again in an instant. "But I have no complaints," He said to complete his prior statement. That was a blatent lie, he was indeed quite hungry. However hungry he was he didn't want to give the man anymore control over him than he possibly could.

 


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