Squishy's Artz C+C Please?
 

Hey, anyone want to help me by criticizing my arts?

Or at least

I wanted to know if these styles would interest you >>;;

http://www.menewsha.com/forum/member...cture17733.jpg

http://img526.imageshack.us/img526/7540/starcatcher.png

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i love them both!
the first is really cute
and the second is superb
i love all the swirls

The first one is cute, not much to critique there.
I think you went a little swirl-crazy on the second one, it's a bit too much in my opinion. The shading is also lacking. I do like the style it was drawn in though, and the cloud is pretty impressive. :)

XDD

@Esteji: Thank you~

XDDD

I really wouldn't say 'cute' to describe the first one Ou<

@Hamlet:

XDD...I was just trying out really odd styles. :P

The swirls and simplicity were part of teh....style? lol

But yeah, these styles don't really give much room for criticism do they? o_x

Wanna tell me where my shading is lacking? o3o

Btw.....did u draw ur siggy, cuz its amazing? o3o

Your freebies (lol....i stalk'd ur threads just nao. :3) are also amazing...wonderful style. :3

Squishy: Hmm I think it's mostly because it all appears to be one shade of grey. Since she is in a moonlit sky you could've added a lot more blue tone to it to make it more interesting. :)

Gasp! Stalker! Haha, thank you though. Yeah I drew my siggy art, it needs updating but I am lazy ;_;

@Itsuna: LOL, ty. :D

@Hamlet: Actually, I kinda threw the background there as an afterthought...and then shaded as a afterthought too. :O....and then got too lazy to do more than that one shade....ehehee

and I used the multiply tool instead of picking out individual shades. *lazy*

But yeah, I'm thinking of putting this on a shirt, but I can't decide whether to get rid of the bg or not. >O<

XDD....I love ur lineart and ur shading and ur style~~ *dies of jealousy*

XDDD

If you completed the tail of the cloud and deleted the moon, I think it would make a fine shirt design! :D

And thank you for the compliments~

XDD...That was what I was sort of thinking too......

Only problem is, I'm using my own paper transfer thinger...and I don't know if its clear or not >O<

and then I don't know what color shirt to put it on either. :O

Oh, and ur welcome....:33

lol...do u have a deviantart? o3o

I personally think those look great!
It's interesting to see those three different styles; love them all!
The 'chibi' like is very cute, I actually like how uhm.. thin she looks; usually you encounter very round and uhm, oval-looking characters.
The shading is very simple and neat, it's nice :)

@Mes: XDDD

I can draw those round chibis too. :P

LOL

now its anorexic chibis ftw. :P

lol...iono

Thanks for the comments. <3

Sorry Squishy, I didn't see that you had replied! :(

I think a powder blue or even a white shirt would match the graphic well.
And yeah I do have a dA but it's full of lame old stuff I'm not too proud of, haha...

@Hamlet: XO

The thinger that I printed on made all the white transparent....and I ended up printing it on a blue shirt, and it turned out terrible. :O

I did the weird chibi on top on a white shirt, and it turned out great, cept I forgot to print it mirror image. -_-;;

Aww...XO

@Desire: Thank you~ :D

Oh, that's too bad. A white shirt is the best option then :D

I love that people in your style are kind of boneless, heehee. It's very cute! and original.