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napuua 07-10-2009 01:05 AM

Attempt at lineless art.
 
I tried drawing some line less art today. I'd like some constructive criticism. ; ;

http://i761.photobucket.com/albums/x...chii/crap2.png

HamletSpamlet 07-10-2009 01:41 AM

Aww, she's sweet looking. :D

I think her facial features could use a little more definition, they're kinda blurry right now. It's pretty easily fixed by simply going down a few brush sizes and filling in the details.I think her hair could use a little shine too, to match her eyes and face.

Very nice for a first attempt!

napuua 07-10-2009 02:08 AM

I see what you mean. Thanks for the tip!
Thank you c: It was pretty crappy at first, but I recolored the skin and redid the eyes and it came out better.

wish 07-11-2009 10:36 AM

i adoreee the eyes + the cute shine of her cheeks. though like hamlet said her other facial features such as her nose and eyes are a little too blurry. ^^;;

it'd be nice if her hair had some white shine too. :D<3

lunanuova 07-11-2009 12:49 PM

those eyes are gorgeous (:

MoodyBats 07-13-2009 06:08 AM

she's adorable!keep up the good work.sadly im not such a good crtique person so i just say friendly compliments ^^

logostak 07-15-2009 10:38 PM

That's seriously amazing. I love her hair, eyes, face, everything! She looks very sweet and harmless. Maybe a little more highlighting to her hair would really bring out the colors? :3

Devilfern 07-17-2009 08:32 PM

Ahhh, so soft! She looks like a flower petal! <3

I think you've got a great unique idea for lineless art. (I always wanted to try it too, but I don't have the courage :o) I really like this.


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