
09-14-2010, 03:20 AM
((ohnoes, I broke my own rule. i shall go put myself on black-list after this...
Gemini, love, can you uhm...space your paragraph out a bit? It's a bit painful for my eyes to decipher where everything is >.> sorry >.> also, I was starting this from the fall, so it'd be the beginning of the school year >.> sorry... cause i already made Kouken say your character was at school >.>
Also, what happened to capitals? maybe it's not the spacing, but could you please put capitals and spaces between each new sentence?
I feel like a meanie for overanalyzing your post >.>
*sigh* I epically fail at making roleplays *bangs head on wall*))
Last edited by Aoi Kazuya; 09-14-2010 at 03:45 AM..
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