As you can see in the title, I've been drawing a lot lately, and I haven't really gotten any critique. Well, I have actually, but it's just my mom saying 'Oh, that's beautyful darling!', so that don't really count in my opinion. :b

So here's some of the things I've made:






I know that the eyes and mouth in this one are a bit strangely placed, but I decided not to change it because I felt that it gave it some personality.

There's more that I need critiqued, some full body and colored scetches, but I haven't got it on my computer right now, so this is what I've got so far. :)

Okay they are extremely awesome!^^
P.S No reason for critisisum at the mo, they're great.

You need to practice more on your anatomy; that was the first thing I noticed strait off the bat. Your attention to detail is good, but you really need to focus more on your anatomy.

it's not drawed, it's Drawn
:]

Good work though.

I really like your work! ^^
in the first:
since her head is tilted to the side, the eye farther away from the viewer should look narrower (like instead of the eyes looking like this: ( o ) || ( o ), it would look like (o)|| ( o )... do i make sense? ^^;; )--including the pupil. However, remember that the eyes need to be the same size, height-wize.
the nose should also be closer to the edge of the farther cheek since her head isnt turned that far. Try to draw a line upwards from the center of the chin; that line should divide the nose between the actual tip and the nostril mark. Also the mouth seems to be a little low down on her face, and her jaw line ends a little low. Usually, I like to draw my cheekbones about as high as the bottom of the ear, where the jaw ends. So, the jaw line should flow up to about the height of the cheek bone, if a little lower.
in the second:
everything looks really good; your eyes are about the same size and everything is very symmetrical, which is great. However, her face seems smooshed below the bangs; try to visualize the entire head; when you do, in this drawing it looks like the forehead is the same size as the face. try and raise the eyes a little bit or bring the entire face upwards on the head. Also, her shoulders are a little wide for a girl's; ours tend to be narrower; about the same width as the hips.
in the third:
well, this one is really very stylized; her neck is narrow, but it looks good because it is offset by the bigness of the eyes, which look a little wide but good because they're so large.
Aside from that, you really are a great artist! I love how well you draw the cloth and the niqueness of the designs of these women. ^^ its just as Link said; you need a little help with the anatomy of the face. I guess i just....said a lot more. xD;; Anyway, great job on this and keep drawing! I'd love to see some more of your full body pieces, if you need critiques on those too. ^^ send me a pm if you need anything, and once again, good luck!

I like them a lot.
The first drawing's clothes are a little odd/weird looking. And her nostril is kinda too far away from her nose. She also looks cross-eyed or like she has a lazy eye. ^^;
I'm done.
The second and third drawing are beautifully done <3

Thanks everyone for the critique! I really appreciate it. :yes: And, yes your quite right. I have to work on my anatomy. I hadn't really noticed that about the eyes in the first one, but I can see what you're talking about. It is looking a bit... strange. :b

Lol, you're quite right, 'drawn' it is. I thought I had checked this post for errors, but oh well. I'm always working on improving my english. ^^

But thanks again for your view. :)

Originally Posted by iSteve

it's not drawed, it's Drawn
:]

Good work though.

Technically it'd be drawn, since it wasn't a proper noun nor the first word in the sentence. :lol: Anyone who actually speaks a second language, even if they make a few mistakes with our odd verbs, is good in my books! :thumbsup:

But onto the real point of being in.
I think you have the anime styles down quite well. The whole eyes/nose/placement looks fairly correct.

Maybe you could try drawing the body more often? I use to only draw the head because I was afraid of trying to draw the body. But the body adds a lot. :D

Edit: The necks look a little thin. This may be the whole anime perspective, but generally the neck starts at the bottom of the ears. I know it may seem at times the neck looks a little thick, but that's generally anatomy.

Keep up the good work though and continue practicing! ^___^

Very cute stuff <3 I like the way you draw your eyes. The faces have good detail. =)

Originally Posted by Some Random Randomness

Technically it'd be drawn, since it wasn't a proper noun nor the first word in the sentence. :lol: Anyone who actually speaks a second language, even if they make a few mistakes with our odd verbs, is good in my books! :thumbsup:

But onto the real point of being in.
I think you have the anime styles down quite well. The whole eyes/nose/placement looks fairly correct.

Maybe you could try drawing the body more often? I use to only draw the head because I was afraid of trying to draw the body. But the body adds a lot. :D

Edit: The necks look a little thin. This may be the whole anime perspective, but generally the neck starts at the bottom of the ears. I know it may seem at times the neck looks a little thick, but that's generally anatomy.

Keep up the good work though and continue practicing! ^___^

Lol, thanks, I did get an A in my english exam :b But I actally draws the body more often than the face. That's why I thought I'd need more critique on faces. And hands... But I just suck at drawing hands. XD - But I'll post some full body drawings next week, to get them critiqued too. :3

Originally Posted by N I G H T

Very cute stuff <3 I like the way you draw your eyes. The faces have good detail. =)

Thank you. ^^

Originally Posted by beagirl1227

I really like your work! ^^
in the first:
since her head is tilted to the side, the eye farther away from the viewer should look narrower (like instead of the eyes looking like this: ( o ) || ( o ), it would look like (o)|| ( o )... do i make sense? ^^;; )--including the pupil. However, remember that the eyes need to be the same size, height-wize.
the nose should also be closer to the edge of the farther cheek since her head isnt turned that far. Try to draw a line upwards from the center of the chin; that line should divide the nose between the actual tip and the nostril mark. Also the mouth seems to be a little low down on her face, and her jaw line ends a little low. Usually, I like to draw my cheekbones about as high as the bottom of the ear, where the jaw ends. So, the jaw line should flow up to about the height of the cheek bone, if a little lower.
in the second:
everything looks really good; your eyes are about the same size and everything is very symmetrical, which is great. However, her face seems smooshed below the bangs; try to visualize the entire head; when you do, in this drawing it looks like the forehead is the same size as the face. try and raise the eyes a little bit or bring the entire face upwards on the head. Also, her shoulders are a little wide for a girl's; ours tend to be narrower; about the same width as the hips.
in the third:
well, this one is really very stylized; her neck is narrow, but it looks good because it is offset by the bigness of the eyes, which look a little wide but good because they're so large.
Aside from that, you really are a great artist! I love how well you draw the cloth and the niqueness of the designs of these women. ^^ its just as Link said; you need a little help with the anatomy of the face. I guess i just....said a lot more. xD;; Anyway, great job on this and keep drawing! I'd love to see some more of your full body pieces, if you need critiques on those too. ^^ send me a pm if you need anything, and once again, good luck!

I find that I agree with Bea on most of the points that need working in your drawings. They are quite lovely, so your mom wasn't lying. But there are aspects that we can always improve upon. I think if you take her suggestions to heart you'll feel your drawing improving a lot. Keep up the good work! I hope you get even better. (:

your art is sooo kool!keep it up and keep practicing.^^im not good either but im progressing and i think you will progress too :3

Originally Posted by melody xyelle

I find that I agree with Bea on most of the points that need working in your drawings. They are quite lovely, so your mom wasn't lying. But there are aspects that we can always improve upon. I think if you take her suggestions to heart you'll feel your drawing improving a lot. Keep up the good work! I hope you get even better. (:

Originally Posted by TheDesireMistress

your art is sooo kool!keep it up and keep practicing.^^im not good either but im progressing and i think you will progress too :3

Thank you ^^ I'll do my best to use the critique you've all given me.