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Give me your thoughts, yesyes?
Program used: Photoshop CS4 Extended.
Reference: Gaia avatar http://i734.photobucket.com/albums/w...obye_pantz.png Well? Bad or good. I'm coming to you guys, because I might open a shop here or gaia. It will probably be here. c: But your thoughts are appreciated. |
I think it shows promise ^_^
I like that you used similar colors for the outlines instead of just using black however I think it was not wise to blur the outline of the hair- it has an inconsistency with the rest of your drawing (where everything else is clearly defined) ((although I do admit that the only reason I ever use blur is for the shadow's lines but even then I detest it)) I also like the music bar in the background ^_^ - if I were you I would try experimenting more with changing the line size to emphasize borders versus accents/folds. |
Yeah, I agree with the above.
The blurred hair looks kind of sloppy. Try using a smaller brush size for finer details as well, like the eyes. The lashes/dark edges on the eyes are a little too big in my opinion. As far as drawing goes, maybe try drawing the face a bit bigger, or at least make it so that you can see the face a bit more. (: |
I kinda thought the blurred hair makes the character look crazier. xD
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I like the idea behind it, I suck at creativity. I'm envious of you for that.
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I agree with what's already been said above. the music bar is awesome! :) and i really like the colors & facial expression, it's a really fun drawing!
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Try using different width's and sizes for your brush strokes. I think it will give it a more pro look to it. However, colouring as such in Photoshop does take time, so I say keep it up. Learn, look at examples. Nothing's wrong with that:D
Perhaps not blur it as much around the edges. Very nice music notes tho! and better than I can stand to do on photoshop. |
hmmm
looks like L. With multicolored eyes. And no pants. He's cuteeee! Or she. There's a bow. I'm genderconfused! Lol! |
Lol, he looks crazy.
I think it looks just fine, although it could have some work. I agree with what melody said, it does makes him look crazy :P So it kinda fits. The folds however do seem like they need some fixing, like some more defyning the folds would do. |
I like it, but yeah, the fuzzy hair is rather odd and sticks out.
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