Okay so, i drew these a long time ago. but i would love to know how people think of them.

http://i728.photobucket.com/albums/w...scan0001-4.jpg
The dudes head is shaped weird, i know that.

One of your images is stretching the page so I will have to change that one into a link.


You have a really nice style! You need some work of anatomy but the overall feel of the images is very distinct and appealing.

Originally Posted by PlatinumChild

One of your images is stretching the page so I will have to change that one into a link.


You have a really nice style! You need some work of anatomy but the overall feel of the images is very distinct and appealing.

Okay, sorry bout the page stretching. new here. ;P
Thanks for the critique though. ^^

Haha, it's totally okay <3
And you're welcome ^^

I agree with PlatinumChild, you should work on the anatomy. You should also be careful in how you angle your people (I'm saying this as I am looking at the third picture). Make sure that you also are giving other things shadows and highlights too (I'm looking at the first picture), so that they don't look too flat (the choker(?) on her neck looks too flat). And finally (with the second picture), try to shade in a small, circular motion so that you don't have to deal with the white lines (it makes the picture look very scratchy).
Your work looks lovely, I have to say it really catches the eye.

awesome art!!keep it up ;3

They're Beautiful!!
:D

Very cool i tried to draw stuff like that but i couldnt o.o its hard

Cool ^^ There is a good portion of fantasy into their style...
Yes, you need to work on anatomy, coloring and hair...
But you OWN the clothes in the last pic, and the face in the first pic is also pretty good - good work ^^
And I really like scene kids, I'm some of a scene kid myself X3

I enjoy the colors you used on the first picture. ^_^
But be careful and make sure that the head is pointing the same direction as the bust. You're marker work is a little bit sloppy but I don't work with markers too often so I shouldn't be talking about that. xD For the second picture, something feels very odd about the neck or the chin line...the general area. I'm not too sure what's bugging me about it though. It made me giggle on the inside at first though~ I think it was that cute little smiley face you put in there. ;D
For the third picture, the clothing folds appear to be a bit awkward. But besides that, I loooove the shirt. Also, many people don't stand with their feet like that. I've tried it, and it hurts for me. Dx
But, overall, I think you've got a very nice style developing, it's very eye-pleasing. Just brush up a bit on your anatomy.

The first pic is nicely done. I tell ya, it's the best out of the three.

The second one (the linked one) looks squished. I don't know if you had the picture in an angle or not so I can't give any comment.

The third one (I WILL comment on this one) is un-proportional. He's a little off. A good idea is to use the head to body ratio. From what I see, it looks like you were trying to do a 1:6 character (which means his total height is 6 heads). I can't really tell you much about the ratio strategy because I don't use it anymore, but I think it will really help you.

I don't have much advice other than what some of the other people on here have said.
Practice Practice Practice and learn your anatomy! (it works magic I promise!)