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Old 08-12-2008, 09:07 PM

hey everyone i would like to share some of my art.but please do not be too harsh on my art i just began working super hard on my art so please take a look at some of my art

http://s351.photobucket.com/albums/q...08061213PM.jpg

this is Kiri Koshiba from the manga beauty pop if anyone knows it but her arms are too small so i have to fix that minor detail

http://s351.photobucket.com/albums/q...08080028PM.jpg this is just a witch girl but can anybody tell me if my art's hands are bad good

http://s351.photobucket.com/albums/q...veDrawling.jpg this is eve from the manga/anime black cat its not my best but my sister loves it

http://s351.photobucket.com/albums/q...08012624PM.jpg this is Rinslet Walker from the manga/anime black cat and that is all i will show thank you for taking your time to look and some kind art:)

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Old 08-13-2008, 02:12 AM

I love the manga Beauty Pop!
Anyways,

I think you definitely have potential to be a great artist, so I'll just give you a few tips.
Keep in mind your anatomy. The head should be more of an egg shape, and arms have joints and bones so they can't curve like that. Your facial proportions are good on Kiri, but her neck is a bit too long. Her collarbones are also uneven.

But yeah, your style is very cute though. Just look up things on anatomy, cause even anime/manga art has good anatomy and proportions to them. n wn Good art so far though.

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Old 08-14-2008, 12:20 AM

that is true.thanks soo much for the tips.i also thought kiri's neck was too long but my sis was saying her neck was short so i made it long and i do not know i made it soooo long.

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Old 08-14-2008, 05:44 AM

i like it! i think you've done a very good job!! ^_^ keep up the good work!!

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Old 08-14-2008, 11:47 AM

Just practice on the anatomy, you'll be very good one day.

just look up some other pictures of other artists and study from them, it's the best way.

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Old 08-14-2008, 02:04 PM

that is true.thanks for all of your help i hope to become a manga srtist someway and i thank you all for it :)

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Old 08-14-2008, 04:17 PM

considering your age Desire, you're very good!

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Old 08-14-2008, 04:25 PM

i am?you know now that you mention it i am good for my age
wow!you made me realize i am good at art
for my age thanks sooo much Kaelin.
i can't even believe i didn't realize that how blind
can i be

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Old 08-14-2008, 04:44 PM

:hug: it's alright, no worries! *giggle* honestly, i know not everyone starts out able to do a piece of work that's professional looking, honestly, you just gotta practice, and you ARE very good fo your age group and so, practicing wont be too hard for you! :D

keep up the good work kiddo!

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Old 08-14-2008, 05:13 PM

Yes!hmmm i have actually done some new ones in my sketch book.i think i should show you those pictures in my art album.wait does menewsha
even have an art album.or gallery?

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Old 08-14-2008, 05:43 PM

um, no, but you can make an album of all of your art! like i have ^^

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Old 08-14-2008, 05:55 PM

make a Deviant Art

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Old 08-14-2008, 06:02 PM

i agree with Jack! Make a deviantart account!

go to www.Deviantart.com

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Old 08-14-2008, 10:13 PM

Oh, I didn't know that you were that age! -just checked your profile- Your art actually reminds me of how I drew a few years back. > w<

Anyways,
I agree. DeviantArt is the way to go.

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Old 08-14-2008, 11:02 PM

*giggle* my drawings look a tad primitive but i made one just for you Desire!



hopefully this'll be your inspiration to keep drawing! *giggle* i really hope you do keep up the good work! (i made that drawing today..on microsoft pain program and nothing but!!)

incase no one can tell, it's a chibi water dragon!

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Old 08-14-2008, 11:26 PM

Awe, I love your drawings! I can't draw dragons for the life of me! XP

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Old 08-15-2008, 01:51 AM

i think your right everyone.but i don't want to do a devianart i actually want a sheezyart it is also an art place my sister has one and i loooove it there.thanks for
your support.and i will keep drawing no matter what because i want
my dream to become true.my dream is to become a very good manga
artist.well maybe not very good but good enough to get my book
published in tokyo pop..... maybe.
;)

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Old 08-15-2008, 03:33 AM

Thanks Kieran! *giggle*

and you just might have your manga published some day desire! you just gotta practice!

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Old 08-15-2008, 07:25 PM

You're about the same age as me ;D
Well, anyways, the thing that I think needs the most work for now besides proportions is the faces. In your drawings, it seems like they have not cheekbones and with no cheekbones it makes the face look really...uh, how to say it, hard looking? It is pretty good for your, or, uh, our age group and if you keep working on it I'm sure you'll improve greatly (:

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Old 08-15-2008, 07:55 PM

i totally agree Amiiu.it does seem i don't have any cheek bones so for now on i need to draw the cheek bones.thanks everyone for the tips and the help
i thank everyone soooo much
;) :) :D

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#21
Old 08-21-2008, 04:45 AM

I like them, they are cute. I just saw you are 13. you are gonna be a good artist.

 


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