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-   -   Criticize my new art piece, pwease? '3' [last update:28/11/08] (https://www.menewsha.com/forum/showthread.php?t=105914)

leasfy 12-04-2008 06:05 PM

havent done art recently since currently my friends "kidnap" me xD
oh btw people remaja is my other acc

PkingSora 12-10-2008 11:17 PM

Very nice pieces, some of them are hard to see ( On this computer) but from what I can see, you have a really niffty style. I rally do love the way you do your hair and your eyes are so lively! i suppose I could suggest a more show of hands in your images, hands really amplify whatever you are doing.

remaja 12-12-2008 11:20 AM

oh!ya!gimme suggestions!

MurasakiCrown 12-15-2008 04:11 PM

Oh, very nice stuff! I see my mule on the front page~ XD

Well, it looks like most crits have already been made, so I'll refrain from typing you a novel XD

One thing for the first one though, and this is just because it's the very first one I saw, is the abdominal muscles are way too defined. I'd make the lines lighter and softer on those. Otherwise it will start reminding me of the part of DBZ that scares me o.e


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